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This chapter was my first experience with Jaxonz Positioner, and have kept it around ever since. It's a good thing you're fond of Karliah as future chapters will tell
So there seems to be something between Stan and Ellandra... Hope to see more on this!
Outstanding!
Seemed Miri isn't quite so taken with Stan. That could just be because he was the reason mom had to go out and risk her life, or perhaps something more??
So, Karliah has caught up with Stan... for what reason? Is she working WITH the TG who set him up... or against them?
Got me hooked!
I think you can only give Camilla one letter in the game. I thought that whole quest was lame so she got both. What ever happened to duels in the street for her hand??? Passing fake letters along like a couple of kids.
Miri wasn't taken with Stan just because her mom had to go save him. She probably read the letter that Ellandra got from the guards and put two and two together when she returned with him.
As for Karliah......we will have to wait and see
thanks again for the great comments.
Now that whole dream sequence has me totally confused. From the words it seems the ghost is her husband. Yet he is a complete asshole from the sounds of it and hates her (why should he even care then that their daughter is alone). He also says "You did this to us." Yet he is singular, who is this "Us?" I wonder. Either he doesn't know he is alone or he represents a group. Also seems like Ellandra feels he is different. That perhaps he was better in life and has changed.
Or perhaps not her husband but her father or grandfather (he looks rather old to be her husband, he looks like a parent)? A ghost confused and dissapointed that she is with the Nords? Many questions which I gather you will reveal over time.
The poisoned fish was great - amusing and nice pictures as she offers it to Stan. Was a very cozy looking little campsite actually. I also wish it was an option to give her both letters. I always wanted to reveal both of them for what they really are. Ellandra had the right idea. Did I also detect a little jealousy towards Stan and Camilla?
Seems like Miriel is good with the bow as well - helping the Khajiits in taking down the bandits. I liked how you wrote all of that - it felt very natural and cute how mom was sneaking up behind her.
So lots of myteries in this chapter - besides the ghost there is the mission with the Telvanni, and Stan and the mysterious stranger from his past.
Great story and shot!
I agree about the option to give Camilla both letters. It seemed that neither of them should have gotten their way in that whole affair. I think Ellandra was trying hard to let them have their moment and wait until they left to give him a little grief about it.
It was the first time that I used the Jaxsoz Positioner mod to move around objects and light sources and I must say that it works so well. I used it to get the "fork" into Ellandra's hand just right and it was much easier for me than using the console (getpos/setpos).
Thanks for the great insight once again. Looking forward to the conclusion of Grim's latest adventure.
It is nice to read the main Story of skyrim in your way...Great idea with the ghost in the dream - nice pictures. The picnic in the morning is so easy and light written and I had to laught about the slaughterfish... I like the way, you introduced Miriel and Lajjan and you made a web of ideas, how the story of Ellandra and Stan will go on. Wonderful idea, to give both letters to Camilla, but I hope, that it wouldn`t not be a problem for Ellandra when she is free...especilly for Stan...
You made very nice pictures, especially the close ups and the ghost pics are my favs.
Thank you for the reading and pleasure in this morning
I am very happy that my story made your morning better. It certainly makes it worth the time when other people enjoy these stories we all write. The ghost pics were fun to make even though the content of her dream was fairly dark.
I thought it would be funny to give Camilla both letters. Now Faendal can spend more time with your characters
For now, it looks like Ellandra and Stan will go their separate ways. Stan needs to stay and deal with a certain agent of Nocturnal now and Ellandra is on her way to Winterhold with Miriel. I'm sure their paths will cross again with time
Thank you again for your wonderful comments and I look forward to reading your next stories too.