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Drekimunr - Broken Innocence - Ch11

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  1. PicnikSky
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    I think this is my favourite chapter for now... (Yes i just started reading these, and i love them )
    1. Liadys
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      Thanks, glad you are liking the story so far ( No worries )
  2. aok
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    You have been busy my friend! Very much enjoying getting caught up on this epic saga!
    1. Liadys
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      Hehe I've been a busy little bee :-) I'm glad that you are enjoying reading this !!
  3. wolfgrimdark
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    A very nice chapter Lia - I am really enjoying the sexual tension between Nadja and Farkas as I like both characters very much and so have some emotional connection to them and what happens to them.

    This was the first time (that I remember I should say) that I have seen someone write out the ceremony in such detail. Unlike Jess I totally did not expect it. I thought Nadja would at least wait a while and think it over ... I had doubted she would even take it. I guess Farkas was a little dissapointed as well. Not that I think it is a bad thing - such a gift can be used for good or evil to some degree although the version from Hircine often lends itself more easily to evil do to the power of its blood lust. Nadja is going to have problems if she already has issues dealing with her blood lust. Being a WW is only going to add to it. Will be interesting to see where this goes with her.

    Faelan is adorable and nice to see her have some gentler attention and companionship ... still I think Farkas would make a good dad as he is very sweet and overall a pretty nice guy. I suspect he would be fine looking over Faelan and Nadja.

    PS - Came back as I wanted to mention what a nice shot that moon shot is that you took. Overall nice images especially considering how hard it is to get good night shots. However the worse is the horrible 600 px limit we are still cursed with. When you shrink an image it tends to get darker and this really hurts any image that is already low on light.
    1. Liadys
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      I'm having quite a bit of pleasure messing around with the tension between those two character. Gotta make the fire run hot you know :-). I'm glad that you enjoy these character as much as this !

      The ceremony scene isn't as detailed as i wanted it to be, but i lacked the capacity to express what i had in my head into words ( ...my limited knowledge of english also didn't help in that matter..) I'm quite surprised no one else have writen it out though ...
      Nadja's heart is filled with hatred now and it made her take a very rash decision; taking on the blood of the beast. The gift is not a bad thing in general, but perhaps for Nadja it is, because of the blood lust she already was feeling before..and along with what already plagues her at night. She may come to regret her decision. I doubt Farkas wanted this for her...

      That little wolf is too cute for his own good i swear. ( I can't help myself but to go Dawwww everytime i look at him !) Nadja having a particular connection to nature, i could only see have that kind of gentle attention toward the pup...perhaps it even made a softer side of her emerge..a more maternal side. I totaly agree with you, I think Farkas would make an awesome dad, he's such a sweetheart ! I have no doubt he wouldn't mind looking after Faelan and Nadja...perhaps that is what he wants? hehe should Nadja let him :-P

      Thank you so much for your comment :-) !!

      It can be such a pain to take night shots. I've taken so many shots for this chapter alone, so many ended up turning horrible because you couldn't see anything. The image reduction sure isn't helping either, makes it really hard to get any good night shots or any dark shots.
  4. deleted1123719
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    Wow, what an intense chapter! You built the tension first with Nadja's dreams and the reactions of Ria and Njada to their new 'sister'. Then came the understone keep where I knew what she'd be offered (and had a sneaking suspicion she'd accept the 'gift')... then that dramatic first hunt and feed in the black of night. The addition of Faelan was a very sweet surprise - i wonder if the little wolf will bring some much needed balm to her wounded heart?

    And of course that final tense moment between Nadja and Farkas... amazing stuff hon. I'm off to the next chapter...
    1. Liadys
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      Nadja just can't catch a break from her dreams, they come and go as they please and hardly to show her pleasant stuff. I might of hinted a bit of what her choice would of been in her last chapter...maybe..a tiny itsy bit. I was really eager to write that scene with the little pup, i've had it planned for a while ! So i totaly spoiled myself with this chapter hehe. I'm sure Faelan will help some of her inner wounds to heal.

