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Hagravens are nasty and the number one reason I don't side with the Forsworn no matter how domestic they might seem at times. I am working on a story that started eons ago (about Hircine and how werebeasts came to be as well as Fenrirs true origin story - Hircine glossed over a lot of things) and Forsworn will be in that - at about the time they got corrupted by the Hags.
This was a great paced chapter with a nice mix of character work and some action with that foul hag. It does beg the question ... why is *he* helping them? I still say he should get one of their heads if he wants a cure
I'll be interested to read that storyline you've got brewing... Grim and Forsworn; bound to be a bloody storyline....
Thanks again hon and (hopefully) all will be revealed soon!!
Whatever you choose to do, I'm sure we'll like the results.
I'm also wondering why they got sent to a Forsworn camp as their first mission (beyond the game choosing it as a radiant location for this, anyway). As Araelia and Breskar said, a trial mission should be difficult -- but survivable.
I'm also wondering why Breskar has been following these two, though somehow I doubt he's a bounty hunter for them, as Arissa suspects.
Nicely done, both pics and story! I think I see why you're keeping with the preset you're using.
Their current weapons, in general are far too underpowered for what they are going up against.
Breskar must have some reason for saving their sweet little *sses ^^ more than once, but I really appreciate Arissa's cold and calculating distrust and suspicion of him, hopefully soon to be revealed as being misplaced....until they find out about his "beastly" side....^^
Endorsed. Many thanks, Jess, and cheers, dear!
Hehe, seriously though, one does have to wonder at the thought process behind the companions sending them to clear out a den of forsworn this early into their apprenticeship (and that LITERALLY was the first quest I got when I joined the companions)!
As for Bres, well, he has his reasons...
Love this story!!!!
The description of what lied beneath the Forsworn camp is masterful, the disgust sisters felt is almost palpable and it is interesting to see the familiar beasts of Skyrim from the point of view of those who don't know about them... it is like starting Skyrim all over again, feeling the same excitement.
Love the battle and apparently Breskar once again decided to be a knight in shining armor for Arissa and Araelia... but I can't understand his reasons... at least for now. He wants revenge but what part he wants sisters to play in it? His bitterness over Companions was described perfectly in his sentence that what good is trial if the apprentices are killed in it? And it is a very good question... because apparently these Forsworn along with hideous hograven were a bit to much for two rogues who have seen only Cyrodiil and only recently tried to adjust to Skyrim...
Now there will be three of them going to face the dangers. I am so looking forward for continuation and thank you for sharing your wonderful work!
I always wonder why the forsworn have to surround themselves with such yucky stuff (bowls of eyeballs and goat head on spikes)... imagine the smell!! That's what I was trying to convey, and you know you're right; writing about skyrim from an outsiders point is fun and maki me interested in playing that way too. I'm really all about realism as I play these characters (making them stop and eat and drink etc). It's great fun!
As for Breskar's "timely" return... more on that soon! Thanks as ever for following my little tales dear one!
I like how you described the unsettling appearance so vividly, seeing one for the fist time must be quite horrible indeed, that screech filling those halls. Again I like how they worked together, though it seems Breskar arrived at the right time once again, I had an inkling that he might follow them.
Interesting that Araelia sees some part of him to trust though her sister is very supsicious, protective as she is. I am curious to see what else they will find in those ruins and what reasons Breskar has to help them, a wonderfully done chapter, Jess
Oh hagraven's creep me out totally so there was not much imagination needed to describe them! I remember he first time I came across one, I was so horrified it killed my character!
And Bres... good timing? Or something else?
Thanks for commenting my sweet.