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   7thNighthawk

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   25 September 2016, 9:04PM

   @jim_uk: Thank you very much, Jim, glad you enjoyed.
   
   @cormell: Haha, it's a steep comparison but I'll take it as a big compliment, thank you
   
   @sabatagethis: Hey sabatage, good to see you around again, thank you very much The posing with it was a bit of a nuisance and I had to scale everything to 0.8 to make it look less humongous ^^
   
   @FastBlackCat: Thank you very much, Pat Yes, when I found that song, I just had to use it Oh, the day will come - hopefully sooner than later
   
   @Brigand231 + cormell: Thank you very much I like that phrase, it's very fitting to his situation. That sounds cool, I'll do that next time. It'd still be best if it just did not randomize spacings like that, takes ages to get everything right and I probably forgot something here aswell.
   
   @deshaz: Thanks alot, Des, yes, putting all those characters into the car was quite annoying, I'll admit that Stay tuned
   
   @Xazomn: Thank you very much, I "enhanced" it with Gimp Also, next story will show your beautiful texture work better and I'll credit you there for the awesome suit textures
   
   @Itry3221: Thanks alot, Itry, found it by chance.
   
   @Anoxeron: Thanks alot, Anox, I hope to be able to finally start on it soon ^^
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   Anoxeron

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   06 October 2016, 5:55PM

   Excellent Nighthawk !!! Looking forward to the next !!!
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   Itry3221

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   06 October 2016, 5:39AM

   The music fits this so well.
   
   Incredible work.
   
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   Xazomn

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   26 September 2016, 1:20PM

   Amazing screens, it shows how much effort and attention you put in every single one pf them, i realy love the car poses, and how you show that beautifull car and pose use .
   
   All by all i like your story and it gives me the old time movie feeling .
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   deshaz

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   26 September 2016, 1:03AM

   Wonderful as always, I can only guess at how long this took to setup, the atmosphere work great, I could feel the tension through the images and the dialog, looking forward to the next one
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   Brigand231

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   25 September 2016, 10:28PM

   Amazing as always. The feeling of a hot, sweltering, hazy atmosphere came through perfectly. Whittaker might be on to something; as the old poker saying goes, "If you look around the table and can't figure out who the patsy is, it's most likely you." If things do go sour, I hope they've got enough backup and look forward to an epic scene there! ...but even if stuff goes as planned, I'm sure we're in for a treat.
   
   In the past, when I've had isues with formatting, I would go into a forum or PM window and enter everything, then use the preview feature to see how it looks. Changes can be made there, then previewed again and so on until you are satisfied. Then you can pull the proverbial trigger on publishing with a simple copy and paste.
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      cormell

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      25 September 2016, 11:00PM

      Ditto on the formatting. Same idea -- I use one of my old (not so good) images as a testing ground. Just keep editing the description box and re-submitting 'til I get it right.
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   FastBlackCat

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   25 September 2016, 9:50PM

   Wonderful, Hawk. Fabulous set of images, really sets the stage for the narrative, there's a real sense of build up toward some tense situation. And you're welcome, any time you need this cat's eyes, just holler. *cat is now waiting impatiently for the next episode.* Oh, and awesome tune to go with the set!
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   SabotageThis

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   25 September 2016, 9:49PM

   Jesus, I can only imagine how much work you put into the car alone in this. Fantastic writing, Nighthawk.
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   cormell

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   25 September 2016, 8:47PM

   Fireworks and strike up the band! Really great.
   
   I like the opening, slowly building. Reminded me of the opening scene of Once Upon a Time in the West. (One of my faves, as you know)
   
   After that classic gangster movie perfected.
   
   Gratz on a magnificent entry.
   
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    JimboUK

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    25 September 2016, 7:18PM

    That was fantastic.