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Bleeding - Part One

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23 comments

  1. Yfr
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    A good writer knows a pickle or two. You've just tickled and pickled me too by the way also, lols.
    Beautifully, written, shot, composed, and wonderful music. What a treat for the senses. Thankies. ^-^
    1. Kayol
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      Thanks for your lovely comment! It's always a pleasure to tickle my readers, as weird as that sounds
  2. kozakowy
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    Nice set. Love the closeups I wonder what is going to happen next
    1. Kayol
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      Thanks! I'm a sucker for closeups.
    2. kozakowy
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      Yeah, right, mhm, yup
  3. Lee5Lee
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    Ah, I'm so happy to see them not just alive, but somewhat jolly and I'm so happy that Saga can see again ^-^ Sithis and Night Mother were never my favorites (I believe my Champion of Cyrodiil held his dislike towards them, as well) and I would personally give Larkspur a medal for burning this dunmer courpse; and Saga being blinded was always like a bullet in the heart, so, yes, again, I'm really happy for them ^_______^

    It's good to see story going on, but I do know the struggle of choosing the right storyline. However I believe, no, I know, that you'll write the best continuation possible *^_^*
    1. Kayol
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      Believe it or not, but I've been planning Larkspur's involvement in the finale since the story gained some continuity. Same thing goes for Saga's blindness - after all, she couldn't get away unscathed. Carrying darkness so close to one's heart has to leave marks.
      Glad you liked the turn of events!

      Thank you for your trust, I'll try to make the continuation readable - but boy oh boy, is it difficult to decide upon the right direction!
  4. wolfgrimdark
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    Awesome post Kayol. I would go with Pratchett myself. Real life has ample horror, unfairness, and and tragedy to go around as it is.

    Loved these pictures. The grass and flowers seemed to work well with the mood of the writing.
    1. Kayol
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      Thing is, I always go with Pratchett (fitting since he's been the love of my life - in a non-creepy way, I swear! - for years). Most of the times I grasp at silver lining and expand it until the sky is clear, because I'm a sap. The idea of Goldman-like conclusion came out of nowhere, which makes it all the more intriguing. Well, I'll have to decide soon - I need something to be cryptic about in next installments
      Thanks! I love the tall grass - it takes a toll on performance, but it's worth it.
  5. SomewhatWindy
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    I often feel silent after watching one of your sets, followed by not really knowing what I would like to tell you about what I liked.
    Then it often fades into a endorsment, wich I think is somewhat meagre for a piece that I liked.
    So,.. I'll try and illustrate what I liked in the way I, and probably more, do best. With images.
    I hope you grasp what I mean since it is , obviously, an image what it did to me...
    1. Kayol
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      I really appreciate your feedback, no matter the way you express it! Very often words elude me when I comment on other people's works, so I share the sentiment.
      Thank you very much!
  6. gurleygirl
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    Beautifully versed. I enjoy your writing.
    The accompanying music nicely enforces the poignant mood of the narrative and images.
    Well done!! I look forward to the sequel.
    1. Kayol
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      Thanks a lot!
  7. Klaxoid
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    I look forward to the next part. I love this shot, it's very dramatic yet still at the same time. I makes me think of a windy early spring day when winter has yet to give up it's grasp, holding onto the cold winds jealously.

    1. Kayol
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      Now that's a cool description if I've ever seen one. Thanks!
  8. ista3
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    Another masterpiece from your hand and head
    1. Kayol
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      Thanks a bunch, Izzy!
  9. BlackMaid
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    Enjoyed it
    1. Kayol
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      That's great!
  10. Organonmodell
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    Go with Pratchett, he's always right.
    1. Kayol
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      True, true...