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One seeking the answer to a riddle among shadows and rumors

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  1. deleted6889352
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    Nice tale of Honey Stripes, his story is full of mysteries and very well told, great work, I can not wait to see more
    1. Kamikazekossori
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      Je suis content que tu aime le mystère de son histoire, qu'elle est bien écrite, elle va certainement apparaitre encore pour conter plus son histoire
  2. Caelrya
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    Nothing better than get back on track with a new character story from you Liking it so far very much!
    1. Kamikazekossori
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      I am flattered that there is nothing better than getting back for a new tale of mine It is a joy to hear you are liking it very much, Cael ^^
  3. deleted1123719
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    Wow, nice start to Honey Stripes' tale. I LOVE the way you captured the unique way Khajiit speak; I could almost hear that feminine rasping of a female Khajiit as she told of her stealthy exploits. She seems a natural sort at moving in the shadows and going undetected. I wonder how she came to such skills? Very keen to see and read more of this little stealthy kitty!
    1. Kamikazekossori
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      It is reassuring to hear that it is a nice start to her tale, I am a touch nervous when starting a new one. Means a lot to me that you love the way I wrote that khajiit speak, that you cold almost hear her feminine rasping voice as she told of that night. She is indeed very adept at moving quietly among shadows, glad that comes through. How she came to have such skill will be revealed eventually, all I will say is that she had a mentor Great to hear you are keen to read more of Honey Stripes ^^
  4. bohlingTVD
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    My next attempt to comment. Nexus is driving me crazy today!

    Honey Stripes tale is wonderfully written Alexi!
    She is a very interesting char, and i really like her!
    Great images too! The one with the disguised Honey Stripe and only one moon stripe showing her face, is incredible!
    1. Kamikazekossori
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      The nexus was being quite difficult for me last night as well.

      I am very glad you enjoyed the writing Heidi
      Warms my heart that you really like her and that you find her interesting ^^
      With Honey Stripes I seem to pay more attention to the play of light, I am flattered you find it incredible
  5. Heaventhere
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    Amazing story that Maven is a slippery one, she has more on the go then anyone, Riften in her pocket, the Dark Brother Hood, her shady dealing with the Thalmor. She has her butt covered 3 ways till Sunday as they say. I do hope that Honeysripes is careful when dealing with her, she is not one to mess with. Nocturnal must have a reason to send her to find the sly fox for it seems their path will cross very soon. My this Khajiit can help the Fox find what she seeks also. Really great and wonderful shots. Wonderful story and love how it is told in first person.

    Looking forward to the next chapter and seeing where this goes for this amazing Khajiit
    1. Kamikazekossori
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      She sure has a hand in many a scheme that Maven, always very keen on gaining more power over others in her dealing with many, thinking nothing of betraying one if it advantages her, truly ruthless. It is true that she hides her dealings well, people there to hide the trail of her misdeeds. Honey Stripes is always a very careful one, she has a good idea how dangerous she is, she will keep out of her sight. She must have indeed but those reasons are always a mystery, she is sure to find the sly fox soon indeed. With that spying skill I think you are quite right that she may be able to help. So glad you found the shots wonderful. Thanks a bunch, I am happy you love that perspective

      Her path is sure to lead closer to some answers for her and things that will intrigue her
  6. wolfgrimdark
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    A very cool story Kami. Great description of how stealthy she is - the way you described the possible ways to enter the city without letting the guards know was very good and helped set the tone of who this character is and her background in stealth.

    Then the way you worked all of this into the rest of the story was superbly done. All the little details on how she snuck around, spied on Maven, opened the gate to the back door, and sneaking around in the house - so well done.

    Looking forward to seeing how she will solve the riddle that Nocturnal has posed for her :-)
    1. Kamikazekossori
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      Wonderful to hear you find it so cool, Wolfgrimdark ^^ I am glad I described how stealthy she is in a way that brings out who she is and that experience she has in remaining unseen, she certainly trained for quite the while to be so elusive.

      I do like to weave a descriptive thread that appears throughout a story, with those small details as she wanderer under the moon, slipping into that home with careful steps, was quite fun to write.

      She does hope to find some answers when speaking to the laughing fox, she might get closer to solving it
  7. Corfus
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    Great writing as always your descriptions are so vivid and clear I even felt I was hiding in the shadows reading it. Great Images too, this khajiit might even start talking like Khajiit
    nice work Kami
    1. Kamikazekossori
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      I am delighted that my descriptions made it feel as if you were sneaking alongside her through the moonlight, hiding in shadowy corners ^^ I am glad you liked the images as well, hehe, seems this one might indeed

      Thanks very much, Corfus
  8. sunsi
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    Your writing style is masterful, Kamikazekossori, a wonderful reading experience. Your incredible screenies back up the story line beautifully (not forgetting the amount of hard work and time involved in putting this together!) Thank you, for sharing your talent and imagination.
    1. Kamikazekossori
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      Means a lot to me that you find my writing style so great, Sunsi, that is makes the tale an enjoyable read. I am so glad to hear the shots back up the words in a beautiful way (certainly takes some time and work to gather the shots and write the tale Makes me happy to share, to put those tale ideas into words ^^
  9. cila81
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    Wonderful story, Alexi! And stunning shots I love how you captured the Khajiit perfectly by telling the story in first person.
    1. Kamikazekossori
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      Thanks a bunch, Cecilie ^-^ glad you really enjoyed the shots and the tale. It is a joy to hear that I captured her so well by telling the tale in her perspective
  10. Nataly1q2w3e4r5t
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    Awesome beginning of a new story with new character and great atmospheric shots! The whole chapter was so wonderful written, it was great to see that it was written in khajiit manner of speech since Honey Stripes was telling her story, and khajiit ways of talking has very unusual style and also very compelling. So Honey Stripes story will soon be entwined with Edrelle's, I think, because it seems like Nocturnal destined them to meet at one point...
    I think they have something in common, Edrelle and Honey Stripes, both are stealthy, sly and prefer non violent way to approach anything they encounter... It was very interesting that only Maven seemed to sense Honey Stripes presence on the streets despite her stealthy skills when others did not. And Maven has a lot of secrets, that basement gave me creeps so Honey Stribes was very perceptive to describe her as ruthless.
    Seems like for now Honey Stripes would have a hard time trying to make senses of Nocturnal's puzzling words, no wonder that this Daedra is called Nocturnal the Unfathomable. I will be looking forward for continuation and thank you for sharing your wonderful work!
    1. Kamikazekossori
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      Lovely to hear you found it an awesome beginning, the moonlit hours in Riften's streets do bring a certain feel. I am very glad you enjoyed the writing, those words as if spoken in Honey Stripes' voice, was indeed quite the unusual chapter to write, that it is compelling makes the work worth it. Nocturnal is very interested in the both of them it seems and you are right that their tales will be woven together...
      I like how you described the things the two have in common, they are similar sorts indeed the two of them, their approaches stealthy and sly. Maven is quite the paranoid sort so she has a certain instinct for a sort approaching from the shadows. She sure does have many secrets, that basement had her quite unsettled too, she is the perceptive type and Maven leaves a lot of signs of her ruthless side. Nocturnal does always speak to her in riddling words as if she quite enjoys seeing her trying to figure them out, she never gives much away, she has earned that name for sure. I am glad you look forward to the next part, thank you so much for your thoughts on the tale ^^