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   PatrickTheDM

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   09 August 2015, 2:27PM

   Very interesting story! You have done well with keeping who she really is a secret.
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      Piratenbraut

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      09 August 2015, 3:32PM

      Thank you very much =)
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   wadelycan

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   30 June 2015, 1:53AM

   It is sad that she no longer has a home with the druids. I do wonder if this could be an illusion cast by her creepy stalker to get her closer to him. Many possibilities including what Hirsine actually thinks and how he might react. Looking forward to more
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   wolfgrimdark

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   18 June 2015, 11:12PM

   Very intense story - well written with great emotion. I would have never guessed who that guy was. On the one hand I side with Myr and her rejection of the man.Neutral is often misunderstood and the druids still take sides - siding with nature is still a side. No the problem is that Nature has no consciousness - it doesn't make decisions and hence is neutral. No human can ever be true neutral because they all make choices - even choosing to not get involved is a choice. It is more a balance and a perspective. You still make choices but you tend to not favor one side over another.
   
   Anyhow very interesting about the hunt and the strange man who seems to want her to become something else - and possibly something darker if he wishes her to kill. Wonderful new chapter with some really nice images!
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      Piratenbraut

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      21 June 2015, 10:37AM

      Sorry for the late reply xX But- I`m totaly on your side, you can never really do nothing or don`t chose a side. And for me (and Myrniel, too) that has nothing to do with druidic ways. But thanks to her Temper she know has to face some real problems: no family anymore, no Druid and no longer allowed to visit the placed that had been her home....Can be a hard time for her, particularly because the strange man seems to be her only ally.
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   Corfus

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   18 June 2015, 7:27PM

   Very nice work, I sense you have a bit of D& background or BG background due to some things implying druids should be neutral. Hmmm that character in the last two shots looks familiar from a Wolf story, man I'm so far behind in the nexus community now all these cross overs, my list of catch ups ever grows top stuff BTW
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      Piratenbraut

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      18 June 2015, 7:32PM

      Thank you very much =) You are right in both points: my comprehension of Druids is definitely characterized by D&. And the creepy guy is the awesome Xavier Follower, Wolf uses him too, but as another character.
      Thank you for taking you time to read and comment, I really appreciate feedback. =)
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   gucky2010

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   18 June 2015, 7:12PM

   Eine beeindruckende Geschichte von und über Myniel. An der Stelle, an der es um ihre Eltern ging, also da habe ich schon etwas Wut verspürt ( falls es so gewesen sein sollte, das ihre Eltern sie nicht wollten bzw. verlassen haben )
   
   Aber auch die Stelle als sie auf den Druiden trifft ist unheimlich packend beschrieben
   
   
   Nur beim vorletzten Bild........da legt ein Fremder seine Hände um sie
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      Piratenbraut

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      18 June 2015, 7:16PM

      Tjaja, der böse fremde Mann
      Vielen lieben Dank Kai, ich bin wirklich froh, dass es dir so gut gefällt Mit ein bisschen Glück erfahren wir ja noch, was es mit ihren Eltern auf sich hat. Ich bin jetzt aber still, sonst spoiler ich noch