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Drekimunr - Broken Innocence - Ch19 - Part 1

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  1. User_6005213
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    So well written ! Usually, I don't necessarily read because english can be difficult and long to be understood, but your lovely character made me want to read it Great work !
    1. Liadys
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      Thank you dear ! English is not my main language actually. I'm flattered that my character made you want to read the story !
  2. Shutt3r
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    Awesome job. I could really feel her "inner" smile before the shot, the whistling sound of the arrow etc.etc. Very well done !!
    1. Liadys
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      Thank you dear ! Means alot to me to know that you could 'feel' what was going in the tale !
  3. wolfgrimdark
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    Well Rhiannon is a very cool character - a cold hearted mercenary out to earn some coin with a good eye and aim it seems. I liked how you carried our her job and hew attitude about it. Well written that gave a good sense of what she was like ... at least in the present time. Also shows that she values honor based on her musings of the past with the twins. Nice way to connect the dots as well add some additional insight into her personality in regards to her hitting on Sigyn.

    I also really liked how she senses the aura Despair has been cloaking Windhelm in lately - most likely affecting the entire town in the process. Probably easy to feed on itself what with the civil war and cold adding to everyone's misery even before Despair showed up. Some well done shots worked into the detail too.
    1. Liadys
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      Thank you Jon ! Glad you liked this chapter as well as Rhiannon ! Well if she appeared cold-hearted..then it wasn't in my intention for her to seem the that sort. She does have a heart, but she still is a mercenary out for gold. It is basically her trade just as much as smiting is a blacksmith's trade. I suppose her bosmer heritage does play quite a bit in her good eye and aim along with alot of training. She does value honor quite a bit, to it being important in such a trade..as it give you some kind of credibility toward anyone who would hire you. Who would hire someone that have no honor, that cannot go by their own word? It was good to give some more insight about Rhiannon herself but as well a bit on the twins but in the point of view of someone completely outside the family.

      I think anyone traveling to Windhelm can quite sense Despair's aura looming over the city like a dark shadow. More perceptive people probably sense it more. The city probably looked like a all-you-can-eat buffet to Despair when she got there, with all the misery caused by the war and the weather itself is more then enough to sustain Despair.

      Thank you for your comment and feedback dear
    2. wolfgrimdark
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      Ah good to know as I was not sure. I think my view was biased a little as I really like the gentle giants who overall seem pretty easy going ... and I think might be the original natives (or one of them at least). So when she killed one it probably tilted me in that direction.

      However that is what being a mercenary is - doing a job and doing it well. I worry about that with Grim sometimes - something I did not explore as much as I had planned. Maybe in Book 4.

      I think Rhiannon is correct though - honor is paramount for a merc. If your word can't be trusted (especially in that day and age) you are nothing. Doesn't mean you have to be good - but as a merc. you have to always honor your contract. Of course that means begin careful about what you sign up for as well. Not only for self-preservation but because not all mercs are cold-hearted and evil - some are good and therefor may only take jobs that are morally comfortable with.

      So perhaps Rhiannon is more of a neutral to possible neutral good merc? Or perhaps like Falion who can be both cold and warm depending on what is involved I think very few people have absolutes.

      Sorry got sidetracked again. Thanks for the added detail Lia!
    3. Liadys
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      Giants are gentle till provoked or one of their mammoth is harmed...so sadly in this case some traveler must of ticked one off for it to get a bounty on it's head. And Rhiannon being a merc/ adventurer picked the bounty up. She did the job effectively..and i'd like to think the giant didn't suffer as the kill came swiftly.

      I tend to forget that Grim is a merc himself, i do see him more often then not as an adventurer.

      On that Rhiannon and Sigyn actually share the same point of view about honor being paramount in their line of work. Having honor doesn't mean you are good...simply means you can be trusted. I believe that most people would rather hire a mercenary that can be trusted rather then the best if his/her word isn't worth anything. They always have the choice to take or refuse to take a job if it is not fitting of their morality...though those that get desperate and take just about any job regardless of the moral nature of the work do tend to give mercs a bad name.

