Oh dear.... While I respect and even enjoy the work of Mel Brooks, I think that trying to write a book in that style for a game isn't too good an idea. I've read what you've got, and I'm not overly impressed, but I'm not offended either. However, this gets a groan and a 610, better than the average mod in this style, but still need a bit of work.... Although at least your spelling is better than most...
Except for cherub (I spelled it cherib), the spelling is more or less fine. I did do a brief scansion of the finished work, though I would attribute most errors to a typo. I am rather prone to a slip of the finger.
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Glad someone took it upon themself to expan the series. Infact I feel stupid I didn't think about it myself. I'mma deffinately downloading this one.
Tata for now love, Axel
P.S. much love if you make an X rated version ;3
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