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Fawn - Chapter 5 - Reunion

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  1. buttnine
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    Such good work! Your time and effort is always apparent!
    1. derek98
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      Thanks a lot B.
  2. Heaventhere
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    Great story and lovely shots.......... and love the name Wulf ......... seems they have a lot to catch up on...... not matter how strong a woman gets men of that age still think them needing protecting...... been so long since men though of women in that way.......... what a shame for womans lib in that area....was very surprized with the brother thing in the end and as for Faendal he always seemed a bit off to me.......... great can not wait to next chapter to see what else he has to tell Fawn
    1. derek98
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      Many thanks Shelley, appreciate your support hon.
      Never trusted Faendal either!
  3. wolfgrimdark
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    Oh nice - one of your most detailed stories to date I think. Enjoyed the dialogue and interaction as the two siblings got caught up on their past ... at least a little. 12 years old ... a lot can change in someone who is that young as those are formative years - when all the hormones and higher brain activities kick in.

    I love his name though, Wulf - awesome Very curious about the sunlight in his eyes. Makes me think of a Vampire ... but I don't know. Maybe he is but the vibe right now suggests something else at play. Will have have to wait and see I guess.

    The light and the dark it seems. Although I tend to agree more with Wulf. If he was telling the truth that wood elf had to die. Don't have a lot of sympathy for drug dealers either, especially violent ones.

    Some great images and a very good story Derek.
    1. derek98
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      Thank you very much Jonathan.
      Appreciate your detailed feedback. Yes this is probably my most detailed, and certainly my most 'wordy' story. I'd like to give more detail all the time, but I'm a terrible typist and it takes me an age to get it all down!
      Glad you enjoyed the story and pics.

    2. wolfgrimdark
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      Lol one advantage I have that I often forget I think - I am a fairly good typist. I still have to cheat sometimes by looking down but I can type about 60% of the time without looking at the keyboard and can use both hands. Comes from all the keyboard work I have had to do over the last 30+ years :p

      Probably why my stories tend to be walls of text
  4. gucky2010
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    Oh Derek you make me so speechless again with that great Chapter. Briliant Images and great Story.
    1. derek98
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      Vielen, vielen Dank mein lieber Kai!
  5. aok
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    Wow! You stepped up the story and what an excellent job you did! I LOVE the brother/Sister angle of this and can't wait to learn more about them! Especially the mysterious Wulf!

    I had to laugh at Carnage's comment about the Thalmor What would we do without them?
    Epic work my friend!!
    1. derek98
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      Thank you so much Arnold!
      Glad you're enjoying the Bro/Sis interplay and yes, we'd be stuck if the Thalmor weren't there to hate!
  6. DiscipleOfCarnage
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    I was so absorbed in your story and pics that I had to scroll back to the top of the page and make sure I didn't forget to click the 'Endorse' button.

    You've done a great job on both your character creation (especially Wulf's appearance), and the very entertaining story. Keep up the great works, Derek, because I'm really liking Fawn and Wulf and the spinning of their tale.

    (What ever would we do without the Thalmor, everyone's favorite antagonist?)
    1. derek98
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      Thanks very much DOC.
      Glad you're absorbed in the tale, means I'm doing something right!
      I'm pleased you like Wulf, as I said to Liadys, he's my first non-beast Male.
  7. AaronOfMpls
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    A sweet -- and bittersweet -- reunion of these two siblings. It's clear Wulf is still hiding a few things, but hopefully he's been reasonably honest with Fawn. I'm definitely wondering what sorts of darkness he's been involved in (though I have at least one good idea); he seems very much like Jess's kind of character.

    And man, is Faendal ever a *CENSORED* in this timeline, apparently!

    Nicely done, both pics and story! I'd love to see what happens to these two!
    1. derek98
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      Thanks very much Aaron.
      All I can say is that Wulf is a ' Dark Horse '.
      It seems that quite a few folks have a low opinion of Faendal.
  8. Queenieangel
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    Wonderful and impressive work mein lieber Freund Derek!!
    1. derek98
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      Thank you so much meine liebe Freund Angie!
  9. deleted1123719
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    A very interesting and thoroughly enjoyable tale hon! I'm SO glad Wulf didn't mean danger to Fawn (I'd already grown fond of the dour looking assassin and didn't want his (or Fawn's) life to be cut short if it came to battle). His appearance sure shook her up though it did serve to explain few interesting things, especially the bombshell about Faendal (damn knife-ear ).

    They make a very formidable team and I HOPE Wulf's on the level with his sister and they team up together to tackle the future. They just look awesome together!

    Great chapter hon; love the way you handled the slightly 'darker' themes in this instalment!
    1. derek98
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      Many thanks Jess.
      Wulf was originally going to play a minor part in the story (in fact he wasn't gonna be Fawn's brother) but I can see him playing a major role in Fawn's unfolding tale!
      As for Faendal, never did like him. Thanks too for your feedback on the 'darker' parts, good to know I didn't overdo it.
  10. Kamikazekossori
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    Great to see that reunion of siblings, that mix of feelings Fawn felt, both happiness and a touch of anger. Seems there was much Fawn did not know about Faendal and about his parents. Interesting to learn that they were members of the resistance to the influence of the Thalmor and that Faendal sure was a twisted sort, betraying friends for some foolish lust, good thing she made it clear what she though of that with a swift kick. Great to see them fighting together they sure work together well even having been apart for some time, those Thalmor did not stand a chance. I wonder what else her brother will reveal, some really great work, Derek
    1. derek98
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      So glad you liked this chapter Alexi!
      I'm sure Wulf has a few tales to tell yet!
      Thank you my friend.