I am not a fan of the massive derp but I love catfolk so.. a part of me does appreciate what you TRIED to do. So for that I will endorse and send kudos.
Some ideas on how to lessen the derp: 1) Longer muzzle with a smaller chin. 2) Less round head. More sleek and feline. 3) Eyes bigger and further apart. (Eyes together = Prey animal = More Derp)
(Edited because I reread it and it sounded mean af when I didnt mean it that way)
What I tried to do was share something I did for myself with the community. After my next race I'm likely done putting out races for the public if this is the kind of "constructive" criticism I'm going to receive.
I really like concept of this race and it fits very well with my dnd character concept I had long time ago. My only issue is with ancient rage feature. Cost of action for ability that lasts for a few rounds sounds much, especially that leap that unlocks is also an action. I'd give it bonus action to activate and number of uses equal to prof. bonus per long rest, or at least once per short/long rest.
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...I'm sorry lol
a part of me does appreciate what you TRIED to do. So for that I will endorse and send kudos.
Some ideas on how to lessen the derp:
1) Longer muzzle with a smaller chin.
2) Less round head. More sleek and feline.
3) Eyes bigger and further apart. (Eyes together = Prey animal = More Derp)
(Edited because I reread it and it sounded mean af when I didnt mean it that way)