克林特从很久前就偷偷潜入艾米丽的家,且一直躲在房间一角偷窥。 原文:"Emily, doesn't it bother you that Clint was in your house and you didn't know about it?$3",
克林特在看到农夫与艾米丽跳舞后,就给农夫写信威胁“如果你还接近艾米丽……你也不想镇上多一个出意外的可怜人吧”。 原文:"Farmer @,^^I noticed you being quite 'friendly' with Emily at the Spring Flower Dance... maybe you feel that's all it was.^^But there's something you need to understand. I've known Emily for a long time, long before you arrived here. I’ve always been there for her, and I'm not going anywhere.^^So, while you might think you want to be MORE than friends, if you know what's good for you, and what's best for Emily -- you'll stop trying to win her over. Consider this a friendly warning... it would be a shame if you fell victim to a terrible accident.^^Sincerely,^Someone Who Knows What's Best for Emily",
逮捕克林特的事件中: 如上,克林特从很久前就偷偷潜入艾米丽的家,且一直躲在房间一角偷窥。 而当艾米丽在家中发现偷窥的克林特时,只是信了克林特说只是在欣赏艾米丽的盆栽树,艾米丽还感谢他能欣赏她的审美。就算警察提出来说克林特这是非法入室,她也只是说:也还好吧,谢谢提议。 原文:"Oh, I think it's fine, but thank you for asking! I usually try to assume people have good intentions.",
然后克林特被关之后,艾米丽经常来拜托农夫给克林特送宝石来冥想,就像完全不知道克林特犯了什么错一样。 原文:"I'm actually happy for Clint. I hope he uses this time to medidate and focus on himself.#$b#Here, will you give this to him? This stone radiates an energy that is beneficial for meditation.#$b#Don't tell him it's from me, I don't want him to get the wrong idea.[68]$s",
Hello, I am the original author of the mod. I hope you are able to translate my response and understand the same way I was able to understand yours.
The reason this event was not translated is my fault, not Luo7710. I copied and modified two original stardew valley events including the english translation without substituting strings that could be easily translated. So they don't appear in the i18n file that was translated. The other copied event is Sam's band show.
I will work on changing this in my next update and then hopefully Luo7710 can update the translation. Apologies and thank you for trying my mod.
So that's it. I was able to spot this issue by chance because this mod wasn't loaded in a new save file, and I happened to have just completed Emily's quest. Since there were no English dialogues when I went through this plot before, and there was a new character, Shannon, in the plot animation, I was certain that there was a problem here. Thank you again to the original author and translator for your hard work. I really like this mod and hope it will get better and better in the future!
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先说结论,我可能不会再更新1.2以后版本的汉化了。
我刚刚完成了1.2.1版本的汉化,通过汉化的文本了解了新增的所有剧情,我现在内心很复杂。
总而言之,这个模组已经脱离了原版人物的设定(OOC)和有其他一些我不太适应的设定,编造出他们不可能做的那些“罪行”,为了关人而关人了。
详细说的话涉及剧透,所以我给它设了个剧透开关,不介意OOC的人可以跳过这一段:
我:
逮捕潘姆的事件中:
农夫给开车的潘姆送了一瓶啤酒,然后潘姆喝了之后开车,被抓酒驾。
事后警察也觉得这件事感觉像农夫为了自己开车故意把潘姆关进去。
原因:
我接受不了这种疑似诱导人酒驾的钓鱼执法,我以为关潘姆是农夫正常举报潘姆酒驾,但我实在无法接受塑造出的这种农夫形象。
克林特:
逮捕克林特的事件中:
克林特从很久前就偷偷潜入艾米丽的家,且一直躲在房间一角偷窥。
原文:"Emily, doesn't it bother you that Clint was in your house and you didn't know about it?$3",
克林特在看到农夫与艾米丽跳舞后,就给农夫写信威胁“如果你还接近艾米丽……你也不想镇上多一个出意外的可怜人吧”。
原文:"Farmer @,^^I noticed you being quite 'friendly' with Emily at the Spring Flower Dance... maybe you feel that's all it was.^^But there's something you need to understand. I've known Emily for a long time, long before you arrived here. I’ve always been there for her, and I'm not going anywhere.^^So, while you might think you want to be MORE than friends, if you know what's good for you, and what's best for Emily -- you'll stop trying to win her over. Consider this a friendly warning... it would be a shame if you fell victim to a terrible accident.^^Sincerely,^Someone Who Knows What's Best for Emily",
原因:
克林特从来不敢接近艾米丽,和艾米丽说话也结结巴巴的,甚至送礼都不敢亲自去,怎么可能敢做这种事,而且他还有铁匠铺要经营怎么有时间搁这一直偷窥。
在艾米丽服装疗法事件中,克林特看到农夫和艾米丽亲密也只是说了一句“我打扰你们了么?”,然后就失落地走了。就算后续和艾米丽结婚等,他也不会来阻挠农夫和艾米丽的恋情。更别说他的懦弱大家都有目共睹,这种人怎么可能敢给情敌写威胁信?
