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   bison1967

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   20 April 2013, 11:02PM

   An enthralling story, jessb! Interesting plot, intriguing characters and beautiful imagery to go along with it. Brilliant work! =)
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      21 April 2013, 8:10AM

      Thanks Bison!
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   SydneyB

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   13 April 2013, 7:22PM

   Awesome shots and great story, Jess! I love this trio (and still, Quin is my favourite XD)
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      14 April 2013, 2:07AM

      Hehe, I'm very fond on my cheeky sneaky archer too Syd!
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   aok

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   13 April 2013, 11:11PM

   Great job my friend! Awesome character development.
   Great last shot of Quin listening in. I want to trust the guy but can't help but feel that he's up to something!
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      deleted1123719

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      14 April 2013, 2:07AM

      Yeah me too! Thanks my friend!
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   zeroxee

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   14 April 2013, 12:39AM

   Hmm... now thats something to wonder.. was it really something in the Collage Quin is suppose to do, or be... maybe he hides something.. hmm, intriguing!
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      14 April 2013, 2:07AM

      He's too smooth talking!
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   Kamikazekossori

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   13 April 2013, 3:38PM

   Such a wonderful start to a new part of their tale, Jess ^^ Your description of that battle is so well crafted, Kyra's focus even as flames dance about her, the fury of storms flowing from her palm, the screams of the rogue sorceress, the smells of the burning lighting the din of steel and the exertions of battle, all those details really immerse you in the tension of it all. The college sure is not relaxing place for an adventurer, always a task to do, given with little warning of what might be found in cave of ruin, mages too busy to teach lost as they are in their research, one can quite understand her feelings and that great weariness after such work. Seems on their journey Kyra an Quin often get lost in conversation the impatient one always interrupting, his gruff voice setting the walking once more. That moment between Azgrak and Quin and that hunger great enough to eat Horkers was so amusing, as were their nicknames for each other, it is great to see them get along for a moment. Kyra's conversation with Quin is very interesting, sharing their thoughts of having met for some purpose, another truth hidden among his words, a mysterious little inkling of another reason hidden. Of course Kyra caught that inkling, perceptive as she is, pondering with her beloved one about what could hide behind his words. You really weaved a wonderful intrigue into the tale with this chapter. Your shots as ever are beautiful, emotion, action and landscapes fitting so well with the words. Will be very interested to see what happens next
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      14 April 2013, 2:06AM

      Thank you my dear! This was a good one o write as it really focused me in on the story I want to tell over the next few instalments. Glad you liked it and I appreciate your kind and insightful comments as alway!
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   hitmaqn78

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   13 April 2013, 11:33AM

   I agree. Great shots and story, jess!
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      13 April 2013, 12:10PM

      Thanks hitmaqn and good to see you about again!
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      hitmaqn78

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      13 April 2013, 4:10PM

      Thanks, it good to see you again too.
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   Nataly1q2w3e4r5t

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   13 April 2013, 1:22PM

   Fantastic series of shots, intense action captures and more serene shots with cozy atmosphere at home. The heroes look fantastic in their old style too, so for me it wasn't a big deal to see Kyra with her previous hairstyle and Azgrak in his old armor.
   Awesome new chapter, so beautifully written and emotional! I understand Kyra's disdain towards College, I think she had imagined something grand, filled with ancient mysteries and power but not tours for the dust filled tombs in search for the lost books. Not only that is more then boring but very dangerous as well, the sorcerers who dwelt there gave them a hard time. I loved Kyra conversation with Quin, oh, he is a sly one and sure knows his way with words, told her so much but still his true purpose remained hidden. I think Azgrak continues to feel uneasiness and jealousy in his presence, judging from his comments toward archer and he doesn't believe Quin at all. I wonder what he had done in Riften, so he wouldn't like to return there too... So many possibilities, though I am very glad they all decided to travel together. I am looking forward to see their next adventures, thank you very much for sharing your wonderful work!
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      13 April 2013, 2:10PM

      My pleasure Nat and thank you for your lovely feedback and kind words as usual! I love your comments and insight my dear!
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   13 April 2013, 11:05AM

   Awesome work indeed. Beautiful pics and a great story as I think after reading the first part. Seems you are a writer, photographer and artist in one person!
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      13 April 2013, 12:09PM

      Thanks heaps Startrooper!