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  1. Adipose
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    Ah, now, as far as I'm concerned, these are Skyrim women as they would be. It's a very tough world for women who are warriors...or even those who aren't. Job well done on all.
    1. Kayol
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      Indeed it's a tough world out there, not unlike our own. But one learns to adapt and turn weakness to strength.
      Thank you for your comment!
  2. wolfgrimdark
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    Ah I was crying at the end. Not really much more needs to be said then that. I was pulled right in to the whole thing - you worked it up to such intensity to the very, very end. Awesome conclusion. I really did not know how you would end this. It has always been so dark I think I expected that at the very least she would die even if she resisted at the end.

    I am in awe of your story telling skills. I hope you do a fantasy book some day.

    PS - I so loved the ending so very, very much it made all the pain and darkness worth it.

    PPS - I somehow feel such an amazing conclusion to such a long story deserves something more in a comment but I can't really. You are simply put a fantastic writer who is a true wordsmith. I sincerely hope you continue to hone this talent for your own sake. The images were also superb but for me it has always been the written word that tends to pull me in the most. Yet I enjoyed the images as well as they so perfectly matched the story. I can only hope you take the comment for the very sincere praise it is. It has been a pleasure reading your work (even if at times I watched in frustration as Saga descended into darkness).
    1. Kayol
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      Don't take this the wrong way, but - I'm so happy I made you cry!

      You're one of the first people to follow the story and I always paid special attention to your words, be it praise or critique. So the fact that the ending made you emotional is the biggest compliment I could ever receive.

      Thank you very much for commenting and reading.
  3. Kamikazekossori
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    Such an intense and emotional ending to that adventure in Saga's mind, through the struggle she had in drawing herself away from the precipice that threatened to consume her, through the urgent and nearly desperate efforts Larkspur and Uthgerd to save the Saga they had know from being lost to them, the care they had for her. It is good to see Saga being herself again, that her voice had some happiness in it once again, though it seems to have exacted a cost to her. I have very much enjoyed your distinct style of writing full of words poetic and symbolic, they have been an inspiration, a tale beautifully told, my friend
    1. Kayol
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      And thank you, dear! You were one of the first people to ever comment on my stories, and I will always be grateful for that. This community is truly fantastic.
      I'm very glad you enjoyed the story and saw it to the end. Thank you for that as well!
  4. lidertz
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    Amazing an huge work! I wish I can endorse this twice! I hope you soon write a book also! ^^ Your talent is undoubtable, in writing in illustrating also. Many thank you Kayol for bring this here!
    1. Kayol
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      Thank you, darling! I consider this story to be a joint effort, as I fed upon the energy you guys were giving me. If it wasn't for you all, I would definitely abandon it somewhere in the middle.
      I don't know about a book, but it makes me really happy that you think I could pull it off. Thanks again!
  5. Excellentium
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    Just wow...

    I'm always so very stunned by your work, dear Kayol. I normally have a way to at least put a few thoughts to print, but whenever I come around one of your sets, I'm just empty...and that's a good thing! I mean it as in you're capturing my very soul and leaves me all amazed afterward, so it's not easy to fully say what needs to be said...because this is just magical!

    Images, writing, emotions, atmosphere - thank you for the journey!
    1. Kayol
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      Thank you for your comment! And all the other comments you've written under my story. The feedback is always precious, no matter how long or how short the message itself is
      I'm very happy you enjoyed the ride!
  6. RatherWindy
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    Beautifull ending to a great Saga. As a whole this was certainly one of the best I've read since started uploading here. You certainly have a way with words, also with the unspoken ones,...
    Thank you for uploading this great story of yours and the great imagery involved with it.

    Wish you all the best with university and all your plans after that,.. and it's not forbidden to visit once in a while,..
    1. Kayol
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      Thank you very much! You're way too kind, dear. I'm happy to see you here, at the end of this journey.
      Oh, I'll definitely visit once in a while. This place bursts with creative energy, it would be a waste not to absorb some of it into my life
  7. SyddSpartan
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    So it ends...
    That was one hell of an emotional ride. Intense in its own way... the transition between Saga and the elf was so brilliantly done, the manner in which you ended it, the pacing. It feels like as if it was all a distant dream, in the end, I felt like I woke up just like Saga did.. as I'm pulled back into reality. Only you are capable of such feats Agnes. I am surprised you finished the story here, but I do hope to see more from you, I want to learn more.

    Your screenshots are so well done, they look like paintings, the choice of angles... I mean. Wow. Its incredibly difficult to find words to describe this entire journey, but you're a true pro when it comes to writing Agnes, hats off. You did it again. Btw, the music was perfect for this, great choice.
    1. Kayol
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      Damn, stop making me blush every time you comment! My poor ego cannot take it!
      But honestly, thank you very much for your kind words. I always wanted to touch upon feelings first and foremost and that's what Saga's story was always about for me, so it makes me really happy you as a reader felt it as well.
      Oh, it had to end somewhere, as all things do I don't close the doors, however. When my life becomes stable again, I'll definitely concoct a scribbling or two. As I said plenty of times, this community is way too precious not to pay it a visit at least once in a while.
      Thank you for being a part of the journey!
  8. Xorp
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    Delighted to see your story continue I opened this post and saw I had to play an entire album during this post. So I did, I clicked on play and started reading. About a quarter in my rumbling stomach was audible over the music and I remembered I was hungry before starting to read. Having only eaten 1 slice of bread the entire day and it being diner time and all, this was understandable. So I decided to prepare diner and continue the story with a plate of food. Of course all the while listening to the album, so I wouldn’t break the atmosphere of your story. Some time later I returned, the music was still playing. I read through the rest of the story undisturbed, getting sucked into the story more and more with every word and image. And I must say it has been quite a ride, with an amazing end. When I arrived at the last image and the ending words, I discovered I had forgotten about my diner not to long after continuing the story. While typing this I am trying to make up for the time my diner has stood motionless while I read the story.

    Thank you very much for this story, I loved it . And the music fits perfectly with the atmosphere of the story.

    I am now in the last minute of the album, thanks for the last hour!
    1. Kayol
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      Thank you very much for paying a visit! Oh, and sorry about your delayed dinner

      The album is really fantastic and it helped me a great deal with writing the end of the story, so I'm glad you've enjoyed it as well. Thanks again!
  9. frank213
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    Oh Wow
    What an incredibly great work of you Kayol
    Outstanding and ingeniousm0112.gif

    1. Kayol
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      Thank you for your comment, Frank! And thanks for sticking to the story to the end
  10. thrawa
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    Yes amazing work (gratuluje)!
    1. Kayol
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      Thanks!