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Exploit the Mental and Physical Strength Chapter 13 Part 1

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  1. AnnaMary
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    ($v$) Beautiful music and a wonderful set of pictures with a spectacular live narration... Deserved applause!!!=)))))       
  2. wolfgrimdark
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    @Aok: A smart trainer lets the trainee do all the work :p lol

    @Basstos: Just noticed this is Song of the Silkie by D.A. Wonderful choice!
    1. deleted6889352
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      Glad you think this beautiful music is a wonderful choice, thanks to you
  3. aok
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    Great chapter. Ogbalf seems to be keeping them very busy, perhaps this way thoughts of Skooma are far away. He seems to be Skyrim's "Obi-Wan Kenobi"
    I love how he and the wolves sit on the side lines watching them train.
    Brilliant work my friend!
    1. deleted6889352
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      Haha it is true that I did not think about "Obi-Wan Kenobi", is a bit like ^^
      As as Grim said, A smart trainer lets the trainee do all the work
      the skooma starts to walk away indeed, but for Sunniva it is less certain...
      Thank you very much Aok for your nice comment
  4. Nataly1q2w3e4r5t
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    Awesome new chapter with great shots, very expressive and beautiful! I like it how Ogbalf is not only curing Frankhof and Sunniva from their Skooma addiction but he seems to try and make them into team as well. His methods seems shocking for Sunniva, but at least they are effective and I do really hope she wont out her new found alchemist knowledge into creating something like moon sugar...
    Frankhof seems to cope better, but he always apparef as much more serious than Sunniva, so his progress after taking an oath is not so surprising. I loved his and Sunniva battle with Atronach and especially the reveal that he wasn't fully real... great way to make them confident in themselves but not over confident. I am looking forward for continuation!
    1. deleted6889352
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      Thank you very much Nataly
      Ogbalf wish indeed teach them to team up and be more closer together, the combat in team is one of the keys of the success and they showed on this day.
      I understand that the new competence of Sunniva in alchemy can be disturbing, but as I said at Grim, Ogbalf anticipate the possibility that she makes her own skooma in the learning, so it should not have any risks.
      In a few days, Frankhof will probably be rid of the little skooma addiction that he still have in him and Sunniva seem also to be in the right way with all her efforts.
      Yes the Atronach wasn't fully real, because Ogbalf wanted in any case that Frankhof and Sunniva feel overpowered, but he knows that the two of them would probably not come to the end of one of his Atronach which are very powerful.
  5. Kamikazekossori
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    Je suis content de lire que l'appel du Skooma est devenu plus silencieux pour tout les deux, que leur yeux sont plus clairs et attentifs. Le combat semble une bonne façon de les faire travailler, et Frankhof semble bien la motiver à devenir plus confiante avec sa lame. Il travaillent bien ensemble, trouvant la faiblesse de leur ennemi de glace, leurs coups le brisant en morceaux, j'aime bien le duo qu'ils forment. Un trés beau chapitre, Basstos
    1. deleted6889352
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      Merci beaucoup l'ami!
      C'est en effet une bonne nouvelle que le skooma c'est éloigné d'eux, encore quelques jours et Frankhof n'aura plus aucune envie d'en entendre parler.
      Pour ce qui est de Sunniva, elle fait face courageusement à son manque et en effet, l’entrainement au combat lui apprends à être plus confiante et cela lui permet également de libérer la colère qui est enfoui au plus profond d'elle.
      Content que tu apprécie le duo que forme Frankhof et Sunniva, il ne reste plus qu'a espérer que cette amitié perdura avec le temps...
  6. bohlingTVD
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    Absolutely great Franck!
    I´m always impressed, when i see your images. They fit really excellent to your story.

    For Sunniva it`s certainly an important experience to recognize her strenghts.
    Everybody needs the feel to be valuable. Sunniva is missing this feelings, cause she was persuaded that she is useless. I hope this training will help her to get that feeling back.
    1. deleted6889352
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      Many thanks Heidi for your kind words

      I agree that Sunniva to need to be valorize, she is always felt useless, yet Erik has always been there for her and show her that she was not useless.
      She never managed to make an effort, but since her arrival in Ogbalf's house she had no choice and she has done a lot, it is hoped that this will lead to something.
  7. wolfgrimdark
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    Fun chapter in a way Franck - You are giving a nice feel of what they are doing "day to day" as far as training and getting over their addiction. Indeed the wise old man is correct about Sunniva - It should be they who want to be cured. She has it all backwards.

    Nice to see them working on combat to improve their skills and clever to both boost their confidence yet also not let them get over-confident at the same time.

    I wonder if Sunniva will try to make her own Skooma ... lets hope their is no moon sugar about!
    1. deleted6889352
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      Thank you very much Wolf!
      Yes, Sunniva had not the right way of thinking and Ogbalf did well to remind her, she only think about one thing is to get away of this place, the most important is that she does not touch again the skooma...
      Glad you like seeing what they do day after day, but for the next part I will shorten a little, otherwise the whole story is going to happen here

      You perfectly described the purpose of Ogbalf in making fighting Frankhof and Sunniva, especially not to make them too confident.
      It is true that there are risks that she manufactures her own skooma with her new skills in alchemy, but Ogbalf had already think about this possibility and he take all precautions in learning.
  8. Corfus
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    Nice chapter Basstos, he sure knows how to test them, and just as they think they did a good job he puts them down by saying that was only a weaker one

    Wonderful characters and interesting story with beautiful pictures
    1. deleted6889352
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      Many thanks Corf!
      Indeed, Ogbalf congratulated them, but he did not want them to think they are invulnerable.
      Glad you like the story and the characters
  9. amnis
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    Awesome work, my friend!
    1. frank213
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      I agree with you
    2. Queenieangel
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      Me too!!
    3. deleted6889352
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      Thank you very much dear Amnis, Frank and Angie
  10. dmakte
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    excellent chapitre ! Une grande guerrière est née !!!
    1. deleted6889352
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      Merci beaucoup l'ami