I see. I was sort of expecting something like this
"<name>", Missing in Action, "Aside from his name all information about this pilot is sealed confidential. It is unclear why he was the only pilot stationed at the air base in the Waiopolo mountains. Transmissions of unknown nature were detected shortly before his plane was shot down."......Something like that...
Sort of implying that he probably was the one who deployed the F/A-18F drones from his base to protect the facility but was too late..ah maybe too much.
while a lot of these profiles are great, ones like Jester's seem a little jumbled. his could easily be shortened from "his craft had engine problems on May 17, and his aircraft was destroyed" to "Engine problems with his craft on May 17 caused it to be destroyed on takeoff by an Osean Fighter".
another one, Axeman, could have the ending line shortened from "he bailed out near a conservative holdout and was quickly recognized, subsequently shot and killed" to "he was recognized and killed by conservatives after bailing out near a local hideout"
all in all, this is an amazing mod which I see you put a good amount of effort into, but it could use some improvements. a solid 7/10 for me
Version 2.0 has been released, fixing a few errors that slipped my eye.
Full changelog:
PYRO bio's wording changed. JESTER bio's wording changed. BAYONET bio's wording changed. SERPENT bio's wording changed. Error in LYNX bio fixed. This was a remnant from a pre-release version that never got fully removed.
ORIGINAL: He defected to an independence movement based following the fall of the Usean satellite network.
FIXED: He defected to an independence movement following the fall of the Usean satellite network.
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"<name>", Missing in Action, "Aside from his name all information about this pilot is sealed confidential. It is unclear why he was the only pilot stationed at the air base in the Waiopolo mountains. Transmissions of unknown nature were detected shortly before his plane was shot down."......Something like that...
Sort of implying that he probably was the one who deployed the F/A-18F drones from his base to protect the facility but was too late..ah maybe too much.
another one, Axeman, could have the ending line shortened from "he bailed out near a conservative holdout and was quickly recognized, subsequently shot and killed" to "he was recognized and killed by conservatives after bailing out near a local hideout"
all in all, this is an amazing mod which I see you put a good amount of effort into, but it could use some improvements. a solid 7/10 for me
So can I send you a Japanese translation of the text of this mod and apply it to the mod?
Full changelog:
PYRO bio's wording changed.
JESTER bio's wording changed.
BAYONET bio's wording changed.
SERPENT bio's wording changed.
Error in LYNX bio fixed. This was a remnant from a pre-release version that never got fully removed.