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The Fool's Eye - Part Three

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21 comments

  1. Kudix2627
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    Damn, this is deep and amazing at the same time, probably hte most illustrated story i have seen on here yet, its was soo good. I saw you aint feeling well, get well soon aay cant have you falling ill
    1. Kayol
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      Thanks! I'm fine at the moment, just very busy with life and all... Glad you liked the story
  2. clauDA
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    I wish you and your family a happy Easter!
    1. Kayol
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      Thank you, darling! I don't celebrate Easter but I really appreciate your good wishes. Of course, I wish you happy Easter, too
  3. Xorp
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    Quite a great sickbed story
    1. Kayol
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      Thanks!
  4. ista3
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    Another awesome illustrated installment
    1. Kayol
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      Thank you kindly
  5. Forgetmen0t
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    Just good writing. Keeps my attention, and wanting more, so you're doing something write(haha) even with a flu. Excellent use of pictures to help set the scene. Interesting that the Dragonborn (blind and older) is also losing her voice. A nice twist to the lore which, canon-wise, leaves you an unstoppable beast with the power of all the dragons and nothing to use it on. Here it almost seems poetic justice that by halting the return of the dragons your heroine cut herself off from the very life force enabling the player to quickly learn and master the Way of the Voice.
    1. Kayol
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      Yeah, I'm always against any narrative rule that makes the protagonist invincible. It takes away all the fun, anyway. So I'm glad I'm not the only one who likes her characters at a certain disadvantage

      Thanks a bunch for commenting!
  6. jumarbye
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    Excellent story. I use Alerik as a companion myself, sometimes, when I actually play Skyrim, but you've given him a life and story I never did and he's vastly more interesting in your hands

    Galla's a little scamp, isn't she - so cute

    Hope you're feeling loads better in the morning
    1. Kayol
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      Alerik is definitely one of my favourite followers - it never hurts to keep an eye candy on your travels I couldn't help but include him in my scribblings. And Galla is a scamp for sure! After all this time spent with her parents (and their dominating personalities) she needs a little bit of fun.

      Thank you! I actually feel a bit better.
  7. Klaxoid
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    I hope you feel better soon Kayol!

    I will have to read this later as I'm headed off to work, but the images in this set are fantastic! I'm looking forward to getting home
    1. Kayol
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      Thank you, hon!

      And have a great day at work!
    2. Klaxoid
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      Well worth the wait!

      I wonder what will happen next
  8. wolfgrimdark
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    I seem to have that problem with Grim. He has been retired twice now and still comes back.

    Well I for one am glad you continue to write although I am happy to read about old or new, or both, characters. I enjoyed Aleriks journey into a lighter theme for a while with his two new friends. The feeling of magic in the air, something that can be felt when winter ends for me at least, and new possibilities. New roads to travel, new adventures to be had. The little bit of impish behavior near the end of his part of the story was also delightful.

    It was a surprise when Lark and Saga entered the story though. Unexpected but in a pleasant. At first I thought the alchemist was attacking the three and Lark had, for some reason, been around and was helping them. But no it was him and Saga at their own place being attacked by what I can only assume are Mirraks agents. I really enjoyed how you showed the aging process of getting settled in the creak of the weapons and armor, in Lark being out of practice and Saga struggling to concentrate.

    Guess we have something to look forward to this summer. Feel better soon!
    1. Kayol
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      It is annoying - but delightful in a way - when the character continues speaking to you, even though you swore that that last story was truly the last one. some voices are too hard to ignore, right? And I think it's good that you don't let Grim disappear. He is soulful, and that's not that easy to achieve with a character.

      Oh dear, Larkie attacking his own baby girl would be quite unfortunate - although hilarious in a way. I can almost hear the banter...

      Hopefully summer will come quickly and I'll finally leave the damned University for good. Then I could spend all evenings on doing whatever the heck I want - like cooking up a story, for one.
      Thank you for your comment!
  9. User_33863450
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    Your patchwork turned out to be pretty exciting, leading us from a contemplative beginning to a crescendo ending. Love your imagery that ties in extremely well. Hope you get well soon; rest, lots of fluids and sleep - if you can
    1. Kayol
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      Thank you for your comment! And the good wishes - at this point I'm basically a lab rat undergoing my own crazy experiment with various beverages and vitamins. Goal: being able to speak like a regular human by tomorrow morning. I work with my voice, so it would be nice to be able to use it!
  10. User_20662789
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    The writing never ends. I know that feeling all too well. You tell yourself time and time again, "Okay, this is the last story" and before you know it.... wham! Another book choc-full of notes and half-written scripts, enough to write another three darn stories. Where does all of it come from? Does it ever stop?

    Feel better soon
    1. Kayol
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      Well, some characters just refuse to remain silent in your head, don't they? You cannot help it but give them more screentime!

      Thank you! I'm doing all I can since I have to go back to work tomorrow.