Shame you don't have a cait yet, I'm using both curie and piper ones but I haven't found a cait that is a pretty as piper is now! Haven't got curie on synth form yet thou
I'll give you some constructive criticism, each of the eyes (including the width in-between) are too big for the rest of the face, the eye width is practically the size of the mouth; the eyes & brow may also be slightly too high up on the face, especially for a more feminine/cute look. Also the nostrils appear rigid and unnaturally flared, somewhat like a gorilla.
Hope that helps.
PS. I think it has the potential to look a lot like Caitriona Balfe which would be interesting.
It looks good, nice aesthetics, taste. Just random designer passing by, saw your work and some weird comments, funny according to the fact that Bethesda can't make good looking humans, and you provided something better. Good luck.
Seraphic Creed, you know right, that ideal proportions in art and on good looking people from ancient Greece till modern standarts are: mouth same, or at least almost same size as eyes, and distance between eyes is the size of one eye? theres one thing that is really not that academic - length of nose bridge, but that happens in real life also, and those girls looked hot enough to start war over them, and the best part, not same blond clones walking over streets of my city lol.
btw, i also have the proportions i meantioned higher, except much smaler nostrils and thiner nose tip, so it's realistic not only for females, but men also.
@Adnan4444 Actually the ideal proportions for the mouth is that both corners should be in-line with the pupil, or there about. Which if you take a look at the screenshots, you can see, is not an evident feature.
Width of the eyes should also be apparent in-between the two eyes, the nose should be a similar width as the eye, not particularly the mouth. But these are just guidelines, it doesn't include other races or unique features.
I don't understand why you've gone on the defensive on behalf of Darkysoul, there's no need to mollycoddle him/her, if he/she disagrees they can speak for themselves.
"weird comments" pfft, it's called feedback.
I actually think Darkysoul has a better understanding of human proportions than you after reading that 'lecture'.
Everyone has their own opinion on beauty. Making her face absolutly perfect in accordance with the set standard can be boring sometimes. Besides, it's usually the small imperfections of another human that can draw us in. That being said, personally I like this piper a lot more because she reminds me of my GF.
Although that's just my opinion, it doesn't really matter because it's a game and we're free to have what we want because of modders like Darkysoul putting the time in to making things for us to play around with.
@Darkysoul Pls don't change her, I like this version.
Exactly, we have our opinions, and I think humans have certain biological rules & facial proportions that even ugly people's faces abide by to a degree.
SeraphicCreed, from what you have said, you didn't graduate any art based univeristy (or just maybe didn't do well to understand subjects?) and now don't work as professional artist, so sorry, with no offence, don't know what you want to prove, making amature suggestions on proportions, specially when mouth has to reach pupils only when it's in light smile, and again - from ancient Greece times, mouth has to be small enough in ideal, not a froglike being (note, I'm talking about classic understanding, but in works - it varies a lot, like in real life, otherwise all would be same. Apparently in my works it also depends and varies).
I'm not defending author, but basics of my proffesion at first place, if your knowledge is based on wiki or simmilar, - it's not a helper, i can change any info there as any smart enough; And i have the right to say anything in defence or offence, as it is directly involved in as you say - "feedback", and I don't want author to screw up work in future, bcz of someone, with whom currently I don't share opinion. Don't see things just from one side.
You can check my works in net, Severin Bjornsgaard on pixiv, and Palewinterart on deviant, I don't usually post anything, or new in free sources, bcz work directly with studios and agencies, and really don't need/have interest with represence in internet (my free time is mostly for my hobbies sports/games), just for fun published some paintings, book covers from my books and scetchs from about 10-7 years ago, that had in archives, from time when was a student mostly, but as example for jerky situations - even that is more then enough (write me personal message at any of thous sites (pls not under works), if need proof).
Also, on pixiv, on avatar, theres my old photo in early 20's (25 I guess), from what you can understand about ideal proportions from classics to now a days in real world even with males, that is very rare now, I was mentioning about it in previous message (mouth, nose, eyes). Our people are represented worldwide - as one of the most good looking (Ukraine/Russia), specially women, cuz men usually don't post their photos, and male models are something not that spread - so not all around world know, and with that fact, we have quite an amount of people with mouth the size of distance between eyes, nothing to do with pupils and with thin, accurate noses.
