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*Throws out reference*
Fixed broken links.
Very happy to delve once again into the murky depths of Riften to catch up on the twins' actions... even while the cosmic forces are colliding around them!
I just knew I had to have your most heinous villain make a cameo, how could I else write about Riften and not even mention her after reading through your creations? It's impossible to view the city without it's brothel now!
Oh and they shall unfold indeed! But it my take a long while until we get to the point where things become.. complicated.
I do love my details; seeing what the characters are doing and how they behave as watching them in 3'd person.
Frigga is not someone for frippery! She is the sort who goes "if it fits, it sits - no matter how unflattering it looks" - which was when I think back on it, an unconscious hint at who her brother was in past episodes (His identity wasn't revealed until she found him); her hair being pulled back in such a strict manner - truly resembling him if one looked close enough! ^^
So brother is still a pissa but then someone like that doesn't change over-night. In his defense is the whole Karliah thing but I doubt Karliah would approve of his actions (in a general sense) either - meaning the drunken asshat and self-pity attitude. He is in a bit of a mess though. Being bound to people like Maven in the Guild is a pretty dangerous thing but he was somewhat born into it. I am curious what is going on though as he is right - he isn't a very good thief so why all the pressure to force him into being part of the guild I wonder. I also wonder what the meeting is going to be about if it scares Frigga so much.
Enjoying you getting back to these stories for a bit. I am also curious about the poor lass Isaac left behind in Whiterun - the one who never found the note or gold he left her. Always felt bad about that and hate things like that. He should have hired one of the ubiquitous couriers to deliver it to her.
Anyhow wonderful chapter - you are a real marvel at detail which is such a hard thing to do. All the little touches - gestures, feelings, the environment, dialogue ... so much great attention to details which in turn lets the reader feel as if they are right there watching what is happening.Extremely well done Ms (I could call Jo but I got so use to referring to you as Ms here its a bit of a habit *grin* )
Quoting my reply to Kami:
"Their relationship certainly is fragile, both of the siblings bitter about the past; Isaac failing to see the errors of his ways as he is quite immature (funny how he always have been, easy to anger) and I do wonder if he will ever change. But I believe Frigga has more reasons than him (regarding the guild) than him as she is so falsely being acused for being the one to blame = while in truth there is someone else's fault entirely."
As for Friggas worries about the meeting; being requested to see both of the matrons ruling over Riften is rather foreboding - the women aren't likely inviting them for a mere cup of tea!
Now that you mention the poor lass (Maja), I had thought about her making a cameo at a point!
Thanks ^_^
Their relationship certainly is fragile, both of the siblings bitter about the past; Isaac failing to see the errors of his ways as he is quite immature (funny how he always have been, easy to anger) and I do wonder if he will ever change. But I believe Frigga has more reasons than him (regarding the guild) than him as she is so falsely being acused for being the one to blame = while in truth there is someone else's fault entirely.