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19 comments

  1. deleted1123719
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    Aw... that was a sad ending. Great chapter though; I like how Lubis is struggling with her nature to do the 'right' thing and honour her fallen siblings' memories. Very touching having that flashback in there and it's telling that in the end she DID do the right thing and turned away from the mercenary. Nice work.
    1. Liadys
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      Thank you Jess, glad you liked this chapter ! Changing one self is very hard and requires alot of conviction and motivation. I think their memories gives her some of that conviction and motivation for a change, only time will tell if it'll be enough to stay motivated about keep going down this new path.

      She did one step in the good direction, lets hope she keeps on walking the same direction
  2. gucky2010
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    A new perfect and brilliant Work my dear
    1. frank213
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      I agree with you
    2. Liadys
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      Thank you my friends !
  3. Nataly1q2w3e4r5t
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    This wasn't short or terrible! Such beautifully written, emotional and wonderful chapter, giving great insight in Lubris thoughts and heart. The shots are great too, very expressive!
    I totally agree on Lubris opinion about Windhelm, I can't imagine someone who doesn't share Stormcloaks politics could live there happily and apparently Lubris is far from happy, her days filled with hard work with gossip being an only entertainment... I am glad that she did not give in to her basic instincts with stranger, usually nothing good comes from such dalliances.
    The memories of Lubris were very lovely and tender, no wonder that she doesn't want to betray such memory as the time when she was truly happy...
    1. Liadys
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      Thank you Nataly ! i'm glad you liked this chapter!

      Living in Solitude for years ( which is for one under imperial control and two its way more lively ), Then Markarth for a few months (If i recall correctly, it's also under imperial control), Windhelm is def not a place she would enjoy living in....on top of being forced to live a life that is not really her own. She endures it because her sister Sigyn was hired by that side..

      Over indulgence of some dark and basic needs as such, not an healthy behavior for sure. I'd classify it as rather self-destructive. Succombing to it would of been like spitting on those tender memories she have of her lost siblings.
  4. derek98
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    What do you mean: terrible?
    That was a great insight into Lubis.
    I share her dislike of Windhelm and politics, my kinda girl!
    1. Liadys
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      Because i felt terrible when i was writing this, so i came to believe about anything i did was as terrible as i felt D:

      Well i'm glad you enjoyed this chapter and the insights provided about Lubis
  5. aok
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    I thought this to be a very emotional and insightful chapter! Great work!
    1. Liadys
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      Thank you
  6. Kamikazekossori
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    It is true that city is as cold as the wind that whistles over its walls, a solitary place for one that does not share the narrow views of some of its people, one living a life not really her own. Was very interesting to see this glimpse into her thoughts, those memories and emotions stirred by the echo of past self, seems she has left much unsaid to her siblings. There is nothing terrible about this chapter, it has some great emotion in the words and the images, really enjoyed it
    1. Liadys
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      Thank you my friend, i'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. I haven't been feeling my best so i thought the same for my writing. Or just my perfectionist side that kicked in ? Living a life not her own, it resume very well Lubis situation. She have to go by an other name then her own and pretend to enjoy a lifestyle that isn't her own. Although the memories of her lost siblings is stirring that need to change things around in her life...Indeed, much was left unsaid.

  7. wolfgrimdark
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    Ah this was actually rather sweet and shows a nice side of Lubis and her missing brother Talian. Rather tender and I also enjoyed the wonderful interaction with Stenvar It was nice to hear the inner thoughts of Lubis and what is going on with her. Some very nice images as well Lia!
    1. Liadys
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      Thank you my friend, glad you liked this small chapter about Lubis. The scene wasn't gonna be with Stenvar, but the entire time i was taking the screenshot, he kept on bragging. So i changed my mind and picked him to hit on Lubis...seemed the type !

      I really wanted to have some sweet childhood memories in this chapter as well, it can't always be all sad !
  8. Anataron
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    Well, I have to say. This chapter is far away from being terrible! It is amazingly written how Lubis feels the nonexistent hospitality in Windhelm and how she wonders about the rumors she hears and the Dumner Bard singing there. Great writing about her Feeling towards her Siblings, and finding strength in the memories of better Times. Can't wait for the next one, dear friend! Very well done!
    1. Liadys
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      Thank you my friend ! I've had the blues and didn't feel at my best while writing :/ but i'm glad you enjoyed it all the same . Lubis would be unhappy in a city such a Windhelm, being used to a city as lively as Solitude, Markarth a little xenophobiac but still more lively then Windhelm.

      She's struggling against her own nature but find some strength and courage from the memories of her siblings, to be a better person.


      I'll try to make the next chapter more exciting
  9. Amevenastral9
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    NO lack of heart here and definitely no need to be sorry! This is a very well done little chapter ; )). I really got a good sense of Lubis and her unhappiness in Windhelm and in general. I really liked the flashback with Nadja and Talian, especially when she and Talian escaped the arguing to find their solace. Very endearing Liadys!
    1. Liadys
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      Thank you dear, i'm glad you found this little chapter to your liking . I've had the blues and i thought it showed alot in my writing, at least thats how it felt when i was writing it. I would see Lubis being very unhappy being away from the lifestyle she's actually used it. And lets not kid ourselves, Windhelm is not the most lively of places. Well the funny thing is that Talian and Lubis are something like 15 years apart. And well Talian being his normal careing self, would visit his younger siblings...and i doubt he'd leave any of them listening to an argument between their parents. I do portrait him kind of like the big teddy bear