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  1. deleted1123719
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    I love the idea of Serana being the old crotchety Aunt to Sofie, though I’ve always more seen her as another Mother to the child… kind of like Dannee is the warm, nurturer and Serana is the discipline and hard lessons of life. I like the dynamic between the three of them; playful but respectful.

    The Twilight Forest is a lovely place isn’t it? Is this a place you’ve made up or is it in the game? It’s interesting how different Aela and Dannee’s approaches to battle are. Both have their own merits and both are what you’d expect from each respectively; the calm, cool Dragonborn, and the hot-blooded wolf woman. Probably good that Sofie gets a grounding in both forms of combat. And I think it was good for Aela to be challenged by Sofie – the ever perceptive little thing that she is! She forced the huntress to reveal some intimate parts to herself and maybe admit that she DOES have a softer side to her bestial nature.

    I knew that Dannee would have no harsh words for Serana about what happened back in Solitude; it surprised me that knowing Dannee as well as she does that Serana thought there might be some sort of reproach from the Dragonborn. It was also surprising to see Aria again! I hadn’t thought we’d meet the lovely assassin again. It seemed Serana was particularly touched at meeting her too (I wonder if there might be something between these two? ). I have a feeling we’ll see Aria again…

    A very nice ‘wrap up’ to the events in Solitude and nice to see Dannee have a respite break… even if sultry Sam didn’t make an appearance!
    1. Nataly1q2w3e4r5t
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      Thank you very much for your wonderful and detailed feedback!
      Oh, Serana indeed behaves like an old crotchety aunt to Sofie, being all stern or cranky, she is not like Dannee in her methods, but Sofie loves her too. I am very glad that you like the family dynamic between three of them!

      The Twilight Forest is a mod, very beautiful one (I use The Twilight Forest - Optional Ambience because in original file the scenery is too dark to make images), here it is - http://www.nexusmods...im/mods/11007/?

      Aela and Dannee are really very different with their approach not only to fight but to everything. Sofie is lucky to learn from two of the, she knows that being crafty can help to survive and it is even better that she has two different role model example... though Sofie prefers Dannee's approach more. However Sofie has a big heart and empathy, so even opposing to Aela's ways, she made her see softer side of herself.

      I am very glad that you've liked Aria's comeback! I felt that her story should have left hanging, so I've wanted her to show Seran the consequences of her good deed. Seran has kind of soft spot towards lovely Aria, while Aria has genuine sympathy for her and maybe even a hero crush.
      Thank you very much again for your kind words!
  2. aok
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    Beautiful work Nataly!!!
    Very interesting to hear Serana speaking much like the compassionate Dannee. I had wondered why Serana had spared Aria and had assumed this had all been learned from Dannee, but I see now it was more then that, she had seen herself in Aria and understood that people can change with love and compassion. Very moving.
    I love how Aela refers to Serana as Dannee's "Fanged Friend" and Serana refers to Aela as "Furball" Somehow I suspect in a battle situation that those two would make a formidable team.
    I did catch a hint at what I have been wondering about for some time now, What is Sofie's true lineage? As I think it was no mere "accident" that brought Sophie and Dannee together.
    VERY interesting!
    Loved this chapter!!!
    1. Nataly1q2w3e4r5t
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      Thank you very much for your kind words and wonderful feedback!
      Well, Sera has borrowed few positive traits from Dannee, like sympathy and some of compassion. Yes, you are right, Seran has spared Aria not only because of Dannee lessons of humanity but because lost unlucky girl has reminded her too much of herself, so Serana thought that if she has changed, Aria can too... and she wasn't mistaken.

      Oh, Aela and Seran would have made formidable team, if they solved their misunderstandings, for Seran was raised to make fun of werewolves and Aela thinks that all vampires are lazy, useless, overly emotional melancholics. But if their mutual friend like Dannee will be in danger, I guess they can make it though past bickering.

      I am so glad that you've noticed that bit about Sofie's true lineage! Indeed she is too wise for her years and seems to posses hidden resources, so that what made Aela wonder about her powers... and I think that it was not a chance but fate that brought Dannee and Sofie together. Aela of course will share her thoughts about Sofie to Dannee, so she might get very intrigued too and maybe try to hold some investigation...
      Again thank you very much for your kind and encouraging words!
    2. wolfgrimdark
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      I had wondered about this myself although hadn't gotten around to mentioning it as I was not sure if it was by design or Sofie was just a very bright child. However her sixth sense with Aela got me a bit more suspicious that there is more than meets the eye here. Curious to see if you have something special planned for her
  3. wolfgrimdark
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    Oh this was nice - you did a great job of really exploring a variety of relationships with all of your main characters and even a few side ones, like Aria. There is a lot of insight into how each of your characters inner minds work and what is going on inside of them. This story was like a bit of a cleansing in a way. Dannee and Serena worked out a few things about Serena reverting back to her dark side for a brief moment and Dannee made her see that while we can never run from our past it doesn't mean we have to let it control our future either. Instead accept it and move on (granted it also means people do want to be better and I suppose there may be some pasts that are easier to forgive than others).

    Like the whole scene with Aela and Sofie out in the Twilight Forest - great place to do some training. Interesting take on using anger to fuel the 6th sense as well as how to calm down from such an anger. Some nice insights into Aela's past as well. It is nice when a child can enjoy their youth in a more carefree way yet at the same time it can also mean a rude awakening when they get older so perhaps it is best to avoid extremes and give them some training and exposure as they get older - at least that is how I would probably approach it and that is how Grim is doing it with Lucia.

    It was also great to see Aria again, who is indeed very pretty, and to let Serena have the role as a mentor for a change, with someone looking up to her as the friend. Probably good for Serena's own self-outlook as well. I think Aria made the right decision on focusing on the key person to get revenge on for her sister. It has provided closure to that old way of life. Now she can move forward with her past remembered yet closed behind her. Hopefully she will do good at the college.

