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The Defiance of Morvehloth - Part V

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  1. aok
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    Sad. But just.
    Epic work Jess!
  2. bohlingTVD
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    She killed her father. That`s hard, but her father was not a real human, he was a monster, and i`m glad that she did it.
    Perhaps the only way to be truly free!
  3. bison1967
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    Very emotional chapter, jess! I was happy to see that the father was killed! I hope his soul is tormented for an eternity, deep within the bowels of the Abyss. =)
    1. deleted1123719
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      Oh I think he'll have a special place in Oblivion.
      Thanks dear!
  4. AmadanBezerk
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    Woo-Hoo!! The ol' tyrant-b*stard is dead! Celebration time.....actually NO, It's HIGH time now for these two young ladies to disa-f**king-pear in a big hurry, immediately after dealing with those manacles, quickly gathering a pile of coin, and some travelling necessities!^^
    Yes, there WILL be ONE helluva hornet's nest drop-kicked soon....maybe they can delay the alarm for a bit by quietly stripping and hiding all that bloody bedding, maybe in an armoire, with the filthy carcass wrapped in it, and quickly re-making the bed neatly with fresh and clean quilts, but that might be a chore....^^

    It is usually not considered polite to speak ill of the dead, but in this particular case, HOW can you NOT?! Bwahahahahahaha!
    Well, Mirvynis was a(n) (IG)Noble, wasn't he? So he died in a typical and MOST fitting manner for a particularly cruel and capricious Ignoble. (pun intended)

    What is VERY atypical about this particular patricide, is that daughter Vivyne has NO intention of trying to take over the Family and all it's operations for herself, even if she also happens to "off" all of her older bros as well, who would all, in reality be in the way of her total inheritance....HAH! Ya right...Like daddy was actually ever gonna give her even a pittance of one to begin with....^^

    Much to her daddy's VERY brief chagrin^^, Vivyne proved, with some cold steel to his throat, that she actually possesses three very precious and TRULY Noble things which he's never had: Heart, Conscience, and Soul.

    I just LOVED that line: "His slaving days were over." That immediately put a big, savage smile of pure, sadistic satisfaction on my face!
    Swiftly endorsed. Warm and kind thanks, Jess, and cheers, dear!
    1. deleted1123719
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      Thanks dearie, glad you enjoyed this (I know you love a good bit of vengeance Vlad style) and I don't think they're going to hang around and wait for the fit to hit the shan!!

      Cheers hon.
  5. derek98
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    Wow Jess! That was excellent.

    I'm gonna like Viv, she takes zero crap. My kinda girl!
    1. deleted1123719
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      Hehehe, thanks hon!
  6. pottoply
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    Wow, such a touching and intense story you've written.
    Kishanis fate just made me sad
    At least her father was caught up by justice...
    1. deleted1123719
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      Thanks Pott, yes it was a bit sad really.
  7. PanTast
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    Great. Revenge.
    This is so well thoughout. I love it.

    Btw: what sword is she holding in her left hand at the last image?
    1. deleted1123719
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      Thanks Pan, the sword is a Perfect Silver Scimitar from the Immersive Weapons mod. One of my favourite swords in the game!
  8. Nataly1q2w3e4r5t
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    Oh, wow, such intense and powerful chapter and finally Vivyne had extracted her revenge against her monster of a father! Another wonderfully written intense chapter about her upbringing, how her great self will helped her to stay alive and sane when those of weaker minds would have broken upon such emotional and mental torture that Mirvynis had inflicted upon Vivyne. the scene where she still had a strength to bury her fallen friend was very powerful as well as decision that she made.
    Indeed Vyvyne was right, she was a slave to her father, his rules and their Great House traditions but it takes great courage to be free of them... i think no one will mourn Mirvynis, he was really a beast in Dunmer form. I am so hoping that Vivyne would escape from her household and it would be right to take that Bosmer girl with her, or her fate will be very much like Kishani’s...
    1. deleted1123719
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      Thanks dear! I thought you'd like Viv - a very strong capable woman!
  9. gucky2010
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    I'm speechles by this great V Part of your Story my Dear Vivyne.

    1. deleted1123719
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      Thanks Gucky!
  10. wolfgrimdark
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    Great story, glad she did what she did. Now lets hope she escapes okay! Very intense writing! Not a lot I can say at the moment beyond the fact that it is a brilliant build up to a her backstory.

    EDIT: I did have a few more thoughts. She shouldn't have actually offed dear ole dad. Perhaps cut off his balls, his tongue, and pluck out his eyes. Then it would have been a slower death or a life of despair.

    Also the images - like glass in their sharp clarity and crisp, clean colors. Really wonderful images I would have commented on before if I hadn't been so sucked into the story.

    The character - awesome. Those warpaints on the eyes fit her perfectly, she looks amazing. Like the short hair, the full lips, her overall creation is excellent.
    1. deleted1123719
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      Thanks dear, love your comments as always!!