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I really like the beginning with the mother and daughter thing going on, and when Sannedia said she was dying because she was feeling hungover was funny. Then that b#@#@ Hysteria had to go and ruin everything. Just send Damocles (Dagon jr. hehe) he will that mess out. Then again someone might end up falling for him and... I will stop right there lol
Amazing work dear
Something nice and light-hearted at the beginning..Sannedia enjoying some good times with her "family" ( Phobia, Garm and Losti). Getting drunk for the first time...and getting that first hangover too ! Priceless moments that were ruined when that B* of Hysteria showed her ugly face ! lol not sure Dagon jr. would be doing much help in this sadly....and as for someone falling for him ? uh?..who?
Thank you dear !
Sorry for long comment of ramble hehe.
I enjoy ramblings
CONGRATULATIONS! You're making me breathless
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Sandy's impression of Mora, had me rolling. Would have loved to have seen that. figures that Sandy would be a silly drunk, life of the party type. and her reaction the next morning? Priceless.
But then that wench Hysteria had to go and get involved. Grrrrr.... I am SO gonna gnaw on her ankles! By herself, I think Mama bear would wipe the floor with her, but Mora's slimy tentacles are all over this, so I doubt things are going to be that easy. But whatever happens I do so hope that Sam finds out what is going on and gets involved. Think Phobia is going to need his help.
I was laughing so hard at the mental image of it when i was writing that scene ! Sannedia was sure bound to be quite the silly drunk, doing bunch of goofy things. Daddy would be so proud ! That first hangover and her reaction..that also was ton of fun !
Wench ? you are being nice...Hysteria is a B* ! lol. ...Well now I just want to add that someone is gnawing on Hysteria's ankle the entire time lol. Mama Bear would mop and wipe the floor with her...but sadly Mora have his slimy tentacles in the mess..and Hysteria is sure gonna put a fight so no simple mopping and wiping the floor with Hysteria to make it extra shiny. Gotta hope that Sam finds out and show up...though he'd probably get involve because of Sannedia and not Phobia......Sheogorath would be the one to intervene for Phobia. For sure...Mama Bear going to need help !
Was heartwarming how Sannedia was able to make her mother and Lotsi laugh so much, making that impression of Mora, I could almost see her doing that impression with arms flailing, made me chuckle to picture that. I liked that conversation between Lotsi and Phobia, both finding they had something in common, Phobia being thankful for him watching over her daughter.
Of course that cruel Hysteria had to interrupt those good time, stealing Sannedia away among the chaos that she created. Phobia certainly is very determined to save her daughter, to not have other risk themselves, her gaze turning quite dangerous in that moment. I worry about what will happen as things unfold. A wonderfully weaved chapter, Mylène
I really wanted to make such scene for a while, Sannedia getting beyond drunk and doing some very silly things that make everyone laugh so hard. ( The mental image of her flailing her arms around and being goofy was just killing me with laughter when I was trying to write it ) Phobia,Garm and Losti all have something in common : they all want to protect and keep Sannedia happy. Phobia sure can show some gratefulness toward her daughter's guardian..none of them were even force to go out of their way to help the young daedra in the first place.
Hysteria just couldn't keep away...and had to crash those happy moments...kidnapping Sannedia amidst the chaos she created. Phobia is a bit of a Mama Bear when it comes to her kid..she will go to any extend to save her daughter ..and is willing to sacrifice..quite alot if not everything for it. Things sure are looking a bit grim right now..
Thank you my friend !
I enjoyed the start of this chapter with Phobia and Losti meeting each other (and have to say that Phobia's mortal disguise is gorgeous! ) . I got a laugh out of Phobia and Garm's way of dealing with Sandy's bullies, and her little experience with alcohol had me howling with laughter (especially how she was "dying" the morning after
But, as I knew it would, the storm gathered and Hysteria made her move. And picked her target well, for I doubt there's anything that would so move Phobia into walking into Hysteria's trap. I shed she'd let Losti come with her but who knows, maybe he'll sneak along anyway. And all this because the Greater Daedra have their game and their squabbles. I wonder if Sam will intervene at all?
Awesome shots to go with a fantastic chapter hon and I'm keen for the continuation!
Glad you enjoyed this start of the chapter as Sandy shared good moments with her "family" so to speak. ( Happy you like Phobia's mortal guise !) . Hehe well..Phobia kept it nice..but at least those bullies learnt their lesson ! I've been wanting to do that little part of Sannedia getting drunk for the first time and doing some very silly things..but also deal with the massive hangover that came with it the next morning..her thinking she's dying lol.
Nothing last forever...sadly. And Hysteria showed her ugly face...her target sure was very well picked..the best bait to use to get Phobia to knowingly and willingly walk into a trap. Had it been anyone else then Hysteria, She probably would of let Losti and Garm come along with her..but given that its Hysteria we are talking about..going with anyone became too much of a risk. Lets hope Sam does something....
Thank you sweetie
Of course in her innocence she will be completely confused. At least it's obvious that she knows who Mora is (Loved her imitation) But will she recognize him in his "alternate" form? That is assuming he will make an appearance.
And what of Sanguine? Will the combined power of Mother and Father stand against Mora? It doesn't seem likely. But what of Sandy? What is the extent of her power? I would think it would be great but unknown even to her. I'm scared for them all but can't wait to see what will happen!
Epic work dear!!!
Sandy probably won't understand what is going on and will be very confused..specially because of her innocence. Of course she knows who Mora is ..now she probably used to see him in his slime ball form more then his "mortal avatar"..so she might be confuse if he makes an appearance..which he may.
For Sanguine..I think he's about to get a really nasty wake up call as he really should of listened to Dannee's warning in the first place !..but Nope..he dismissed it. There is no way that Phobia can do anything against Mora..she can take care of Hysteria. The bigger question is..will help arrive in time..?
Thank you dear ! Already working on part 2..but I doubt it will be ready by the end of the weekend...
Garm not being trusting of Phobia was pretty cool, being able to sense the souls she had collected. Nice that he came around. It was all too easy in the end for Hysteria to kidnap Sandy, although now I don't think I would want to be Hysteria now that the Fear Weaver is angry.
Garm being at Arkay's service..wouldn't of seem fitting for him to not be bothered by the soul Phobia have trapped..though he still let it slide for Sandy's sake..and knowing that Phobia will release in time. Hysteria had a bit the element of surprise with her hit and run tactic..not leaving anyone the time to actually react properly..and she obviously did something that knocked Phobia's on her knees. Oh no..you really don't want to mess with the Fear Weaver when she's in Angry Mama Bear mode !