Thanks for the comments guys!! At school currently so must be brief but I added a more detailed description. I will work on making that better later but at least it has one now :3
Hello there newbie and welcome to the world of modding!
It's nice that you're trying to share your mods with us but I think a description of the mod would be quite important, most people only look at the description(in which the videos usually are put) and images.
If this is your first attempt at a dungeon, I'm impressed. I did watch the video, but you still need to get a description up and more screenshots if you are going to have people try this.
Watching the video I have a couple of comments. First, I hoped you noticed that the majority of your chests are backwards. That is a pet peeve of mine and I know many others. Also, this is a fairly small dungeon and it would be nice to see it expanded a bit. For realism, since your dungeon is under a lake, it would make sense that there would be some water leakage into the dungeon. So dripping water, puddles, etc. would make it feel more real for its location. I also agree with another comment about there not being much clutter. This is an ancient dungeon, but it looks like Merry Maids cleans there once a week. Not much rubble or dirt piles or anything. You can eat off the floor!
Anyway, just some suggestions. But again, great job if this is your first dungeon. I'm very impressed!
First a better description would be nice. Because lack of description I was not interested, but when I read some posts there was some talk about a video so I looked through it.
Some quick thoughts: I loved to location and that it is hidden underwater, for an explorer like me that was jackpot. The dungeon it self was nothing special, and I did not like the "free" expensive loot that was there. One goal I have is to make great item very very rare to find and this mod dont play well with that, maybe 1 great item would be ok. The placement of mobs was good, it was nice for a change to be attacked right away. Some empty spaces is ok, I liked that it was not crowded, after all it is a tomb underwater that have been there for a long time. I kind of liked the story but it could have been made more interesting, more info on the location and Alvos and why it is at the bottom of a lake would be cool. A small quest would be great. Personally I think it would be really cool to add a rescuing quest to the tomb, that you end up rescuing someone that have been trapped down there
Good luck with your mod, I put it on track and added it to my "work in progress" folder. Im looking forward to new updates
Where to begin really, there isn't much of a description, the only thing i can make up from the 1 screenshot is that its in lake ilinalta, many others wouldn't know ^^, some direction to it, by either a courier/book or anything, would be appreciated, atm it's pretty much a guess of where to go, it's nice you made a video of it ofcourse, but for someone who doesn't want to get possible spoilers or anything it doesn't help into finding where the dungeon is .
1). I do like the location though, its quite original, the outside area looks nice, also the dungeon layout itself isn't too bad. 2). First thing i've noticed, there is no dungeon music, it's missing ambiance without it. 3). There are some issues with the lighting, in quite a few places its glitching, or there is no lighting at all, and it's not dark as someone mentioned, ive watched your video, and you're using a enb, for others that don't as myself, it's a completely different effect, i got skyrim's gamma on 20/30% on the slider, and imaginator on 0%, even with no gamma increase the place is bright enough, so yeah this still has quite some work left, i would advise to try your mod without a enb , ill add some screenshots to show you.
http://imgur.com/a/1BkUW
4). The dungeon feels empty, especially the upper level, there are a few skeletons/draugr, but no draugr that wake up or skeletons in the ''maze'' area. 5). No misc items through out the dungeon, it's like going to a wedding while wearing shorts and sneakers, it's missing appearance. 6). that final room is with the magical effect is pretty cool tbh, those wights need some balancing tho, same as the boss, or classify it as a 25+ dungeon. 7). the spike trap after the boss room doesn't fully spin, so you wont get hit even if you rush through, and i would just place a regular stepping stone trap, once you ''dress'' the dungeon better. . As for the dungeon exit, i would just have it lead up to somewhere els in the lake, or to the shore, as when you finish the dungeon, you have to walk pretty much all the way back to where you came from. 9). Overall you can shorten some of the hallways, mainly at the entrance, it doesn't really have to be long, also move the bandits up a bit from the entrance, as soon as you come out of the water you get attacked.
Your dungeon definitely has a lot of potential, it's just a work in progress atm, once you work out the lighting/music, and then just start dressing it up so it does feel like a dungeon, its a major step in the right direction, then adding some more story to it, and a starting quest etc, this will be a top notch dungeon/quest mod, i do like the idea .
I can assume the tomb is at the bottom of lake Ilinalta just north of Lakeview Manor/ Since there is a ruin there, and guarded by a few Slather fish! You would need to be in "god" mode or have unlimited underwater breathing capabilities! We need a bit better explanation of this mod if we are expected to try it!
