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The Unraveling - Pact with a Devil - Interlude P6 - Past
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Anyway, nicely done, both pics and story!
Loved the part where she snapped her fingers and "pop"!
Seriously, over all the chapter is amazing. Sadly, I admit I do not know your character, but she is wow! Talk about power, seduction, beauty...I do wonder what will happen when she calls in that favor.
Nicely done!
And thank you so much for the linked Shot.
I love how she handled the knight and got Garm through the portal but I suspect she'll be after the return favour from him one day...
Wonderful work!
I appreciate your comment a lot thank you
I can understand why Garm thought that present Teyla won;t be able to help him, she is too busy with her new life, besides wit that memory loss she has suffered she is not the same as she was a long time ago. And the pat version of Teyla... wow, she is like temptation personified! Even Garm was affected by her seductive look and teasing words, she is an ultimate temptress, the master of seduction and pleasure. The way she chose to defeat the guardian was very fitting to her nature, such intense scenes and then, she turned into her true form and showed who was the boss! Very impressive and I do wonder what price she will ask from Garm... hope that won't be something very dark!
And your so kind to link me
Thank you!
Teyla is really fantastic in this story and I liked how well you wrote about her power as a seductress - the interaction with the Knight was really a great idea and the images are superb. The whole plan was very well thought out as Garm followed Kyne's wind to the gate that led him into the past and from there to Teyla.
Thus with this chapter all the guardian sentinels have been removed and Garm will finally be able to carry out his plan to disrupt the loop and free the Caretaker. Of course while this has been going on Mora has not been idle :-)
In chapter 7 we shall find out what Mora has been up to and what the Caretaker will do now that he is free and knows that his true enemies are Mora and the Adversary. Thank you for this wonderful addition to the community story Sean!
Looking forward to reading the next chapters!!
Fabulous contribution to this great project Sean!
(Thanks for the link)