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   thrawa

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   17 February 2018, 5:20PM

   Outstanding work Hawkscr1mer!:o
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      BlueOgreSan

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      17 February 2018, 8:00PM

      Thank you! :3
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   User_6005213

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   15 February 2018, 7:11PM

   Lot of storytellers don't know properly what to show according to their words, you are really talented for that too, mixing the two very well Great work !
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      BlueOgreSan

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      15 February 2018, 7:43PM

      Thank you very much Jay!
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   oeliza

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   15 February 2018, 5:54PM

   I love your story posts the most. They're intriguing and the cyberpunk themed ones like this remind me a lot of Kokaku Kidotai
   
   
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      BlueOgreSan

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      15 February 2018, 6:25PM

      Thanks a lot, as a fan of those series that's a huge compliment
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   carnagefiend

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   15 February 2018, 5:17PM

   Holy s#*!, this is some top notch writing. I got enamored with the phase "viscous silence", now that's some quality wordsmithing.
   
   I love the images, but frankly, the story here actually took center stage. They were not unnecessary, though, and they were brilliantly suited to give a glimpse at what was occurring, though, I believe the tale stands firmly on its own.
   
   Bravo!
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      BlueOgreSan

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      15 February 2018, 5:43PM

      Thank you very much for kind words Carnage, I'm glad you've enjoyed it! You're right about the images being more of a bonus. Usually I try to mix things between storytelling and images, but this piece was written without shooting images at first, but I think they can be a good addition in this case
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   Lee5Lee

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   15 February 2018, 4:56PM

   Awesome remaster! ^_^
   So, the last scene is how A8-00 came to life? Striking moment!
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      BlueOgreSan

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      15 February 2018, 5:03PM

      Thank you Lee! Yup, you're right about that
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   Heaventhere

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   15 February 2018, 3:40PM

   Amazing shots, the story very moving in parts, great back story Hawkscr1mer
   ! :)
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      BlueOgreSan

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      15 February 2018, 4:00PM

      Thank you very much!
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   Roksa

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   15 February 2018, 12:47PM

   As always awesome set Hawky :3
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      BlueOgreSan

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      15 February 2018, 1:03PM

      Thank you! :3
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   wolfgrimdark

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   15 February 2018, 12:48PM

   Really well done Hawk - that story was intense and a little unsettling. Fantastic images. The main shot is easily a movie poster or cover art for a graphic novel.
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      BlueOgreSan

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      15 February 2018, 1:03PM

      Thank you very much, glad you've enjoyed it!
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   Neagoe

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   15 February 2018, 10:06AM

   Wow. Touching story and lots of violence. Amazing work Hawk!
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      BlueOgreSan

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      15 February 2018, 10:47AM

      Thanks!