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Heh heh, the last line...a reminder who the author is!!!
Brilliant work dear!
the story told by narrative..... I am sure it will eventually change, but provides an easy feeling to it. As if it could be a story told by any number of us. Yet I prefer to you.......
Keep this going Jess.... your second movie in making
Nice work Jess, sorry for taking so long to getting round to catching up
Like how you are telling this as well - from a third party narrator who has, so far, remained a somewhat of a mystery other than they are a Dunmer with a few hints on their past. Like the bouncing between view points of the twins as the narrator speaks as well as the information on the tribes on Solstheim. The size of the clan would be a big issue I think as inbreeding would be common and create numerous issues unless fresh blood was brought in. Berhamask had much better relations with the two-legs so I don't think they were hurting as much. Course that is one reason Mora wanted them gone.
Enjoyed how you are doing the shots - something I borrowed a little in the sense that I can't do as many story shots for the prologue (with some exceptions) so just adding in some general ones.
That last line though? A foreshadowing of some horror to come? Just a statement on life? Not sure I agree though. It can be tragic (Romeo and Juilet, rejected love, love turned to hate, etc.) but can also be life's greatest joy and reason for existence. Like many things it isn't BW and has many sides to it. But for a dark queen I expect it to be more tragic then not :)
Don't do a lot of writing in the first person and am quite enjoying it but I don't think it's something I'll stick with of their tale goes bigger than a backstory. Same as the shots, I'm enjoying doing random shots that very very loosely match the text, but if I write a bigger story I'll have to go back to matching story and shots again. Just seems like a lot of hard work at the moment.
Yeah that last line is signature queen of mean! You know me, I have to have some angst in my works. But as for me, I believe in the good of true love too. Just maybe not in this case
I'm taking a wild guess that Klepstein was kinda like Joffrey....
A merchant in Raven Rock, who's sister was mauled to death, the sister's infant kids vanished....Bron revealed the 'Joffrey-like' psycho-enraged^^ Klep's looooong deception for all....busted!
The inbred Klep was then promptly sent to the Hunting Grounds to 'calm him down', and to avenge the twins and their mom as well. ^^
A well-deserved death for murdering a mother, then taking her baby twins and giving them Hircine's curse at such a young age.
May Hircine now have plenty of "fun" with Klep's putrid soul in the Hunting Grounds for all eternity!
BTW: I love those big Blood Moons in your first and second-last shots. ^^
Endorsed.
Warm thanks and cheers, dear!
The ENB I use is solely responsible for those awesome moons and is part of the inspiration for me to play weres (well, that and the fun of ripping out throats! )
Cheers
Seems like Brana had not been tormented as much as his sister who was nearly turned into breding mare... but thanks to really messed up interbreeding way and her generics she doesn't have a dozen of kids by now. I think that when she and her brother dealt with Klepstein it was very fitting revenge... only too bad that the tins did not leave clan earlier. Seems like declining Kolfinna's offer has saved twins lives, given what happened with her tribe later...
I would look forward for continuation and thank you for sharing your wonderful work!
It was a rough start for the twins but through the their adversity and hardships, they have had each other, and this is going to be a continuous and strong theme through the the twins' lives.
The twins certainly had a tough past among a pack lead by a lying Alpha, one whose leadership needed to be brought to an end for what he had done to the mother of the twins, the truth revealed to them by ones they had though foes through lies told to them, a familiar were-bear bringing proof that Alpha could not deny.
That link with the tale of Kavel is really great, explains something of that animosity between the tribes, that not all were at odds with the twins finding unlikely friends. I am quite curious about that the dunmer telling their tale, with but a few hints revealed about him. Wonderful work, Jess
I'm very grateful that Wolfgrimdark let me borrow a bit of his universe for the purpose of my story; sure helped me in figuring out how to explain Dunmer werewolves! Whether or not the stories will intertwine in the future... who knows!!
I guess the fact they were " acquired" by nords explain the more nordic names...sounds more like the Alpha acquired them like slaves and not like fellow pack members.....the whole inbreeding thing to keep the line pure...*shudder*
and that last line....oh boy....what have you in store for us!?
In store? Oh you know me, a little bit of angst, a little bit of misery
.........that is of course if you are motivated to write the story