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   FastBlackCat

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   23 August 2019, 2:28AM

   I think Buttons should limit his compliments to, "You're beautiful" and leave it at that--he does not have a way with words. Great chapter, Denzel. And if I were living at Mystic Pines, someone saying they saw a lot of heat signatures would put me at Defcon 1.
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      denzel4444

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      23 August 2019, 1:24PM

      Haha he needs a filter "Stop, think, speak" - Mantra
      And yeah What get's missed in important times is crazy!, Mystic Pines might be busy soon?
      

      
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   dianka33

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   23 August 2019, 1:40AM

   Great work as always my friend;)
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      denzel4444

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      23 August 2019, 1:21PM

      Thank you my friend, I do enjoy to make them
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   deleted2702269

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   22 August 2019, 7:22PM

   Oh god - Button is trying to sweet talk?
   And Marcella is cute by trying to hear only the compliment in his clumsy chatter. They are such a lovable couple!
   
   I don't like it when you show this views through the binocular! It gives me the feeling that there will happen something real bad!
   
   But the last part was really told very exciting! Had to slow myself down not to rush through the pictures - hope there will be a Happy End for Ryan and his wife.
   Loved this chapter!!! Thanks.
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      denzel4444

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      22 August 2019, 7:51PM

      Haha Buttons is the Epitome of Trial and Error ( Young love haha)
      And Yeah I've been Building Up what will happen for a while if you've seen the lil hints? It will be quite a Climax to the Story
      And There will be an Ending, though "Happy" is subjective
      Thanks Aza