When you will provide any evidence that you also work in industry, then we can talk, otherwise you would be just a hater, talking about things that are far beyond your understanding and judging understanding of thous who actually does know, and does something with that knowledge).
Looks like this was last from me, and you won't have any professional relations to art, good luck, you can use other mod you like, hope author will keep up the good work and won't listen any amateurs in random posts, that's my lawfull feedback to mod ; )
Seraphic, when you push the generally accepted aesthetic proportions of the human face, you can get interesting and sometimes striking results. Look at the faces of some high fashion models. They can often look like aliens. It's not that your feedback isn't worthwhile, it's that it comes off as a little arrogant, especially your reply to Adnan.
This Piper is reminding me a bit of Eva Green, or Rose Byrne, or that Jessica Jones actress. Mostly in the sad eyes.
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Shame you don't have a cait yet, I'm using both curie and piper ones but I haven't found a cait that is a pretty as piper is now! Haven't got curie on synth form yet thou
Hope that helps.
PS. I think it has the potential to look a lot like Caitriona Balfe which would be interesting.
btw, i also have the proportions i meantioned higher, except much smaler nostrils and thiner nose tip, so it's realistic not only for females, but men also.
Actually the ideal proportions for the mouth is that both corners should be in-line with the pupil, or there about. Which if you take a look at the screenshots, you can see, is not an evident feature.
Width of the eyes should also be apparent in-between the two eyes, the nose should be a similar width as the eye, not particularly the mouth. But these are just guidelines, it doesn't include other races or unique features.
I don't understand why you've gone on the defensive on behalf of Darkysoul, there's no need to mollycoddle him/her, if he/she disagrees they can speak for themselves.
"weird comments" pfft, it's called feedback.
I actually think Darkysoul has a better understanding of human proportions than you after reading that 'lecture'.
Although that's just my opinion, it doesn't really matter because it's a game and we're free to have what we want because of modders like Darkysoul putting the time in to making things for us to play around with.
@Darkysoul Pls don't change her, I like this version.
I'm not defending author, but basics of my proffesion at first place, if your knowledge is based on wiki or simmilar, - it's not a helper, i can change any info there as any smart enough; And i have the right to say anything in defence or offence, as it is directly involved in as you say - "feedback", and I don't want author to screw up work in future, bcz of someone, with whom currently I don't share opinion. Don't see things just from one side.
You can check my works in net, Severin Bjornsgaard on pixiv, and Palewinterart on deviant, I don't usually post anything, or new in free sources, bcz work directly with studios and agencies, and really don't need/have interest with represence in internet (my free time is mostly for my hobbies sports/games), just for fun published some paintings, book covers from my books and scetchs from about 10-7 years ago, that had in archives, from time when was a student mostly, but as example for jerky situations - even that is more then enough (write me personal message at any of thous sites (pls not under works), if need proof).
Also, on pixiv, on avatar, theres my old photo in early 20's (25 I guess), from what you can understand about ideal proportions from classics to now a days in real world even with males, that is very rare now, I was mentioning about it in previous message (mouth, nose, eyes). Our people are represented worldwide - as one of the most good looking (Ukraine/Russia), specially women, cuz men usually don't post their photos, and male models are something not that spread - so not all around world know, and with that fact, we have quite an amount of people with mouth the size of distance between eyes, nothing to do with pupils and with thin, accurate noses.
When you will provide any evidence that you also work in industry, then we can talk, otherwise you would be just a hater, talking about things that are far beyond your understanding and judging understanding of thous who actually does know, and does something with that knowledge).
Looks like this was last from me, and you won't have any professional relations to art, good luck, you can use other mod you like, hope author will keep up the good work and won't listen any amateurs in random posts, that's my lawfull feedback to mod ; )
This Piper is reminding me a bit of Eva Green, or Rose Byrne, or that Jessica Jones actress. Mostly in the sad eyes.