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And it seems their follower from the previous night is still with them.
And Forsworn... I suspect a trial by fire ahead for these two.
Nicely done, both pics and story! Now on to the next...
Great work!
This was a great read - felt like being along with them as you described the land, the weapons they were wearing (along with some cool history and hints about wealth when you mentioned the scimitar and castle) and some of the contempt Araelia seems to have towards the lower classes.
Nice little cliffhanger as well and I did indeed recognize that man
Thanks, again dear.
The descriptions of scenery were beautiful and cool to see Arissa and Araelia go to their new mission so well armed. The story of how they acquired each weapon is fascinating and it seems that at least Eorlund, along with Kodlak doesn't behave like a jerk towards Araelia. Forsworn are fearsome foes, so I hope sisters know with whom they will be dealing with...
And about the mysterious man... oh, such shame on me to forget the exact look of one of your characters! Although in the last chapter the main emphasis was made on his eyes and now I can see his face. Given his life, his loss and especially from whom he suffered such loss, and his desire for revenge, I've thought that he might find out about Companions one day and now he follows "Scarlet" sisters... interesting! I am looking forward for continuation!
I think a story should always have a little background on things like how they came to their skills and / or weapons. Adds a little realism... That's one of the reasons I love your saga so much; you have so much DEPTH to Dannee. Like a whole novel could be written about her background alone!
Speaking of the lovely Dannee.... when are we going to have a new chapter?
Thank you for your kind words about the depth of Dannee's story! And speaking of future chapter, the shots are already done, so I just need to write it all up... last week kept me totally busy with work and home chores, however maybe this week will prove to be a little less crazy for me, so I might write the new chapter.
And yes... little Rae DOES like the finer things in life!!
great pictures and a great story