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The Red Lilys Tale - 4th Chapter

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  1. wolfgrimdark
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    Nice to see some more of your work Patrick! You do a wonderful job with Lily. I remember when you first started her story. It is a very tragic and sad love story. Her rough childhood and then the loss of her Moon, her beloved, in Helgen. Still remember how sad that whole chapter was. I hope her friend the Black Lizard can help her bring her out of her nightmares and stop being a killing machine, the demon (if I understand the last chapter correctly). Very good shots as well!
    1. pottoply
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      Thank you very much Jon, I'm glad you enjoy this, so far, very sad little tale and it's quite cool that you still remember as it seems to be almost a year since I updated this the last time. You unterstood that chapter correctly but I could point it out with a little more detail...
      The birth of the demon introduced in the last chapter:
      "A woman losing her beloved
      a sun losing her moon
      a heart losing its soul
      in Alduins fire a demon was born"

      It actually represent what was left of Laelia after the trauma of Helgen, aimlessly fighting the imperials in her wish to die and to be reunited with her beloved:
      "A flower who lost herself inside the demon
      cause she lost anything she ever desired
      for the flower remaining no reason for life
      and the demon is only living for the fight"

      Now a key moment is when Laelia and Thrakor encountered Mirmulnir in the last chapter (which I now realise didn't point out very good), more specifically the greybeards calling for the dragonborn:
      "The demon possessing the blood of dragons
      old voices in the air are calling her
      but the demon is still crying for blood
      and the red lily isn't listening to them"

      Which are the trigger for Thrakor to try stop Laelia following her wish for death and revenge:
      "The black lizard hearing the old voices call
      he wants stop the demon once and for all
      so he's trying to reach out for the flower"

      Thrakors reasons aren't completly selfless though. He kinda wants to to become one of the greatest warriors to ever have walked on nirn, and to be remembered as such, which was why he originally became Laelias mentor in the 1st Chapter:
      "Arriving at Jorrvaskr being refused by an old wolf
      a son of the marshes steps forward to vouch for her
      a warrior searching for honor, called the black lizard
      feeling that she will guide him to honor"

      So he's now seeing a hint of the fate and eventually try's to stop her following her wish for death and revenge. He confronts her and trys to talk some sense into her, but she doesn't listen and gets angry, also knowing that other than all the average soldiers he has the abiltys to defeat her she starts to fight him:
      "The flower only being a cold hollow
      a demon fighting her own shadow
      not to end his life but rather her own
      to reunite the flower with her desired"

      He then decides to lay down his weapons, and give his life into her hands, because he believes that there is still a desire to live in her:
      "The black lizard laying down his weapon
      cause he's still believing in the flower
      awakening whom was lost inside the demon"

      Which makes her realise that she couldn't stand to live with the guilt to have killed Thrakor who has become a very close friend to her (it's a nightmare for her to imagine), and also while thinking that sorrow over her loss will never leave, she begins to aknowledge that a close friend can ease her pain and maybe there is still some reason for her to be alive:
      "The flower awakening from those haunting dreams
      to save one who can relieve her endless pain
      she banishes the demon to unreachable realms"
    2. wolfgrimdark
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      Thanks for the nice added detail, which helps with the interpretation. I had thought she was her own demon - meaning the demon was inside of her. You say it much more eloquently in your poem though. I remember the last chapter so well as I love the line about the sun and moon - and she looked so lost and tragic in that shot afterwards.

      Also appreciate the insight on the Black Lizard Thrakor. I knew he was a friend and he was trying to help her get out of herself, to instead find another reason to live besides revenge and killing. I had missed that part about his own desires to be one of the the greatest warriors. Also the clarification that they fought each other in that she was hoping he would kill her ... and so he laid down his weapons to try and get her to stop ... and see that it would be even worse if she did kill him ... forcing her to realize she did care about him and hence still had some good emotions left.
  2. Kamikazekossori
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    One can see that inner struggle with her need for vengeance like a beast trying to consume the good in her in her expression fierce and in her eyes filled with sadness and pain, it is good that she has one by her side that is helping her banish that darker side of her, so that she remains herself. The emotion is really strong in the images and your words, beautifully done, Patrick
    1. pottoply
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      I really missed your well-spoken comments Alexi, always a pleasure to find one of these under your posts. Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed this little tale and the images
  3. User_6005213
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    Shame, shame on people to miss that...
    I love that because, it's not complicate for me or just people to read and understand. Just great, beautilly and greatly written and captured Superb, Patrick !
    1. pottoply
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      Wow, some very kind words Simon, I'm very delighted of such compliment, thank you a lot!
  4. Corfus
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    A very touching and emotional piece of work, Laelia is a very beautiful and tragic character, I hope one day the flower will blossom fully again.

    Awesome stuff m8, so nice to see your uploading continuing
    1. pottoply
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      Many thanks m8, think I'm gonna stay for a while. There's much to see her after the long time
  5. silas216
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    Very beautiful set!
    1. pottoply
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      Thanks
  6. friffy
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    Ganz große Klasse. Berührend. Gut.
    1. pottoply
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      Vielen dank für die netten Worte.