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  1. goranpaa
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    I think you should try and write a fantasy book really. I have seen a lot of your stories and you have a talent for this.
    1. Zella
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      Thank you for your kind words. I like to entertain people here though & help add to this community & entertain people who are entertaining me. ;-D
  2. Dennywood
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    Nicely developed again.
    About children, I know that they take lot of place in a bed, no care if it's large or not...
    1. Zella
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      Thank you. Dogs & cats will take the bed also. At least the cats make a warm quilt in the winter. ;-D
  3. Malachi Delacot
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    Amazing how you made something as simple as going to bed so interesting.
    ...wait... that did not sound right.
    I mean ending the day, not the adult thingie...
    1. Zella
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      Thank you. I was worried it would be pretty boring without any battles or explosions. Wait.explosions are for movies & TV. ;-D

      But, yes there are a lot of things going on that do not show & a lot of things to consider if you are the thoughtful type or have experience. Those things can enrich the story, or make it really boring. ;-)
  4. Mithanas
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    It's very beautiful.The part where Astrala said: "I always slept next to my mother. It was warm & safe. She kept bad dreams away. " is very sweet. I hope that Astrala and Zira make good friends. I think that they can even be like sisters ^^
    1. Zella
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      Thank you for the encouragement. Poor Zira should be like a sister but also must stand in for mother without really having the experience to do so.
  5. Harvald
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    Good night Astrala and may the Nine be with you.