    Some great shots between all the characters with a lot of warmth and fun between clearly shown in the poses and expressions. Glad everyone has had a nice respite
    1. Nataly1q2w3e4r5t
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      Thank you very much for your wonderful and detailed feedback!
      I've planned this chapter to be more of a filler, yet it was intended to cover all loose ends from two previous stories, but mostly to tell about Aria's fate.

      I am very glad that you've liked that bit with Aela and Sofie in Twilight Forest! Dannee has so many enemies, she knows as well as Sofie who was already almost fell prey to vampires and Thalmor spy, although in second case, she kinda caused that situation herself. but in any case, she must learn to protect herself or at least be in good for to run for her life, if the danger will be too great.

      Oh, indeed, for Seran is was endearing to fee herself in a role of mentor for Aria, since usually Serana is the one who follows Dannee. Aria indeed has moved on from her past and wants to embrace the future.
      Thank you very much again for your kind words!
  4. cila81
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    Just wonderful, Nat!
    1. Nataly1q2w3e4r5t
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      Thank you very much!
  5. Queenieangel
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    A impressive set! Wonderful!
    1. Nataly1q2w3e4r5t
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      Thank you very much for your kind words!
  6. Kayol
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    Wonderful chapter, dear! I would have commented earlier for I have read this piece a couple of hours ago, but my medicine decided it was time for sleep. Can't argue with that, let me tell you. But now I'm up and ready to comment
    It was nice to see little Sophie take the narration over and share the story of her time spent with Aela with their caretakers.The scene in an inn when the three women were bantering, Serana drinking so much, Dannee deep in thoughts about her complicated love life (poor thing!) and Sophie complaining about making her go to bed at nine was really nice. Such is the way family works: everyone is minding their own business and yet they all work together as a whole. Delightful scene!
    Memories of the little one concerning her trainings with the fiery Companion was also very lovely. The woman was surely right to teach her that she needed to depend more on her guts, follow the instincts, believe that she could do it. Taking Sofie to that mysterious Twilight Forest with huge trees and disturbing lack of sounds of the wildlife to test her was also a valuable lesson. Facing her dark memories and learning how to cope with them in order to stay in control of her own mind and actions was surely a purifying experience! Sometimes we just have to be challenged in order to truly let it go.
    Also, Sofie's attachment to Dannee is truly endearing. She really found her home at her side along with Serana which is more than many Skyrim orphan could dream of. After all, being an adopted child of a legend must not be so bad...
    The last scenes, the ones between Serana and that Aria character, were a pure joy to read! So subtle, filled with emotions unexpressed and wors unspoken, and yet so packed with feelings!
    Anyway, it was a truly delightful read and my incoherent comment is really insufficient. Great job, dear!
    1. Nataly1q2w3e4r5t
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      Thank you very much for your wonderful and detailed feedback, and kind words! Your comment just can’t be insufficient!
      I am very happy that your enjoyed family scenes, they are fun to write and indeed, like in Dannee’s family case, everyone minds their own business but can perfectly work as whole at any moment.
      Sofie’s training was very important in her upbringing, and there was also a good moment to dwell into her feelings as she had that emotional conversation with fiery Aela. Indeed Sofie got challenged and she truly let go of her past, because now she is happy with Dannee. She loves her dearly and Sofie would still feel the same feelings towards Dannee if she was not a Dragonborn.
      I am glad that you’ve liked Aria and Serana scenes! There were indeed a lot of unspoken things; Aria clearly wants to mean something more to her then just a saved soul, since she never had friends in her entire life while Serana doesn’t seem to mind it... Especially while drunk.

  7. Kamikazekossori
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    That banter between Serana and Dannee was amusing, looks like that drink has more of and effect the vampire than she would care to admit. Was interesting to read that tale told from Sofie's perspective, sharing what Aela had taught her. I really like Aela's tough but fair teaching style, making sure that Sofie kept her focus, pushing her to improve her skills. It was wise of Aela to want to teach her how to use her senses to avoid the surprise of a hidden foe or a sudden strike, harnessing that bit of anger to catch her hand. Of course Sofie was worried she had hurt Aela kind hearted as she is. Was great how Sofie managed to make Aela open up a little, talking of that fond memory of the past, the proud gaze of a usually stern father, seems she can't hide behind her tough shell as well as she would want to. I had kind of guessed that the moment Sofie would chose to push her on in gloomy times was that of Dannee saying she was going to take care of her. Those moments between Serana and Aria were wonderful, interesting how Serana feels such a connection to the once misguided assassin, seeing some part of herself trapped in a bad situation, wanting to be free of watching eyes. It is nice to see her showing such kindness with those compliments making Aria blush and smile, she is indeed beautiful and it is clear she has a lot of good in her, having potential to do great good with her respect for Dannee. A wonderful peaceful and heartwarming chapter, Nataly
    1. Nataly1q2w3e4r5t
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      Thank you very much for your lovely feedback! Yeah, Serana has lied about mead, so she was tipsy, which made her much more emotional. I am very glad that you've liked that part with Aela and Sofie... I think Aela has a lot more softness in her heart that she cares to show, hiding her true feelings under "tough" image. And indeed she has taught Sofie valuable lessons... maybe she will soon need them, especially given the number of Dannee's enemies.
      Aria really can do a lot of good, Seran feels connection with her because once upon a time he was as lost as Aria but managed to find her way. so she wishes the same for lovely former assassin. Maybe they will met again some day...
  8. frank213
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    again a magnificent and impressive work from you.
    1. Nataly1q2w3e4r5t
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      Thank you very much for your kind words!