Cool idea. Some edits for the description to improve readability/flow.
"The Dwemer are a lost race, builders of technologically advanced and well-secured cities across Tamriel. They can throw a deadly self-made steam, build automatons and as engineers receive a 20% bonus at forges."
Alternatively, you could remove 'well-secured' from the first sentence and keep the rest of the original: "The Dwemer are a lost race, builders of advanced technological cities across Tamriel" etc etc.
The original sentence isn't too bad though. Even "a deadly self made steam" isn't so bad---just clunky. It's "as engineers has a 20% bonus ..." that feels like an outright typo. Change to 'have' or 'receive'.
I have been playing for the Dwemer race (still old version 1.0) for a very long time and I really like it. But I did not expect a new update. Everything suited me so. I bow to the Dwemer, their skill and talent. Thanks for the update!
Somting is Fishi wen you Outsit form Helgen Keep My vison Starte to Blure out ( Go Back in the Dark all too Normal ) Is that a Normal Thing Like yeah Dwarfen Eyes are not used too be in Bright Light thing ?
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"The Dwemer are a lost race, builders of technologically advanced and well-secured cities across Tamriel. They can throw
adeadly self-made steam, build automatons and as engineers receive a 20% bonus at forges."Alternatively, you could remove 'well-secured' from the first sentence and keep the rest of the original: "The Dwemer are a lost race, builders of advanced technological cities across Tamriel" etc etc.
The original sentence isn't too bad though. Even "a deadly self made steam" isn't so bad---just clunky. It's "as engineers has a 20% bonus ..." that feels like an outright typo. Change to 'have' or 'receive'.