      I'll admit..i couldn't help myself either with that scene between Nadja and Farkas at the end. I just had to do it :-D. Things are sure gonna be very...interesting between those two now hehehehe

      Thank you for your comment dear ! I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter and hope you'll enjoy the next ;-)
  5. gucky2010
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    You see now a very speechless person..........me Great Story and wonderful Images. A brilliant Piece of Art and Storytelling.
    1. Liadys
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      Oh my !...thank you Gucky ! I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter !!!!
  6. Nataly1q2w3e4r5t
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    Awesome new chapter, so wonderfully written! Great shots too, I especially love the ones with Nadja and little wolf cub, Faelan!

    Poor Nadja, getting tormented by such terrible nightmares... seems like that what awaits Skyrim if Dragonborn will not interfere or be killed. Alduin, devouring first the souls and then the world itself... Farkas was sweet to inquire about her well being, he apparently sees to be very fond of her and not only in friendly way, as we will learn later in chapter. And Ria is very annoying with her gossiping, I agree with Nadja about her, it seems that Ria and Njada have nothing to do but gossip... I dislike them both.

    Loved the way you've described Skjor mysterious message and the description of Nadja into werewolf was amazing, so intense and detailed! And the scene where Nadja found Faelan was so touching! Her concern for poor cub, who was left all alone and her motherly attitude towards him. This adorable cub will certainly make her life brighter, it is great to have someone who loves you.
    And the bit with Nadja and Farkas was supper hot! Maybe her transformation has something to do with her sudden desire? Or maybe that desire was there all along but finally showed itself.. In any way, Nadja has super strong will to turn away from such temptation, guess that little Faelan was also the reason of it. I wonder how her relationship with Farkas will be developing...
    I look forward for continuation and thank you for sharing your wonderful work!
    1. Liadys
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      Poor Nadja indeed, No matter what seem like those nightmares and vision will always find her. It was indeed what i was trying to picture in this dream, what will surely come to pass without the intervention of the Dragonborn, Alduin's victory. Farkas inquiring about her well being is somewhat of his way to show he's there for her, even if just a shoulder to lean on...and because he is fond of her of course hehe. Feel like i'm a bit reproducing the typical highschool drama thing with Njada and Ria, oh well ! i think it's so hilarious !

      Nadja have a rather strong connection to nature and wild life, and Faelan cries made her maternal instinct emerge. This making her care very much for the adorable little pup. Faelan will have his role to play in her life...perhaps help her realize many things about her life as it is...and hopefully help doze down the hatred that burns in her heart still.

      Her transfomation have its part to play in her desire, now if it is because of it that she feels it or if it only enhanced it, she'll have to figure it out for herself. I doubt she wanted to resist the temptation but Faelan gave her a good reason to....and i don't think the pup wants to share his newly found mother with Farkas just yet hehe. Surely those events are gonna make things rather...interesting between Nadja and Farkas in the future..hehe

      Thank you Nataly dear for your comment ! Really happy you enjoyed this chapter ! :-)
  7. derek98
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    Lovely chapter Liadys.
    The Underforge scene was very well done. (Though I kept saying " Don't do it!" )
    Nice jealous tension between Nadja, Njada and Ria. And things are heating up nicely with Farkas, though if I were Faelen I'd steer clear of Farkas for a while after his untimely interruption!
    1. Liadys
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      Thank you my friend !

      Glad you enjoyed the underforge scene hehe, happy to see you are getting quite into the story . Njada hates the player right off the start, so i just kept that and made Ria the gossiping kind...and a little rivalry between the ladies always hilarious. Oh indeed, things are heating up very nicely with Farkas hehe....I just don't think Faelan wants to share his new found mommy with Farkas just yet
  8. Anataron
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    Great Chapter my friend! Love the way you described the mysterious manner in which Skjor introduces her to the Beastblood and that Shot of the cloudy full moon .. well done and perfectly Fitting. The Transformation itself you described very well; and the doubt she is having about it.
    Love the introduction of the Little Wolf aswell as the bit of closeness between Farkas and Nadja.