      Rhiannon would be more a neutral, Neutral good merc. Though sometimes a bit more on the chaotic side..as she's not always the exemplary law-abiding citizen. Faolin is an other kind of neutral...one many would say on the more evil side as he is an assassin. He becomes cold in favor of a kill...yet he is not without remorse about all the blood on his hands..sweet irony. It's always better to deal in tones a grey for characters i think, makes them more...human-like if we could say. Much more depth to them then if it was an absolute good or absolute evil.

      I don't mind the sidetracking hehe, was a pleasure to provide more information
  4. aok
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    Oh I like her! Cold, calculating effective. Too good to be wasting her time with giants. I suspect that is about to change.
    Brilliant work dear.
    1. Liadys
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      Glad you like this new character dear ! Now i wouldn't say she's too good to be wasting her time with giants...money is money for her..sure the bounty wasn't the most paying job she got, but they can't be all worth ton of gold. But you are right about the other part, it's all about to change for dear Rhiannon.

      Thank you for your comment dear !
  5. deleted1123719
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    Hmm, I instantly like this new addition to the Siblings' story. She seems bold, confident and well-skilled. She looks great too. Interesting that she picked up on something amiss at Windhelm. Is she sensing Despair's presence there?? I wonder...
    1. Liadys
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      Glad you liked this new addition Jess dear ! Been eager to finaly present the character of Rhiannon. Bold, confident, skiller...and crude in her way of speaking...but that'll be shown later. She'll be a really fun character. She also bring an all new point of view on some of the siblings...namely the twins. As for what she's sensing at Windhelm, most likely is Despair's foul presence...anyone that is a little perceptive might notice it that is just arriving in the city. Could almost compare Despair as dark stormy clouds looming above the city.
  6. Nataly1q2w3e4r5t
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    This is awesome and wonderfully written introduction of Rhiannon, fierce and determine lady mercenary! Great shots too, she is not only fierce but also very beautiful!
    It was very interesting too see the mercenary's point of view towards the situation in Skyrim, since mercenaries not often become the main hero. Rhiannon is very exceptional at her work too, certainly not everyone can take the giant down with just one arrow! With such great archery skills Rhiannon can try as a bodyguard too, since not only she is such fine archer she knows Skyrim so very well.
    Her memories of siblings was wonderful to see, like Sigyn scaring away her possible lovers away with her armored fists and handsome Faolin who appeared to be quite a ladies man! Only he did not interest Rhiannon, who seemed to be interested only into ladies herself, given her attempt with Sigyn. I bet always conservative lady as Sigyn was shocked to hear Rhiannon proposition!
    I am looking forward to see her interactions with Sigyn, since it is most likely they might meet in Windhelm! and Rhiannon is very perceptive too, for being no mage, she has sensed something off, which meant she had sensed Despair's aura in the city!
    1. Liadys
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      Thank you dear ! Glad you enjoyed this introduction to this lady mercenary that is Rhiannon ! She's fierce and determined...but she's also gonna have her crude way of speaking hehe. She'll be a fun one. Mercenaries usually aren't either the villain or the hero...since they are more on their own side. She's got quite the exceptional skill set with archery..probably enhanced by her bosmer heritage. Being a scout, bodyguard job could also suit her.

      It's always nice to explore memories of some people in the eyes of an outsider. Sigyn scaring away any possible lover while Faolin on his side seemed to have been quite the ladies man. Surprisingly enough, Rhiannon was not interested in him..but was actually interested in ladies and Sigyn in particular. Oh it surely was quite a surprise for Sigyn to hear Rhiannon proposition and find out her preference..though she might not of judged Rhiannon for it. Simply told her she wasn't interested.

      They are quite likely to run into one an other in Windhelm, it'll be quite interesting to see how things unfold ! Well i don't think anyone would have to be a mage to feel that there is something off in the air. Just need to not have been affected by Despair's aura to feel it some i think. But being a scout might also make her a bit more perceptive then most.

  7. Rincevent69
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    Great work Liadys!
    1. Liadys
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      Thank you dear !
  8. blu377
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    Splendid work Liadys, I loved the way she took the giant down with one swift arrow (David & Goliath style ) I'm very eager to find out what's putting our heroine at unease at Windhelm. I'll be tracking this
    1. Liadys
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      Thank you dear ! Glad you liked this chapter !
  9. YSmonstar
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    Nice work!
    1. frank213
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      I agree with you
    2. Liadys
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      Thank you my friends !