AAAHHH the video tells it all! Very nice, have to try it! OK...very nicely done! Lots of side tunnels, plenty of action. Nice looting! True its in a very "different" location than you would expect a tomb but because it's entrance is in a "logical" place its certainly a well preserved and hidden tomb! Nice job!
@ Indycurt, look at the videos section! @ ShadyCornerz, I agree with Indycurt! (And Bakerboy1960)! ________________________________ You've done a great work on this! I've watched at your video, and your mod deserve more pictures and a better (and a more long) description! You can post a link at your video in the description, for example, ShadyCornerz! Love and congrats from France! Some screenshots!
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after enter dungeon swim underwater, there is a small place with lighting flash. you have to do something, idea is good, but mod need improvement.
It's nice that you're trying to share your mods with us but I think a description of the mod would be quite important, most people only look at the description(in which the videos usually are put) and images.
Anyways, good luck
Watching the video I have a couple of comments. First, I hoped you noticed that the majority of your chests are backwards. That is a pet peeve of mine and I know many others. Also, this is a fairly small dungeon and it would be nice to see it expanded a bit. For realism, since your dungeon is under a lake, it would make sense that there would be some water leakage into the dungeon. So dripping water, puddles, etc. would make it feel more real for its location. I also agree with another comment about there not being much clutter. This is an ancient dungeon, but it looks like Merry Maids cleans there once a week. Not much rubble or dirt piles or anything. You can eat off the floor!
Anyway, just some suggestions. But again, great job if this is your first dungeon. I'm very impressed!
First a better description would be nice. Because lack of description I was not interested, but when I read some posts there was some talk about a video so I looked through it.
Some quick thoughts:
I loved to location and that it is hidden underwater, for an explorer like me that was jackpot.
The dungeon it self was nothing special, and I did not like the "free" expensive loot that was there. One goal I have is to make great item very very rare to find and this mod dont play well with that, maybe 1 great item would be ok.
The placement of mobs was good, it was nice for a change to be attacked right away. Some empty spaces is ok, I liked that it was not crowded, after all it is a tomb underwater that have been there for a long time.
I kind of liked the story but it could have been made more interesting, more info on the location and Alvos and why it is at the bottom of a lake would be cool. A small quest would be great.
Personally I think it would be really cool to add a rescuing quest to the tomb, that you end up rescuing someone that have been trapped down there
Good luck with your mod, I put it on track and added it to my "work in progress" folder. Im looking forward to new updates
1). I do like the location though, its quite original, the outside area looks nice, also the dungeon layout itself isn't too bad.
2). First thing i've noticed, there is no dungeon music, it's missing ambiance without it.
3). There are some issues with the lighting, in quite a few places its glitching, or there is no lighting at all, and it's not dark as someone mentioned, ive watched your video, and you're using a enb, for others that don't as myself, it's a completely different effect, i got skyrim's gamma on 20/30% on the slider, and imaginator on 0%, even with no gamma increase the place is bright enough, so yeah this still has quite some work left, i would advise to try your mod without a enb
http://imgur.com/a/1BkUW
4). The dungeon feels empty, especially the upper level, there are a few skeletons/draugr, but no draugr that wake up or skeletons in the ''maze'' area.
5). No misc items through out the dungeon, it's like going to a wedding while wearing shorts and sneakers, it's missing appearance.
6). that final room is with the magical effect is pretty cool tbh, those wights need some balancing tho, same as the boss, or classify it as a 25+ dungeon.
7). the spike trap after the boss room doesn't fully spin, so you wont get hit even if you rush through, and i would just place a regular stepping stone trap, once you ''dress'' the dungeon better.
9). Overall you can shorten some of the hallways, mainly at the entrance, it doesn't really have to be long, also move the bandits up a bit from the entrance, as soon as you come out of the water you get attacked.
Your dungeon definitely has a lot of potential, it's just a work in progress atm, once you work out the lighting/music, and then just start dressing it up so it does feel like a dungeon, its a major step in the right direction, then adding some more story to it, and a starting quest etc, this will be a top notch dungeon/quest mod, i do like the idea
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Vlamm
well done
@ ShadyCornerz, I agree with Indycurt!
(And Bakerboy1960)!
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You've done a great work on this!
I've watched at your video, and your mod deserve more pictures and a better (and a more long) description!
You can post a link at your video in the description, for example, ShadyCornerz! Love and congrats from France!
Some screenshots!