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Child of Destiny - The Grayclaw Chronicles - Destiny

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  1. AmadanBezerk
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    I just read all of Fin's backstory chapters....very well done! ^^

    Jess dear....you DO realise full well what you've just done here, right??
    You've got us ALL addicted to sweet Fin now! ^^
    Way to go, Einstein!

    Later on (probably MUCH later on^^ ), after you finish "getting your fix" (and ours) from "Broody-Boy" ^^, perhaps you might do a moderate-sized Saga for your sweet Femme Fatale Finayla and her adventures in Skyrim?^^
    I think you could easily create an ADDICTIVE (hint-hint)^^, fascinating and very captivating tale for her.

    Swiftly endorsed.
    Warm thanks, Jess, for such an ADDICTIVE character and backstory, and cheers, dear!
    1. deleted1123719
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      Tee hee!!! What are you trying to say? I can't quite get it? You like Fin?

      Hehe, well, never say never! As you said, I have to get my 'fix' of Broody all sorted out and put him to bed... hmmm, I just went somewhere special then.... before writing anyone else. It's kind of like dating someone.... I need to break up with Broody once and for all before moving on.

      Anyway, many thanks for your comments and I take it you enjoyed Fin's tale. That warms this old cynical heart of mine!
  2. gucky2010
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    Just brilliant, i would never miss your wonderful narrated Chapters.
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      Many thanks dear!
  3. Heaventhere
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    Wonderful back story and so well told......... I have reread it and saved to computer so enjoyed it all... love that you left it just there at her starting on her new road...... leaves so much up to the reade4r of what they see her future as........ wonderful shots dear jess..........

    Oh and new project and Rathe no less ya.......... Hello there Handsome...... we have missed you lol........
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      Aw thanks Shelley, that's very sweet of you and I'm glad you enjoyed fins tale so much! And yes, that's exactly why I chose to leave her tale there, so each individual who read this backstory could then decide what Destiny she walks out of Valenwood to face.

      Yup, new project coming soon... I couldn't stay away from my Mr Broody... He's like a drug and I'm an addict!!!
  4. Kamikazekossori
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    It was very interesting to learn what lead Finayla to the lands of Skyrim, that chance meeting with one that sought Stardrir, the tale of his bloodline under the eyes of Auri-El and of a task to bring two peoples together left to her by her father revealed by her grandfather. Erandas had some wise words to say, telling her not to dwell in the sorrow of his passing and it was touching how she curled up next to him one last time. I see that he still could not speak of that day, I hope like that it was right of him to keep it from her. A backstory with depth and intrigued you have crafted, Jess, wonderful work and I look forward to the return of the broody one of course ^^
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      Thanks Alexi dear. Glad you enjoyed Fin's backstory and it was a fun project for me to work on too. I'm sure in time she'd somehow come to learn of the Wild Hunt and what happened between her parents (things like that always have a way of coming out) but I think it was a good place to finish her journey. Now the reader can make whatever future they like for her as she follows that path to her destiny. Keep an eye out, for yes, the Broody one returns!!
  5. aok
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    Brilliantly told as we see how in the end Finayla continues her Father's quest and returns to Skyrim in his place. Lovely work.
    Oh I do like this teaser....
    1. deleted1123719
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      Thanks my dear. Glad you enjoyed her tale and I think you'll enjoy my new project even more...
  6. Rincevent69
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    Great backstory for her Jess! Nice work, really!
    1. frank213
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      I agree with you
    2. deleted1123719
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      Thanks dears!!
  7. Nataly1q2w3e4r5t
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    This was one awesome backstory of Finayla, beautifully written, very dramatic, with moments of joy, peace and love which then changed int misery and carnage only to give hope to little Finayla to grow up and fulfill her destiny of Dragonborn, having mot unusual combination of races and bloodlines.. A sad thing about her father but i doubted from very start that he would make it, since he was very old. hope that Finayla might have more lighter destiny then her parents and maybe her journey will open new leaf in her life.
    And you are sure a queen of teasers! I've never expected to see Mr. Broody again! It would awesome to discover what was happening in Rathe's life, since his story ended on such devastating note that it left me teary eyed, especially lovely Fleur death.
    1. deleted1123719
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      Thanks dear! I feel pretty happy with wrapping up Fin's tale like this. I think going on and writing about her exploits would just be rehashing skyrim, so this seems a natural place to end her tale.

      Also, that leaves me free to work on my new project

      Yes, I'm picking up Mr Broody's tale again! Book III - Phoenix Burning will be out soon!
  8. ForgottenB
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    Great set
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      Thanks B!
  9. Liadys
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    Wonderful conclusion to Finayla backstory ! Amazingly weaved together and give all the background as to why dear Fin found herself in Skyrim and became the Dragonborn. And you are the queen of tease Looking forward to your next project !
    1. deleted1123719
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      Thanks hon!! I'm just pleased to have actually finished a story! I don't do that very often

      I think you'll like my next project... it has a special place in my heart.
  10. wolfgrimdark
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    Lol tease. Handsome Rathe in his nice armor

    A great conclusion for Fin actually - as it provides all the backstory on who she is and how she ended up in Skyrim as Dragonborn. I liked how you weaved all of that together for her - it was very nicely done and now we have someone with a great deal of depth and personality to her.
    1. deleted1123719
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      Thanks hon. Yay, I actually finished something!!

      And as for my teaser... well, what can I say