Your description is.. ermm.. well i will just say it could use work.. and thats being nice.
If you want, just PM me to accept this offer, and i will download your mod, try it out, look through it, and make a much better, more detailed, more informative and organized description / readme for you that tells everything professionally. Just look at any of my mods, or more specifically, my resource 5 Blank Readme's for an example of a more.. professional style of description. I know some people do not like to do this, but making it look professional is half the mods purpose. If you spent all your time making a killer mod, something that is just awesome, then why wouldnt you have a professional description? If a description is jumbled together and looks unprofessional than that is what people are, for the most part, going to assume about the mod. Its all about the "Hook" and the "first impression." You want to give people an excuse to look at your mod, a reason to download, and a need to play it. You want them, to want you.
Again, if you would like me to write it in a more professional way, then PM me and i would be more than happy to help. And, hopefully, once done, you can use the way i wrote it as a referance to future mods. I say this as constructive critisism, as i see you have potential, i would hate it to go to waste by having people not download and see your talent because they were given a.. not so good first impression. I hope this helps, im not trying to insult or critisize negatively as much as offer advice. Although jumbled together, the mod still sounds good and promising. This is why im offering to do this, because you look like you have something to offer to the modding community, and i would love to see others see that as well. ">
Be well, sleep well, fight well, live long. ~Ranokoa
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If you want, just PM me to accept this offer, and i will download your mod, try it out, look through it, and make a much better, more detailed, more informative and organized description / readme for you that tells everything professionally. Just look at any of my mods, or more specifically, my resource 5 Blank Readme's for an example of a more.. professional style of description. I know some people do not like to do this, but making it look professional is half the mods purpose. If you spent all your time making a killer mod, something that is just awesome, then why wouldnt you have a professional description? If a description is jumbled together and looks unprofessional than that is what people are, for the most part, going to assume about the mod. Its all about the "Hook" and the "first impression." You want to give people an excuse to look at your mod, a reason to download, and a need to play it. You want them, to want you.
Again, if you would like me to write it in a more professional way, then PM me and i would be more than happy to help. And, hopefully, once done, you can use the way i wrote it as a referance to future mods. I say this as constructive critisism, as i see you have potential, i would hate it to go to waste by having people not download and see your talent because they were given a.. not so good first impression. I hope this helps, im not trying to insult or critisize negatively as much as offer advice. Although jumbled together, the mod still sounds good and promising. This is why im offering to do this, because you look like you have something to offer to the modding community, and i would love to see others see that as well.
Be well, sleep well, fight well, live long.
~Ranokoa