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Even if it Hurts – Redemption – Part 5
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Close to death: those scene's were awesome, you could feel the desperation with Finn and Dogmeat.
10/10 my dude!
The momment when Fenn found him was a reaper, I can truly say. But I must confess, I could died for to hear this lines from Fenn's mouth:
“I wouldn’t try that if I were you. He could rip your leg clear off your body if he wanted to. The only reason he hasn’t is because I haven’t given the order.”
My mind wondering a bit ahead, if he will kill her, and hoped he will, so I was really happy about her bullet. ^^
Was great Jon! :)
Aye those scientists had to go. Fenn wasn't about to let them off.
Great shots also, following nicely in the pace of the story,..
My grandmother had a heart attack and said while she was out she saw her husband and my two brothers waiting for her across a field. Regardless of what is behind all that the thing is people do see those things. So I figured Mac, in his coma, might experience a critical life issue during that time and possibly come to some peace in the process. Whether it was real or his imagination doesn't matter in the end as the important thing is he reached some closure.
Between you and me, however, since this is my world, I will say a certain large wolf allowed Mac and Lucy's souls to have a chance to connect again and it wasn't his imagination :)
Bravo Jon...just Bravo.
Thanks again for the wonderful words of support and following the team :)
I am a bit drained. I am a bit more like Mac perhaps when it comes to gushing too much emotionally. But I tend to be much closer to Fenn when it comes to being emotional in general. Wild mood swings, temper, highs and lows, all over the place. Consequently I try to keep a lid on them. I have tried writing various styles - Grim and Eric are much more romantic and loving while Fenn and Mac have the bromance thing with the sex and romance being downplayed. Their sex is more raunchy and more about the purely physical aspect of it. Versus Grim and Eric where the sex is spiritual and loving. But both couples have a strong love for their partners so its just a different style.
Personally I would have let him munch on the other one too but that's just coz I'm a northern heathen
Well done Jon, tell the lads the brahmin steaks are on me
Fenn is willing to show mercy now and then but seldom twice in a row to the same person if they betray his kindness the first time. Granted from the scientists viewpoint he is just a killer ... everything is about perspective. Personally I side with Fenn on this one though :)
I am wondering how this will change the dynamic of their relationship; I suspect it will change a lot, or maybe things will be brought into focus that Mac & Fenn hadn't been thinking about consciously. But I will happily wait for when you tell us the ending when you're ready.
The pictures were terrific. I especially love the last shot, but that image of Fenn - alone, in the dark, just before he laid his head on Mac's chest....all the pain he had to have been feeling plus the great sense of aloneness, was perfectly captured in that shot.
Magnificent.
I am glad you understood that shot I took and why I did it so dark and that way. It was what he was feeling. As if he had lost everything in life that meant something to him (not true of course, he had Dogmeat and friends ... but when grief hits you like that you tend to lose perspective on things ... which I know from personal experience). Mac is his anchor, his partner, his love so seeing him like this was like a mortal blow to Fenn.