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   Bernt

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   23 October 2017, 3:15PM

   Pretty ominous. Well done. And an extra thumbs up for The Doors
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      puck21

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      25 October 2017, 6:47AM

      Thank you
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   FastBlackCat

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   23 October 2017, 4:56AM

   Excellent chapter, Puck . . . and what Key said. Your dialog and images really make the story flow. In this case, I'm not sure where it will be flowing next, but whatever comes, looking forward to it.
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      puck21

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      23 October 2017, 2:42PM

      thanks cat! and don't worry, it was a flashback only in part...no Ninas were harmed during the making of it
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   JimboUK

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   23 October 2017, 2:03PM

   That was a really good read and a somewhat uncomfortable one.
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      puck21

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      23 October 2017, 2:38PM

      thank you! yeah, it was a bit darker than usual
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   keylancer13

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   23 October 2017, 12:49AM

   So was that nightmare just a "what-if" or an actual flashback? If it's the latter that's gonna be...uncomfortable.
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      puck21

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      23 October 2017, 2:37PM

      oh no, it was just a nightmare! well, part of it was a flashback, but Nina wasn't there