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A journey to our roots Part 5 Who I am

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13 comments

  1. Liadys
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    Hm interesting....not sure if a simple inconsistancy or you decided to change Nelthas backstory to suit the need of your tale. Nelthas suppose to be the product of a rape and was sold into slavery by his own mother ( whom never loved him) by his cannon backstory.....so was a bit odd to see him tell the complete opposite here. Regardless, it was an enjoyable chapter
    1. Kuschel-Drow
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      Yeah I know the backstory you gave him, and I actually like it, as well as the story together with Rawndryn later, but I didn't want to 'steal' them.

      Plus it was inspired by the whole Redoran/Telvanni thing I had on my mind and looong talks with Nanny who's a great writer too, just not in English. :o Plus we were always wondering where he did have the scars in his face from, so it was quite fitting, I think... ^^"

      Ravny's backstory isn't the same either, so I'm sorry. Nelthas has been through the slavery part though and his mentor was still good to him, as far as once could say that.

      Thank you.
    2. Liadys
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      Don't be sorry. I still enjoyed the chapter very much
  2. BlackMaid
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    Das ist wirklich eine gelungene Backgroundstory für Nelthas .... klasse geschrieben, ein echtes Lesevergnügen Ich könnte den Beiden stundenlang lauschen, egal welche schlimmen Erlebnisse sie teilen....Lias tragischer Tod und ihre letzten Worte haben mir sogar eine Träne in's Auge getrieben ... ( ich fühle immer mit, wenn gut geschrieben )

    Bin gespannt, was Du Dir als Nächstes ausdenkst ....???
    1. Kuschel-Drow
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      Daaanke.

      Hach ja das war aber uach traurig. *snief* Aber wenigstens hat er ja wieder Jemanden. ^^" Und den wird er vermutlich auch so schnell nicht mehr los.

      Jaja, da fehlt ja noch was... *rumpfeif* Die Moral von der Geschicht... und so. ^^ Kommt bestimmt bis nächstes WE:
  3. Nataly1q2w3e4r5t
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    Awesome chapter which explains a lot about Nelthas character and personality traits, such wonderful work!
    It is was very interesting to read about how you make Nelthas story a bit different from his mod canon backstory and good to know that here Nelthas had both parents and that his mother clearly loved him... until Eradyn took her from Nelthas as well as everything else, including his freedom. Also interesting take that both Ravndryn and Nelthas belong to house Redoran. Nelthas relationship with Lia was very heartwarming and sweet and too bad that it ended so tragically for Lia! Her death sure was another good reason for Nelthas to want Eradyn dead and I am sure if he was alive, he would indeed did anything he could to take away Daeron's life away just to hurt Nelthas.
    It was awesome how Ravndryn helped Nelthas all those years and also aided in his escape!
    also it was very endearing to see how Daeron did not even flinch at Nelthas whole story which proves how genuine his love is and it sure must be very heartwarming for Nelthas to see it.
    1. Kuschel-Drow
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      Thank you very much.
      I thought that besides Redoran and Telvanni ginore each other, there must be something going on under the surface, they're darkelves, after all. So I thought this was a good explanation. ^^
      You'll learn about Daeron's motives in the next chapter. ^.^
      I'm glad you liked it so far.
  4. tgstyle24
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    du bist ein Genie... sehr schön geschrieben am Lagerfeuer sitzen und über seine Vergangenheit sprechen... jetzt wo Daeron die Geschichte kennt, bin ich gespannt, wie es weiter geht
    1. Kuschel-Drow
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      Dankeschön... ^^" *rot anlauf*
      Das freut mich doch wenns gefällt und nach mehr schreit.
      Da kommt ja auch noch was. ^_^
  5. ista3
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    Great follow on and captures Drow
    1. Kuschel-Drow
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      Thank you very much. *,*
  6. gucky2010
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    Wow also keine falsche Bescheidenheit mein Guter. Das hier ist einsame Spitze. Klasse geschrieben und mit 1 a Bildern untermalt.
    1. Kuschel-Drow
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      Najua, die Bilder sind ja nur halbwegs passend.
      Was aber daran liegt, dass das ursprünglich anders geplant war, ich am Ende aber einfach nicht mehr dne Nerv hatte, passende Bilder zu machen, und auch nicht wirklich die Zeit, ich hab ja auch noch so was zu tun.

      Hab schon befürchtet das ist dann vielleicht doch ein bissel zu viel Drama, aber joa... ^^
      Dankeschön für das Kompliment.