艾米丽:
逮捕克林特的事件中:
如上,克林特从很久前就偷偷潜入艾米丽的家,且一直躲在房间一角偷窥。
而当艾米丽在家中发现偷窥的克林特时,只是信了克林特说只是在欣赏艾米丽的盆栽树,艾米丽还感谢他能欣赏她的审美。就算警察提出来说克林特这是非法入室,她也只是说:也还好吧,谢谢提议。
原文:"Oh, I think it's fine, but thank you for asking! I usually try to assume people have good intentions.",
然后克林特被关之后,艾米丽经常来拜托农夫给克林特送宝石来冥想,就像完全不知道克林特犯了什么错一样。
原文:"I'm actually happy for Clint. I hope he uses this time to medidate and focus on himself.#$b#Here, will you give this to him? This stone radiates an energy that is beneficial for meditation.#$b#Don't tell him it's from me, I don't want him to get the wrong idea.[68]$s",
原因:
艾米丽是善良,不是未经世事的傻白甜!
在父母都出行的情况下,她一个人去酒馆打工补贴家用,照顾好了大小姐脾气的妹妹,家事也被她打理得很好。
哪怕了解她一点点,也知道她是一个成熟的人。哪怕不提上面这些点,她可以代表自己原谅克林特,但和她一起住的妹妹呢?万一有人入室对妹妹做不好的事怎么办?
这个模组的名字是法律与秩序 law and order ,但以上这些剧情让我感受不到一点法律和秩序,它只是为了让独裁的农夫报复自己讨厌的人找出一些冠冕堂皇的理由,为此甚至编造一堆原本的他们根本不会犯下的罪。
或许只是因为我自己更喜欢程序正义而已,我自己最讨厌的是德米,但我不可能为了关他而捏造他在做非法实验,因为原版根本没有这个迹象,德米平时的对话,甚至发布的任务也确实很多都是为了鹈鹕镇的自然。(非法实验是原模组评论区里面讨厌德米的人说的他的罪行)
或许作者写出这些内容只是对某些角色的了解不深,或许他只是想实现粉丝们的愿望,或许只是他本身更喜欢傻白甜的人,或许他本身就决定做这样一个每个人都不可能独善其身的模组,但对我来说还是坚持不了了。
为了防杠:
OOC 模组多了去了:是的,R18模组,很多病娇模组,换头模组个顶个的OOC,但它会在封面,标题,详情写好内容和预警。不想玩,不喜欢的人一眼就知道它不适合自己下载。
但这个模组1.1版本以前,关皮埃尔和刘易斯的剧情虽是原创,但人设剧情完全基于原版(比如皮埃尔欺诈消费者,跟别人说农夫的作物是自己种的。举报刘易斯的金像涉嫌贪污)作者完全不提说他们会OOC。
游戏而已,你米线太高了:我能在给他爱当五星好市民,能在群星不把人当人,但星露谷对我来说就是纯朴而美好的游戏。而且和上面的理由一样,模组也没说明这些点,跟伪装成纯爱本的牛头人一样把纯爱战神骗进去杀。
我发表这个并不是为了批判原作者和喜欢这些剧情的人,毕竟作者也是为爱发电,这个模组完全免费。但我的汉化也是为爱发电,现在的它也已经不能让我爱它了(所以以前更新,甚至第一次的800+条对话,都是我除了吃饭睡觉都在汉化,一两天完成,但这个用了双倍时间,因为我有很多时候都在怀疑自己是不是误解了他们的语气和意图,结果发现就是我想的那样。)
如果下个版本还是这个样子,这个汉化会被我弃用。到那时其他人可以基于我的汉化去更新文本发表模组,但必须在MOD介绍里提到我这个汉化和我的名字。
The reason this event was not translated is my fault, not Luo7710. I copied and modified two original stardew valley events including the english translation without substituting strings that could be easily translated. So they don't appear in the i18n file that was translated. The other copied event is Sam's band show.
I will work on changing this in my next update and then hopefully Luo7710 can update the translation. Apologies and thank you for trying my mod.
谢谢反馈
(1.0.1翻译只针对原MOD的1.0.3版本,如果作者新做了i18n可能会失效)
Thank you again to the original author and translator for your hard work. I really like this mod and hope it will get better and better in the future!
原来是这样,我能发现这个问题也是巧合,因为这个mod不是用新开的档加载的,而我碰巧又做完了艾米丽的这个任务。因为以前的过这个剧情的时候,都没出现有英文对话的情况,再加上剧情动画里有莎伦这个新角色,所以我才肯定是这里出现了问题。
再次感谢原作者和翻译的辛苦工作,我非常喜欢这个mod,希望之后会越来越棒!