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Lovely screenshots, too!
Another good chapter down.
Amazing chapter and great shots as always..........
Epic work!!
(He's VERY good at that....freaking telepath....^^
The haunting quality of Rathe's almost overpowering and heart-wrenching angst is quite jarring to say the least....while the observant Darius and Quin are probably strongly suspecting by now that he and Fleur are lovers.
Gee, whatever would possibly give them THAT clue?? ^^
Rathe can probably THROW those two farther than either I or he can and should trust them....
I sincerely hope that Fleur (at least) BURNS the Red Rose to right down to cinders, like the P.O. just did to their former "Sanctuary", but while letting all the girls there escape, with the obvious exception of ZuZu and her hired thugs of course.
Endorsed. Warm and kind thanks for this imminent emotional closure, Jess, and cheers, dear!
I love this chapter because it shows that side of Rathe we don't usually see (and may not again)... I also loved the lighting when I was taking some screenies here that let me pop off a few good shots!
Deep and moving story and I can see why you wanted this as a stand alone story. Something like this needs its own focus. A nice night of reading with these three tales - thanks for sharing them and ever more curious now to see how things will play out with Zuzu.
As you say, I thought it was important enough to separate out from the next chapter (especially in light of what the next chapter's about).
I think this might be the first time the real unmasked man that Rathe is (or could have been) is shown. This is the Rathe that might have been if the Albino had never darkened his doorstep. A big hearted guy, tender and gentle with nothing but love to share. Sigh...
I'm hoping to have the next chapter up tonight... be warned; it's a game changer.
There is still something unsettling about Quintis and Darius, the way they kept a watchful eye on the pair, their motivations and goals difficult to read in this whole situation. With the assault approaching those mysteries could be a danger. I hope Rathe will be vigilant if some surprise does arise for his sake and Fleur's. A wonderfully emotional chapter, my friend ^^
It was a short chapter but necessary I feel.
Thanks again dear.
Quin and Darius apparently has become friends... they don't seem bother of the future ambush at all, which is kinda strange and speaks either of their confidence in their skill or maybe something else, like some plot... yeah, I know, I am paranoid about those two but I don't trust them at all. Quin is like a basket of riddles and Darius given his long infatuation with Fleur seemed to be not bothered by her close relationship with Rathe this time, which is again strange...
I can understand why Rathe became so closed off, for him avenging Regan was like quest of lifetime and there was such hope in his heart when he saw her alive... only this hope at reunion was crushed and turned to dust, because Regan indeed has died many years ago and this twisted thing that occupies her body is Momma ZuZu, cruel, sadistic and vicious person, a monster in human hide... She almost destroyed him and Fleur and might do so in the future, for who knows how this ambush on Red Rose might end...
It was heartbreaking to see Rathe struggle with memories of his childhood, of Regan, of who she once was and who she might if not for that tragedy... and it is great thing that Fleur can reach him and his heart even without speaking any words... this silent understanding is like a sign of then being soulmates. Hope that they might have few moments like this in the future...
I am so looking forward for continuation and thank you very much for sharing your wonderful work!
This was a hard one for Rathe; he finally had to admit hat Regan is gone and tat ZuZu must die. The promise he made to Fleur is very important. This is my gift to you.
And Fleur finally shows a grown up side; being there to comfort Rathe for once without it being all about her. The little girl is growing up...
Wow rathe shows his vunerable side to fleur was so touching ...
Thanks hon.