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Child of Destiny - The Grayclaw Chronicles - Finayla

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  1. gucky2010
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    Beautiful new Chapter, The same Brilliance as in the Chapters before. I love the black / white Captures, they are so amazing dear Jess
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      Thanks hon; they're old images but the B&W does jazz them up a little!
  2. Bowsong
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    Oooh Nooo! I was afraid you were going to say those dread words.. "It would be short lived". Well Damn! Very nice accompanying images- especially the black and white shots of pretty Mama and brave Papa. The B&W's really lend to the notion that the images are old ones- from many years past. Nice touch Jess! Guess I better get out some tissues- fear a sad turn is ahead...
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      Hehe, ah you know me... I wouldn't be happy unless I had words to that effect in my story! Thanks for the kind words about the images; I felt a bit bad about 'cheating' and using old images for Allenell and Stardrir, but just didn't have the time to create whole new characters for a back story...
    2. Bowsong
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      Hey- who ever said your images had to be new?! They're your images and you post them as YOU see fit! Besides- I'm all for saving time and if you save time, maybe you have some extra for more stories- he he hee XD
  3. wolfgrimdark
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    Muahhaha. It would be short lived. That will be your phrase on your tombstone you know. Or perhaps, "Happiness is as fleeting as the life of a moth around a blow torch"

    Sorry couldn't resist. Still I enjoyed the stories romantic appeal and loving closeness so far and think you did a nice job making a pair of wonderful parents for poor Fin. Like how you did the images and at least gave them that one day together!
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      Bwah haw haw har!! Love that line and yep, I'm claiming it for my epithet! Glad you liked this chapter (see, I CAN do romance... kind of)

      Thanks hon.
  4. User_6005213
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    Simply fantastic ! As I said, in few and simple words, you make us dreaming, superb !
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      Oh, many thanks Simon!
  5. Nataly1q2w3e4r5t
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    Very beautiful and heartwarming continuation of lovely previous chapter, wonderfully written! Great shots too (and I did recognize pretty Bella who was one of your characters, Quin's half sister if I recall correctly).
    It is great to know that there was a wedding and that that Stardir, given his great courage and sweet personality finally managed to earn the respect of Bosmer clan of his beloved Allenel. I can only imagine how hard it was for Thalmor to fight Bosmer in their territory where according to Green Pact they can change the forest to their will.
    It was such beautiful scene to see the child of Allenel and Stardir birth and her unique appereance, since such child of two different races is like a rarity. Finayla must grow up to be very beautiful, given her parents good looks and she might have a unique abilities! It was so heartwarming to see Allenel and Stardir with their child, enjoying happiness and peace... too bad it will soon shutter!
    I will look forward for continuation and thank you for sharing your wonderful work!
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      Thanks hon! Indeed Bella was Quin's half-sister but I didn't think anyone would mind if I 'borrowed' her image here! Allenel and Stardrir made such sweet parents and yes, Fin is a pretty lovely looking lass... though I realise I haven't yet showed much of her face in the few shots I've posted of her...

      Oh yes, the poor Bosmer fighting the Thalmor was a difficult task from what i've read. They were close to annihilated by the Dominion... in their own lands too. Just terrible. At least Stardrir was able to assist and prepare the clan for the ensuing war...
  6. Kamikazekossori
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    It is good to hear how Stardrir gained the respect of Allenel's clan, putting his mind to the planning of raids, bravely risking his own life to carry them out, helping as his fellow nords did not, he is truly an honorable sort. His kind heart surely won them over as well, the smiling warrior caring as much for the people of his beloved Allenel. Was fortunate that Stardrir was near when Allenel felt the child, them being able to greet their daughter together, to see a glimpse of what she would look like. Was interesting to learn of the origin of her name, a nod to her human and mer blood. I had a thought in the back of my mind that something might happen knowing your previous tales. I am intrigued to see what unfolds next
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      Thanks dear; the setup is nearly done - and I'm enjoying writing again so I hope to continue of with Fin's present day story for a while so you'll definitely see what unfolds next
  7. ista3
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    Great works
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      Thanks Ista
  8. Poupoulou
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    Really nice view in the third person!
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      Why thank you!!
  9. LadyofChaos
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    Great sunshine and colors in the main!!
    1. deleted1123719
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      Thanks Lady! I love saturated colours in my game; they make for some lovely screenshots!
  10. jennawatson
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    Like my good friend, Mr. Bilbo Baggins, you have a love for writing, and even greater love for telling stories, though the latter has run him into more adventures than I have room to tell. So, I will say, "thank you".
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      Wow, what a beautiful compliment! Many thanks Jenna!!