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   Forgetmen0t

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   11 July 2018, 1:27AM

   Quite enjoyed this. The pompous 'hero' made me crack a smile at his private thoughts.
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      Kayol

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      11 July 2018, 2:42PM

      Great to know, thanks!
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   zeroxee

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   09 October 2013, 6:00PM

   The ending was like... "Oh my.. surprising!" - and i like'd how you told the tale, how they met, how his thoughts towards her.. great job!
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      gucky2010

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      26 December 2013, 11:34AM

      Kai fully agrees with you
      Great Job from you again my Dear
      

      
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   Benbenben

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   03 October 2013, 5:51AM

   Fantastic way to bring in Thaiden. For a moment there I was thinking he was to be the Dragonborn. I loved his inner narrative, so hilariously heroic, what an amazing character!
   Just another contract for Saga it seems but, with the way you write, there is no such thing as 'just another contract'. No matter how often you seem to do it - You've always managed to take me completely by surprise with your twists. Excellent work one again
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   aok

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   01 October 2013, 6:05AM

   Beautiful twist to the story! Loved it!!
   No, Saga is not the "Damsel in distress type"!
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   deleted1123719

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   30 September 2013, 10:33PM

   Fantastic!!! I love the way you turned the whole Dovakhin rising from the ashes of Helgen thing on its head! I love the way your mind works hon!
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   Nataly1q2w3e4r5t

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   29 September 2013, 9:35PM

   Amazing new installment, wonderfully written! I love it and the ending was absolutely unexpected! Poor Thaiden... To be at such loss, and his musings were described awesomely, his desire to be a hero, to think like a hero... although seriously he wasn't acting very much like one. He was more like one big walking comic relief, but Saga seemed to have other opinion of him and his thoughts about her as possible companion and love interest were hilarious, especially when he noticed she won't do, since she asks too many question and looks not like damsel in distress. It was total surprise to read such ending, for usually when heroine meets such comedic no real hero, she leaves him somewhere or brings him with her on a road of adventure where he will get a heart of lion and so on, yet your creativity amazed me, such end and especially Saga's thoughts about this particular contract... that what I've never read in fantasy books!
   Fantastic shots too, with great expression and posing and incredible atmosphere. Thank you very much for sharing your wonderful work!
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      Kayol

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      30 September 2013, 1:20PM

      Thank you, dear! Honestly, the story was about making my dreams come true - I usually don't like the characters that are meant to be comic relief in the story (with some exceptions, there are good comical characters out there ), so I always wanted to kill that type off. So I did! Yeah, Saga is not the best damsel in distress material - she wouldn't look good swooning
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   PanTast

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   30 September 2013, 2:10AM

   Always the same thing. The men think of themselves as heros but the real stars are the women. And mostly the silent ones.
   
   I love it, you archbard :-)
   
   P.S.: this time the images came up very fast :-)
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      Kayol

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      30 September 2013, 1:17PM

      Good to know, dear! Thank you very much
      And yes, men... always wanting to play the main role
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   Caelrya

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   29 September 2013, 9:59PM

   Thaiden is a cool guy! And wow, the end was really suprising!
   
   
   Darn... I miss Willow. Thank you for bringing some thoughts to my mind again
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      Kayol

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      30 September 2013, 1:17PM

      Yeah, Willow's Thaiden is a great follower. And a great actor
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   Reimar67

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   29 September 2013, 10:37PM

   Such a great addition and love your use of expressions
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      Kayol

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      30 September 2013, 1:16PM

      Thanks, my friend!
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    jlgcskyrim

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    30 September 2013, 1:09AM

    amazing work!!!!!
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       Kayol

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       30 September 2013, 1:16PM

       Thank you!