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The tale of the laughing fox part 49 - A familiar song and a familiar face
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The tale of the laughing fox part 49 - A familiar song and a familiar face
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The Thalmor have eyes and ears everywhere and that puts him in a dangerous position.
Brilliantly done Kami!
An awesome chapter to read with a nice warm cup of coffee
I am happy it made a great chapter to read with a cup of coffee in hand
it's nice to see that, even though being stubborn, edrelle is concerned about the old spies welfare and decides to follow him. Like how you described the meeting between these two grizzled veterans.
It seems that Tuine does know her i'lusion magic rather well and also has a goos sense of people on top of that, or this would have ended differently I presume,...
these two certainly go back a long time and I think you brought that across well,..
Edrelle is one to ignore the stubbornness of an old spy when it might be getting him into danger, she would be glad to her you approve. I am glad you like my description of the meeting of Carril and Tuine, they have both lived through much indeed.
Tuine is quite a talented mage in detecting spells cast around her and her time searching for Carril has taught her to read people, could have been a different meeting otherwise as you said.
It is good to hear that the sense of connection between the two of them from the past showed in what I wrote
It is always intriguing to know more about each character story and it is great to see the story of Carril and Tuine. Sad thing that it is such tragic story and the fact that after their separation by going to great measures to find Carril by becoming one of Thalmor Tuine only drew him away! I saw that there is a lack of trust he displayed to her since tlamor are very much despised folk and for good reason... sure she did her best to explain herself and Carrril seemed to soften in his heart but I guess the road to recovery of what was lost might take time and effort... Despite their meeting being somehow awkward still it is very heartwarming to see that there still might be a chance for them to move on from the past and maybe start over...
Edrelle with her concern about her friends is very endearing and she sure won't obey orders if there is a danger to her friend!
Thank you very much for sharing your wonderful work!
Edrelle is never one to stand around when a friend might be walking into danger even if one tells her not to get involved ;-)
Thank you very much for sharing your thoughts on the tale, Nataly
So it appears to have back-fired on her sadly for both of them. To lost loves in a way separated for so long. A somewhat tense and perhaps awkward meeting as well all things considered. It would have to be a pretty elaborate plot if it was really a trap - which I think it is not based on the way your wrote the story and knowing a little about how you write.
Twas good that Edrelle and Dar want to look out for Carril even if disobeying his orders. But really Edrelle seems somewhat the rebellious sort anyhow and I suspect obeying orders is only when it suits her.
So the whole band is back in Riverwood and we have gained a bit more history on some of the team. Some very poetic turn of words in the story (liked the wind blowing pine needles as a metaphor for memories going by). Beautiful, natural, and colorful images for the story. I think I like the one of Carrol in the last shot best - he has a nice look about him there.
Curious to see what you might have next Alexi
It is unfortunate that her decision to join the Thalmor only seemed to draw her further away from him, she was not able to follow leads on him freely with having to avoid suspicion. Awkward and tense are words that describe their meeting well, brought up a mix of emotion for both of them as well. You are right that it is not a trap, none want to catch Carril badly enough to warrant such a complex ruse, you do know how I write ;-)
Carril was being more stubborn than cautious in wanting to go alone which he could not hide from his friends. Edrelle is indeed not one to often obey orders, unless doings so protects her friends.
They are glad to be there, they are sure not waste the opportunity to have some respite in the village. I am glad you enjoyed that bit about the pine needles drifting like memories, I do like those poetic touches. I am also glad the images were natural and colorful. I did like Carril's expression in that last shot.
Edrelle has a few things to do in a city that she has been to a number of times and that is all I will say