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The tale of the laughing fox part 42 - Words and thoughts drifting like snowflakes among the pines

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  1. Queenieangel
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    This is a wonderful work, Alexi!! I like the story!!
    1. Kamikazekossori
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      It is great to hear you liked the story, Angie
  2. Liadys
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    Sorry for the delay and unconstructiveness of the comment. While I'd love to make it a long one..all I can bring myself to say is amazing work ! Absolutely loved this chapter. The banter between the characters was very pleasant and also shows the chemistry between the group.

    Nicely done !
    1. Kamikazekossori
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      There is no need to apologize, my friend. I am very happy you loved this chapter, that you enjoyed the banter among Edrelle and her friends, I always like showing the chemistry between them through writing that dialogue
  3. Gwanuneg
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    Excellent work!
    1. Kamikazekossori
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      Many thanks, Gwanuneg
  4. wolfgrimdark
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    Great new story Alexi - I was wondering if you would grace us with another adventure with Edrelle! I know how it goes with writing and so many other games out there now to distract oneself with. Do you think you will play Fallout 4? Do you write stories for any other games or just Skyrim?

    Anyhow back to the story - a nice start-off with Tacita giving Dimitri a little friendly pat on the back and showing her strength. But Dimitri seems very easy going and takes it all in stride. I think he knows he isn't the muscle of the group afterall.

    Pleasant banter between the group as they walked through the crunchy snow and made me wonder if perhaps another brother has taught someone a few things abour reading things in nature. Great shots - I really like the top down one as the snowy road looks really good in it. Good line about the mountains, hunger, and sweetroll as our mind will play tricks like that and turn patterns into things our minds are dwelling on.

    They found a few more clues on the one they follow - although knowing they are a Mer still leaves a lot of possibilities! Hopefully they will learn a few more things later. Fate has a way with intervening ... or other forces knowing Skyrim. A great way to end the tale with Edrelle and Dimitri together - they are so sweet and wonderful together. So true that one should grab pleasure and happiness when you can as it can come and go at a moments notice.

    Thanks for the new story and looking forward to learning about the one they follow!

    1. Kamikazekossori
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      Thanks a bunch Jonathan - was only a matter of time before I wrote another, they still have some way to go in their adventures. I did find quite a few distractions from my tales in other games, I have a few I am playing now. I think it is very likely I will play fallout 4, it looks amazing from what I have seen. So far I have only written stories for Skyrim, but perhaps there will be an incarnation of the laughing fox in the wasteland

      Hehe, Tacita does give some very solid pats on the back, none can deny her strength when she gives them one. Dimitri has no illusions about being the muscle in the group and you are right that he is easy going.

      Happy you liked that banter between the group as they wandered that frosted forest, was wanting to give another little glimpse into the pasts of Edrelle and Dimitri. I am glad you like the shots - I find those roads look best from a top down angle, they blend better into the snow. Had some fun with that line about the snow looking like sweetroll icing, things do take on other appearances when one has something on their mind that is true.

      The group is hoping for a few more clues might narrow down the possibilities, perhaps they will get some help with that from an unexpected source. Was so nice to write that last part with the playful couple together and I am delighted you like it, they don't take any moment they spend together for granted knowing the dangers of those lands.

      Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the tale, I look forward to revealing more about the one they seek
  5. RatherWindy
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    Very nice story, with the new realtionship of edrelle and Dimitri very well catched. Reading it it felt like these two were not in love for long,...
    Very nice shots also of the group as they make their way to Winterhold in chase of the thief,..
    Great chapter,.. i'll be looking out for the next,..
    1. Kamikazekossori
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      Though it is true that their relationship is still relatively new, Edrelle and Dimitri have become quite close in their journeys together, sharing that playfulness.
      I am really glad you like those shots of their path to Winterhold.
      Thank you very much, Janswin
  6. Heaventhere
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    Wonderful chapter..... seems they are close to the thief........... not far behind........ getting excited to see who it is and the rest of the story....... have always wondered just who it was ........ my favorite part is the travel as you describe it with such care...... and that last few moments of the night as they cuddle in together ....... time for just the Archer and the Fox...... most romantic
    1. Kamikazekossori
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      It is great to hear you enjoyed this chapter, Shelley, that thief they are chasing is indeed still in reach, the group is wondering as you are about his identity. Means a lot that the description of their travel was your favorite part. I am glad you liked the romantic moments archer and fox shared as well, it makes me smile when I write about them
  7. derek98
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    Wonderfully evocative episode Alexi.
    1. Kamikazekossori
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      I am flattered you thought it to be so evocative, Derek, had fun with the descriptions in this chapter
  8. raccoondance
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    Really enjoyed the images and the story, Alexi
    1. Kamikazekossori
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      I am very glad you enjoyed the tale and the shots, Raccoondance
  9. Anataron
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    Great to see the band of Friends around Edrelle again! Quite the joyful aswell as beautiful journey through the frozen regions of Skyrim they had in this Part; and I think well deserved rest for all of them in the cozy Inn of Winterhold at the End.

    Glad to see they found some Information on their Target; even if only very sparse still and not as helpful as it might have been if they had learned more

    Really liked the bright shots in this one; aswell as the more clouded ones as they crossed the pass towards Winterhold. Very well done Images and writing!
    1. Kamikazekossori
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      I am happy you found it great to see the great friends together again. With the peacefulness of their journey that day they did get to enjoy the sights of that wintery place, it put them all in quite the good mood and the reaching the cozy inn did make for a nice end to the day.

      The bit of information that they did get from Haran was better than nothing, another piece of the puzzle of who their target is

      It is good to hear you liked those bright shots, was a lovely clear day and I tried to capture a bit of that in my shots. Thank you very much, Alex