This was the first of your stories I've read, and I wish I hadn't. Now I want to read them all, because this is just way above and beyond what I expected. And I'm ever so short on time.
Great read though, and even if I'm just dropping in mid-story, I'm quite excited to find out more about this Valeria.
I feel as if I have been in the vacuum! I dared not breathe while reading this in fear of missing something. Val in space! But not out of the way considering the way you have built her up. And Sally is becoming morfe and more of an enigma. Sitting on the edge of the chair here :-)
I actually did some research on how long an individual can survive in a vacuum. I decided that with a helmet and her superhuman endurance it wasn't too farfetched for Val.
What some show with fancy pics you weave with words and a skill I truly envy. You have a real knack for making me see and feel the places and events of the Fallout world far more vividly then just an image could; describing the details that an image just cant capture. Val never ceases to amaze - What a hero and it's great how you can justify her heroics by her strange condition. Great character to have on one's side
After seeing her survive a ride on a nuclear missile, I thought there was no way Valeria would surprise me any more. I've never been so glad to be wrong before.
Another great entry. People complain about the way I punish my character, but you really know how to crank it up to 11! XD
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This was the first of your stories I've read, and I wish I hadn't. Now I want to read them all, because this is just way above and beyond what I expected. And I'm ever so short on time.
Great read though, and even if I'm just dropping in mid-story, I'm quite excited to find out more about this Valeria.
I feel as if I have been in the vacuum! I dared not breathe while reading this in fear of missing something. Val in space! But not out of the way considering the way you have built her up. And Sally is becoming morfe and more of an enigma. Sitting on the edge of the chair here :-)
Val never ceases to amaze - What a hero and it's great how you can justify her heroics by her strange condition. Great character to have on one's side
Another great entry. People complain about the way I punish my character, but you really know how to crank it up to 11! XD