It feels like the lore dump re: Hairan's backstory comes a little too late, but maybe I haven't completed the quest yet. It's a nice enough escort mission that integrates fine with Main Quest activities. I expected some resistance from the Orcs occupying Valenvaryon, so maybe adding a pursuing NPC who appears outside near the abode door would do that and add some incentive to escape with haste.
Regarding Hairan's backstory, it was my intention to start it after helping him to show that he's beginning to warm up to you after saving his life. As for the quest that comes with it, it's not included in the current version (and the journal update is just a dialogue placeholder) since I scraped my original plan because it had a few problems design-wise, but I have thought of a better concept now that ties in with the Main Quest nicely and will start working on it as soon as I can think of a proper way to kick it off.
I also agree with your point about the Orcs. I'll add a few that appear outside after agreeing to help Hairan just for good measure.
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Some typos I found: https://imgur.com/a/apKSwuC
It feels like the lore dump re: Hairan's backstory comes a little too late, but maybe I haven't completed the quest yet. It's a nice enough escort mission that integrates fine with Main Quest activities. I expected some resistance from the Orcs occupying Valenvaryon, so maybe adding a pursuing NPC who appears outside near the abode door would do that and add some incentive to escape with haste.
Regarding Hairan's backstory, it was my intention to start it after helping him to show that he's beginning to warm up to you after saving his life. As for the quest that comes with it, it's not included in the current version (and the journal update is just a dialogue placeholder) since I scraped my original plan because it had a few problems design-wise, but I have thought of a better concept now that ties in with the Main Quest nicely and will start working on it as soon as I can think of a proper way to kick it off.
I also agree with your point about the Orcs. I'll add a few that appear outside after agreeing to help Hairan just for good measure.