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Kynthia - Flight towards Destiny's Embrace - Intertwined Activities
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Your " flow" in writing, along with the images and that relaxing music makes for a great experience.
I know I also took my time reacting to your story, but wanted to do so if I wanted to, and not because I felt obligated to,..
It's still a bit strange that someone whom you place in Skyrim is in Solstheim, at the same time it gives the whole story an foreign aura wich is a nice realisation in the background.
I found it nice to read how you described the glimmer of hope arose for crescius after the visit from Kynthia. Arissa also showed off her talent and quick mind by inviting the sailors into the inn, thus giving her an excellent position .
Very much enjoyed reading this through and good to know her story continue's ..
Glad you enjoyed both the Story and Images aswell as the choice of music. Indeed this part was very much focused on Arissa's ablities as a thief / information collector as that is her area of expertise in my mind. Glad you enjoyed her exploits aswell as the hints in regards to crecius!
Liked how you described things - like the way the lady paused to let her eyes adjust to the darkness. Also that things flow logically with a careful plan. They all make a great team and I see you even got Glover to joke around with them (always liked him).
The pictures are excellent - really looking nice in your game. Maybe its the practice with the ENB paying off.
One minor suggestion - since your story changes point of view a lot consider using three dots to indicate a break in the point of view.
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I.e. like above. It is a subtle way to alert the reader to a change in the focus.
I do like Glover aswell, so happy you liked the addition of him joking with the others after working on that armor .. also glad you like the details - I personally tend to often just think "what would I do in xyz's persons shoes at the time" .. helps me get into it a bit at least.
Also happy you do like the images - guess played around enough with it by now .. though still tempted to attempt to fix the "artifacting" I get within black-color parts of images when the image is too dark overall or generally speaking in dark areas, especially in the "out of focus" blurriness .. oh well .. one step at a time.
Good suggestion, might need to incorporate that (at least for the jump-heavy chapters) - thanks for bringing it up!
Thank you for sharing!