Hello... First of all, there's something you need to know... This is a personal week and should not be considered essential... I would appreciate it if you could consider it as a kind of reference...
You said it's your first time making a map, but the map is beautiful... So, decorating? The arrangement of the ornaments is great... However, it's great to be decorated, It's too dangerous for combat play...
In areas such as lobby halls, outside (thicket of grass), and rooftops, there are reasons why it is difficult to do so tactically... The reason is that there are no structures or obstacles... It's a completely open battle, so it's very dangerous...
Not only that, but the suspect is shooting at the window... These shortcomings are even more prominent..
Maybe, the reason why it's said that the lobby hall is big is because There are no obstacles and structures... the lobby hall is so wide that it's difficult to fight, so I think it's going to be a story...
I personally think it's a good map... If you refine it a little more, you'll get a great map. I think.. I hope it will be an opinion that will help your skills to make a better map..
For your information, I'm not a cartographer... As much as possible, from the point of view of those who have a lot of experience in gameplay who have enjoyed all mode maps even before the official release of Ready or Not..
as stated above The biggest drawback of this map is... There are no barriers to protecting the body...
When you go up to the rooftop first, the suspects on the lower floors of the rooftop open fire at the unknown space... First of all, here's the downside I found...
Thanks for your download! this map has too little number of objects as shield I think too, so I am making a new map to improve its bad points. It's difficult to place objects on a rooftop with a helipad, so I may remove rooftop...
I realized one thing while playing this map again... It is that the reason for the decrease in FPS is the light bulb... In particular, the FPS is active and stable in dark places, In bright places there is a decrease in FPS, especially in places with light lights, there is a significant decrease in FPS...
Main lobby area is too wide-open. Consider adding a feature that faces the breezeway door or simply make the lobby narrower.
Move that chair out of the way in the office to the right of the lobby so that arresting the civilian can be done easily from both sides of the table.
Big empty room in the middle really is weird. Perhaps an outdoor fishbowl with a courtyard and an open ceiling in the middle instead of nothing with two doors.
Opening all those bathroom doors for nothing was tedious.
More staircases, pls.
Second floor is more-like-it, but still begs for narrower hallways.
Those big empty rooms on the outer edge just need to be removed and the whole thing brought-in smaller.
Hope I'm not being too harsh. I love to see some fresh work like this. There's potential, but the scale is currently just off. Can be a good and creepy theme, if done right. Don't worry about filling the space: that'll come later. Gameplay is key.
Thanks for your download and opinions! Your advises are eligible, I'll improve the width of the hallway, the number of doors,staircases and so on. The large hall in the center of the first floor was built as recreation room, so I don't intend to remove it but I will improve.
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First of all, there's something you need to know...
This is a personal week and should not be considered essential... I would appreciate it if you could consider it as a kind of reference...
You said it's your first time making a map, but the map is beautiful...
So, decorating? The arrangement of the ornaments is great...
However, it's great to be decorated,
It's too dangerous for combat play...
In areas such as lobby halls, outside (thicket of grass), and rooftops,
there are reasons why it is difficult to do so tactically...
The reason is that there are no structures or obstacles...
It's a completely open battle, so it's very dangerous...
Not only that, but the suspect is shooting at the window...
These shortcomings are even more prominent..
Maybe, the reason why it's said that the lobby hall is big is because
There are no obstacles and structures...
the lobby hall is so wide that it's difficult to fight, so I think it's going to be a story...
I personally think it's a good map...
If you refine it a little more, you'll get a great map. I think..
I hope it will be an opinion that will help your skills to make a better map..
As much as possible, from the point of view of those who have a lot of experience in gameplay who have enjoyed all mode maps even before the official release of Ready or Not..
as stated above
The biggest drawback of this map is...
There are no barriers to protecting the body...
When you go up to the rooftop first, the suspects on the lower floors of the rooftop open fire at the unknown space...
First of all, here's the downside I found...
this map has too little number of objects as shield I think too, so I am making a new map to improve its bad points.
It's difficult to place objects on a rooftop with a helipad, so I may remove rooftop...
It is that the reason for the decrease in FPS is the light bulb...
In particular, the FPS is active and stable in dark places,
In bright places there is a decrease in FPS, especially in places with light lights, there is a significant decrease in FPS...
Hope I'm not being too harsh. I love to see some fresh work like this. There's potential, but the scale is currently just off. Can be a good and creepy theme, if done right. Don't worry about filling the space: that'll come later. Gameplay is key.
Your advises are eligible, I'll improve the width of the hallway, the number of doors,staircases and so on.
The large hall in the center of the first floor was built as recreation room, so I don't intend to remove it but I will improve.
I'll do my best based on your opinions!
and thank you for the reply!