    And good Job on Ria .. hate her
    1. Liadys
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      Thank you my friend ! Glad you've liked this chapter ! I was dying to get to the little wolf cub scene. I've had it planned for a while now ! He's just sooooooooooooooo adorable ! The transformation scene wasn't exactly as how i imagined it in my head, but with the lack of words to describe what i had in mind..well it turned out pretty great anyways so i'm happy ! :-D. I do have to tease a bit with the scene with Farkas at the end hehe ...build some tension ..just because i'm an evil person hehe
  9. Kamikazekossori
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    It is unfortunate that her nights are haunted again by dark visions, the chaos of battle in front of her sleeping gaze. Nice to see that bit of concern Farkas has seeing she had something on her mind, not prying too much. I like that bit of tension you created within the companions, Ria and Njada not quite fond of her, good that Nadja ignores that kind of pettiness.

    It is a bit dangerous for her to have taken on the blood of a wolf with that fire in her heart, hope she will be able to control that savage side. Interesting what pulled her out of that first transformation, that sad cry of a wolf pup, she always has that close connection to nature, perhaps that will help keep her savage side in check.

    Was endearing how she cared for that little wolf, bringing him some food. Looks like her and Farkas really are getting close, sharing that little moment of tenderness though they were snapped out of it by the pup. A beautifully done chapter, Liadys ^^
    1. Liadys
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      It seems that no matter what these dark visions will always find her. Showing glimpses of what may come to pass in a very hazy manner. Deciphering such chaotic things is not always so easy for her. I think it's just Farkas way of showing her that he's there if she needs anything, even if its just a shoulder to lean on. Njada is utterly rude to the player when you join the Companions, figure i'd just reproduce that in the story....and i think Nadja finds her self too old to be bothered with that kind of drama.

      Can't be a very good thing that she let her hatred and desire for vengence decide to take on the blood of the beast. She might have trouble controlling that new savage nature. Perhaps it was a bit of her connection to nature to helped or the emergence of a more maternal instinct that made her snap out of it when she heard the poor wolf pup crying. Regardless, she'll have to face the concequences for her rash decision eventually...

      Concidering her connection with nature, she would of never left that little wolf fend on his own, knowing fully he's too young to survive on his own. Perhaps a bit of a motherly gesture she had feeding the pup. Ah yes, Nadja and Farkas are getting rather close. A little tease on my part hehe, i don't think that Faelan is ready to share his new mommy with Farkas just yet hehe :-)

      Thank you my friend ! I'm happy you liked this chapter :-D
  10. Amevenastral9
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    Ahh bravo Liadys! Loved this chapter! Jorrvaskr turned into quite the little hen house with the Ria's suspicious clucking. It was an awesome description of Nadja's transformation to Wolf and finding darling Faelan. Sooo want one of those ; ) And a perfect ending with that too close for comfort encounter with Farkas! Nadja has a Will of Iron to resist him..but I know it is best not to rush into these things...let that fire burn a little longer and things will get much hotter! ; )
    1. Liadys
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      Thank you Ameven dear ! Glad you enjoy this chapter ! Sure is interesting with all the little rumors going on hehe. Pretty satisfy with how Nadja's transformation turned out even if it wasn't exactly what i had pictured in my mind, but due to lack of word to express what i had in my head i went with that. Faelan is just so adorable !!!. I just wanted to tease a bit with the little encounter with Farkas, Nadja might have a will of iron to resist it...but for how long she'll be able to manage it ;-P now that's the question hehe.( Faelan had his part to play in her resisting as well hahahaha) I'm sure that fire will run pretty hot hehe

      Thank you dear for your comment and feedback :-D