I normally don't like to pick apart someone else's creation but since you asked, there are some things I think need some changes. Her nose is much too large. It needs to be narrower and not protrude from the so much' The jaw height is a bit too lowand gives her a more masculine and older look than is appropriate. I think slightly fuller lips would help and a narrower chin. I am at a nit of a loss for describing a fix for the other problem and that is, she looks too old. She is portrayed as being quite young and this doesn't quite fit. I think it is a combination of the nose,jaw and chin and mouth that do it but others may have a better way to make her look younger too. The eyes and brows seem fine as does the hair and had you not named her and described her as that character she would be fine. That character is very attractive and very feminine and retains a bit of girlish look which is very hard to capture . Good work though and I look forward to seeing more of her.
Good job thus far! You've gotten close, and the eyes and nose are especially impressive because I know from my own attempts what a pain in the ass they are. Just come back to it in a few days with fresh eyes and tweak from there; my first adjustment would be to make the mouth a little less wide, and the lips a smidge thicker.
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But I did some minor changes. Hope you like what you see?
P.S. dont make elfie ;)
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