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   deleted1123719

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   06 November 2013, 6:29AM

   Sorry all! I didn't realise I hadn't thanked you warmly for endorses and comments for this series. Let me rectify that; THANK YOU!!!!
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      zeroxee

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      28 November 2013, 5:31PM

      NO PROBLEM about that, cause i am late at reading... again... so let me rectify; WELL DONE writing this part!
      
      
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   aok

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   05 November 2013, 6:29AM

   Heh heh heh, It seems the Thalmor have overlooked yet another threat!!
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   02 November 2013, 2:53PM

   These are so exciting jess and great images as well!
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   eluuene

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   02 November 2013, 8:13AM

   the action is becoming more tense...!
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   02 November 2013, 12:33AM

   Very nice shots jess!!
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   SydneyB

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   01 November 2013, 8:05PM

   I love Asha more and more, Jess! Well done!
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   MsFrankenstein

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   01 November 2013, 7:28PM

   I do have to say I love reading these short notions of hers.
   Truly a delight to read your texts when they are right down to the point and kept short, while still being able to put every thought and feeling into them while kept short and consisten-..somethingthewordescapesme.
   
   Great work however with Asha!
   
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   Nataly1q2w3e4r5t

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   01 November 2013, 6:42PM

   Awesome new chapter, wonderfully written with great shots! Let say, Thalmor are also not in the top of my list and it was fantastic to read Asha's observations about them, how little they really understand that lies beyond their usual perceptions of the world. Great piece about Maven too, this woman's arrogance is truly unmatched, it like she thinks she is like Daedra - invincible and immortal, while she is still human, though with very impressive influence and connections.
   
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   Corfus

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   01 November 2013, 4:38PM

   Wonderful Jess
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    Kamikazekossori

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    01 November 2013, 3:35PM

    I really like the way Asha, saw beyond all of Elenwen's delusions of power, seeing how she was blind to just how precarious her position was, a dagger's blade does hang over her yet she does not see it. That part with that mer not comprehending the forging of her blades show her usual superior attitude, at least she is happy to have them. It is intriguing how she passes through those important moments leaving a greater mark than she thinks ^^
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    01 November 2013, 1:41PM

    Great work, Jess! Love it!