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  1. BlackMaid
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    This chapter is a fantastic introduction of Proserpine. I was wondering in the first part, what is with this lady, who accompanied sagas' daughter. Now it starts to decouvert the mystery
    Well written and wonderful pics
    1. Kayol
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      Thank you, I'm glad you liked the story! Yeah, I had to somewhat ground the new trio in time and space, show where they come from and all that jazz ; ) and Proserpine, as a brand new character, needed a tiny bit more of an introduction.
  2. wolfgrimdark
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    Another wonderful gem of a story. I really like the male elf, Zeph I believe. Such a nice broad chest and very attractive. Something about his facial features I really like for some reason.

    https://farm5.staticflickr.com/4760/40311736282_a0fefbbea9_o.png

    The story itself was fun to read. I like how 3 "outcasts" joined together into a bit of a family. It was bitter sweet when Per left the group to go after her "spark".

    Your last sentence is a hard one and one I have been struggling with for the last year big time. I have a great job with an excellent salary and benefits ... and yet it has changed over the 25 years I have been there. I want something different but bills, responsibility, the dogs, common sense (lol), tell me to stay put. A gilded prison of my own making in some ways. At least I do have some options as many do not - locked into suffering and debt. Anyhow getting off track. Just that leaving the safety of prison isn't just about fear of the unknown and risk ... but also practicality and the reality of life.
    1. Kayol
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      Ooh, I like that one, too. Was he a standalone, I would totally dedicate a whole storyline to him - I mean, what's not to like about a beautiful grumpy Dunmer? You can get him here, by the way, just in case. He comes in a pack of different companions.

      I absolutely agree with you on the whole cage dilemma. Usually, we choose to stay confined since life is what it is and grand adventures are usually grand disasters in disguise. All we can do is embrace the prisons, expand them, and build universes of our own - a thing you do perfectly with your stories and worldbuilding, for example.

      Thank you for commenting, it's always a joy to hear from you!
  3. jumarbye
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    Wow! Your prose and their images are so poetic, painting vivid pictures in my mind, intriguing me to find out more of the story.
    1. Kayol
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      Great! I'm glad you liked the story. Thanks for the comment!
  4. Thunderstorm95
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    Oh my.... your way of writing gave me chills! In a positive way of course! Expecially the beginning... I love how the harsh world you depict reflects on your pics with dark shades Beautiful!
    1. Kayol
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      Oh, I'm really glad you enjoyed the story! Thank you for your comment
  5. fxdwgnexus
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    Very well done!
    Thank you for sharing.
    1. Kayol
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      And thank you for commenting!
  6. IheartRunningman
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    Gotta say he can be a cold, but he is very a good looking dunmer.
    1. Kayol
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      He is, isn't he? I found him here!
  7. Klaxoid
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    Great characters Kayol and superb writing

    You always make your characters come to life.
    1. Kayol
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      Thanks a bunch, glad you liked this installment!
  8. ista3
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    beautiful storyline and captures as always
    1. Kayol
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      Thanks, hon
  9. Xorp
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    He'll regret having her at the forge, but who would want to be trapped in Windhelm

    Great read and the formatting looks a lot better
    1. Kayol
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      That's a relief - I hate formatting so I try to go through with it as quick as possible, and that doesn't always pay off

      Thanks for commenting!