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Hidden Wars - INTRO

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14 comments

  1. AaronOfMpls
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    Well done, Shutt3r, both pics and story! I'll have to come back to this if you post more.

    (And thanks, wolfgrimdark, for linking to this!)
    1. Shutt3r
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      Thanks a lot for the compliment AoM!
  2. DiscipleOfCarnage
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    This is a really fine story with some really fine images; I especially love how you did the battle between the Atronachs and Spriggans -now that's some great screen-archery my friend!

    1. Shutt3r
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      Many thanks DoC! Glad you enjoyed the set!
  3. wolfgrimdark
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    Oh this was simply excellent Shuttr!! Since English is not your main language I focused instead on the ideas and content of your story while reading it and was enthralled at the idea of a secret (hidden) war between the two races. Anja is also a wonderful character. I think what I liked about her most was her simple nature and how she grew up as an alchemist. Losing her parents early was hard but not overly violent or horrible. Life in the orphanage is not easy and yet she managed to get through it fairly well and in-tact.

    I also enjoyed all the subtle plot hints. Why did her parents vanish? Who is the strange shadow man that helped her at the orphanage? What are the Spriggans doing to her?

    My guesses (don't spoil the surprise though) are - her parents were involved in the hidden war for some reason; the shadow man might be her father only living as a spriggan; the spriggans are going to bring her back to life ... perhaps as one of their own.

    Eager to see what comes next! PS - Sent you a PM
    1. Shutt3r
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      Not bad....really not bad!

      Thank you very much for stopping by to read this rather "superficial" little story chapter and giving your feedback!
  4. derek98
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    Excellent introduction. Nice back story, and Anja is lovely. The shots of the Spriggens materialising are superb. Well done!
    1. Shutt3r
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      Thank you Derek, glad you enjoyed the Introducing chapter.


  5. CalmDragon
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    you can also press on the middle button of the mouse!
    1. Shutt3r
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      Not everyone has a middle button...
  6. Amevenastral9
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    A lovely first chapter! Anja seems a wonderful person with her love for nature and herbal majicks! All of the images are captured perfectly but your battle between the Flame Atronach and the Spriggan was impressive! I also love that the Spriggan recognized Anja'a worth and set out to heal her. I cannot wait to see what happens in the next Chapter! ; ) Marvelous work
    1. Shutt3r
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      Oh dear! Thank you so much for the very kind words!!!
      I will not tell too much about what's coming next, but she is going to change (externally). I've made custom skin texture just for her....she looks awesome!

      I think the next chapter will be a little bit shorter.

      p.s.: Please don't hesitate to tell me if there are heavy grammatical errors....i need to learn!

      Thank you again!
  7. Anataron
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    Very well done Start to a Story that looks very interesting. Great Ideas on her Background and upbringing, how she feels towards other People after her time in Riften and after not recieving help from the officials to find her parents. Love the ideas you had with the Spriggans and the Flame Atronachs. Looking Forward to reading more!
    1. Shutt3r
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      Thank you very much for your feedback, Anataron! Hope it is (at least) understandable.-(o.0)-